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Here's some of my part.

"Alright class," Miss Robin continued, "your homework for tomorrow is-"
R-i-i-i-i-n-n-n-g-g-g! The kids jumped from their seats, eager to get out of the classroom before the homework sheets were passed around.
     In a flurry of movement and yells as kids fell over, the room was nearly empty, except for the kids who had dropped their papers and were hurrying to pick them up, and Trevor.
     Trevor had dirty blonde hair, and large brown eyes. Freckles spotted his face in various places, but he had little acne and chocolate tan skin. He didn't wear glasses, but was a school maniac, and would do anything for more information to squeeze in his already crammed brain. He sat at his desk expectantly, oblivious to the hurried departure of the other students. Miss Robin looked up, bundles of papers held tightly in her hand. Looking around the empty classroom, she sighed sadly, but noticing Trevor, broke into a pleased grin.
     "Trevor! I see you're the only one in the classroom, again," she surveyed the classroom again and took a deep breath. Trevor stood, and collected his pre-test papers from the teacher before smiling and walking out the door with his backpack swung over his shoulder. Most people that saw him without knowing him personally would assume he was a normal kid. He ran marathons, but was terrible at skateboarding, and couldn't ride one if his life depended on it. So once they got to know him, others would normally stay away from him, except one.
     
Camilla catches up with him (They already know each other and are friends maybe, if madbunny agrees.), Skipping to the ant part...

Trevor studied the alleyway as he and Camilla walked through it. He could see it was a good shortcut, but that didn't stop him from getting the chills. The path cut through two abandoned apartment buildings, with their windows closed and the lights out. He moved faster as the cold dank air pressed against his skin. But something was wrong.
     There was a scuttling sound behind them, and Trevor spun around and gasped. A large ant, bigger then any insect he'd ever seen, was crawling on six legs toward them, its pinchers clicking together.
     The ant marched toward Trevor, and he backed against the wall. He tried to run, but his feet felt rooted to the ground. He turned and his eyes went wide as he saw Camilla wasn't standing next to him anymore.

Ok guys, I have three ways that this thing can die by, or we can mix them all together.

1. Camilla turns into a tiger and destroys it easily.
2. Trevor involuntary turns invisible and he shocks the ant several times until the ant is knocked out, and then they all run.
3. Ula somehow appears and defeats it with her powers.

I need your help guys to destroy this ant thingy! Also, maybe you guys can join your perspectives about the ant also?

Last edited by Nomolos (2013-04-05 19:05:55)

Nomolos wrote:

Here's some of my part.

"Alright class," Miss Robin continued, "your homework for tomorrow is-"
R-i-i-i-i-n-n-n-g-g-g! The kids jumped from their seats, eager to get out of the classroom before the homework sheets were passed around.
     In a flurry of movement and yells as kids fell over, the room was nearly empty, except for the kids who had dropped their papers and were hurrying to pick them up, and Trevor.
     Trevor had dirty blonde hair, and large brown eyes. Freckles spotted his face in various places, but he had little acne and chocolate tan skin. He didn't wear glasses, but was a school maniac, and would do anything for more information to squeeze in his already crammed brain. He sat at his desk expectantly, oblivious to the hurried departure of the other students. Miss Robin looked up, bundles of papers held tightly in her hand. Looking around the empty classroom, she sighed sadly, but noticing Trevor, broke into a pleased grin.
     "Trevor! I see you're the only one in the classroom, again," she surveyed the classroom again and took a deep breath. Trevor stood, and collected his pre-test papers from the teacher before smiling and walking out the door with his backpack swung over his shoulder. Most people that saw him without knowing him personally would assume he was a normal kid. He ran marathons, but was terrible at skateboarding, and couldn't ride one if his life depended on it. So once they got to know him, others would normally stay away from him, except one.
     
Camilla catches up with him (They already know each other and are friends maybe, if madbunny agrees.), Skipping to the ant part...

Trevor studied the alleyway as he and Camilla walked through it. He could see it was a good shortcut, but that didn't stop him from getting the chills. The path cut through two abandoned apartment buildings, with their windows closed and the lights out. He moved faster as the cold dank air pressed against his skin. But something was wrong.
     There was a scuttling sound behind them, and Trevor spun around and gasped. A large ant, bigger then any insect he'd ever seen, was crawling on six legs toward them, its pinchers clicking together.
     The ant marched toward Trevor, and he backed against the wall. He tried to run, but his feet felt rooted to the ground. He turned and his eyes went wide as he saw Camilla wasn't standing next to him anymore.

Ok guys, I have three ways that this thing can die by, or we can mix them all together.

1. Camilla turns into a tiger and destroys it easily.
2. Trevor involuntary turns invisible and he shocks the ant several times until the ant is knocked out, and then they all run.
3. Ula somehow appears and defeats it with her powers.

I need your help guys to destroy this ant thingy! Also, maybe you guys can join your perspectives about the ant also?

nice 

but, they don't know about their powers yet. and they haven't done this before. so the ant should be hard to destroy. and i dont think static electricity could knock out a myrmeke    otherwise,       

Mel dropped the can. She took a deep breath, trying to calm herself. “I—I don’t know.” She admitted. “That was scary.” Then she realized something. This was all just a dream! She could have fallen asleep…
No. The fear had been much too real, and the feeling of the metallic can hadn’t been like anything she could feel in a dream. “I’m Melody by the way.”  She said. “You can call me Mel, though. All my friends do.” She didn’t add that her only friend was Mr. Morris, the librarian.
“Ethan.” The boy held out his hand for a shake. “I just moved here from Canada.”
“I know.”  Mel didn’t tell him what she had seen, with his eyes. If he ended up being a friend, her first, she didn’t want him thinking she was crazy.
“So,” he said, inspecting the damage. “Do you think the librarian will notice?”

Should I add more?

Last edited by Waffle27 (2013-04-05 19:55:02)

Waffle27 wrote:

Mel dropped the can. She took a deep breath, trying to calm herself. “I—I don’t know.” She admitted. “That was scary.” Then she realized something. This was all just a dream! She could have fallen asleep…
No. The fear had been much too real, and the feeling of the metallic can hadn’t been like anything she could feel in a dream. “I’m Melody by the way.”  She said. “You can call me Mel, though. All my friends do.” She didn’t add that her only friend was Mr. Morris, the librarian.
“Ethan.” The boy held out his hand for a shake. “I just moved here from Canada.”
“I know.”  Mel didn’t tell him what she had seen, with his eyes. If he ended up being a friend, her first, she didn’t want him thinking she was crazy.
“So,” he said, inspecting the damage. “DO you think the librarian will notice?”

Should I add more?

i think that's the perfect ending. you shouldn't add more for now. anyways, it's awesome 
but the capitalized DO makes it sound like Ethan already asked the question 

Last edited by destructo-serpent (2013-04-05 19:48:52)

Yeah, the DO was a mistake. I press shift for caps lock, and sometimes hold it too long. I'll edit that real quick.

destructo-serpent wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

i think that's the perfect ending. you shouldn't add more for now. anyways, it's awesome 
but the capitalized DO makes it sound like Ethan already asked the question 

I think the DO was a mistake.

Also, how about I change Trevor's static electricity to real electricity? If I don't then Trev won't have a single fighting weapon.

k then. but real electricity can't shut down electrical devices. unless it's too powerful and overloads it. but if the real electricity is too strong, then it will be too OP for a small power. how much electricity is lethal to a human? one amp? then how about your guy can summon ten amps of electricity? not too powerful?\

btw, the armor comes with weps if you want.

Ten amps of electricity sounds fine. And Trevor can electrocute devices to shut them down.

BEHOLD:


?Thoughts?

I love the reflection and the grass!

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this version has a link.

Nomos Sh and shadows Sh are like mismatching puzzle pieces, (i felt like a metaphor  ) how are we going to make them fit?

Waffle27 wrote:

We also need Madbunny's, which could make them fit somehow. Like Camilla attacks from behind the ant, and it turns and she runs and then they run into the forest and Ula sees them and helps out?

I can always change my current part. I dont care :3

i have an idea. how about fifteen or so myrmekes attack them, but then the yugolunite appears, freezes time, gives tham armor, tells them about their powers and that they are an anceient race, yak yak yak, then he dies, time unfreezes, and they have to fight fifteen myrmekes, but now they have powers and armor. who likes?

destructo-serpent wrote:

i have an idea. how about fifteen or so myrmekes attack them, but then the yugolunite appears, freezes time, gives tham armor, tells them about their powers and that they are an anceient race, yak yak yak, then he dies, time unfreezes, and they have to fight fifteen myrmekes, but now they have powers and armor. who likes?

I like!