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Waffle27 · 2013-04-03 22:18:12

I think so. Since ieu hasn't responded yet, Im assuming he doesnt want to... hmm

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-03 22:19:02

Waffle27 wrote:
I think so. Since ieu hasn't responded yet, Im assuming he doesnt want to...

i don't think (s)he's been on. but idk.
so we can start big_smile

nomo, are you working on SS chapter 2?

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destructo-serpent · 2013-04-03 23:14:10

how should we start the story?

Waffle27 · 2013-04-03 23:15:15

destructo-serpent wrote:
how should we start the story?

We could have a...uhm, no, hm...idk. We shouldnt do the history thing though, becase these histories arent as interesting.

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-03 23:16:09

Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
how should we start the story?
We could have a...uhm, no, hm...idk. We shouldnt do the history thing though, becase these histories arent as interesting.

yeah. long and boring. maybe them meeting

Waffle27 · 2013-04-03 23:17:42

destructo-serpent wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
how should we start the story?
We could have a...uhm, no, hm...idk. We shouldnt do the history thing though, becase these histories arent as interesting.
yeah. long and boring. maybe them meeting

Mm-hm. One of them who just moved could be busy looking at their schedule, then someone bumps into them and they get mad and there power peeks out or something.

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-03 23:20:31

Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:

We could have a...uhm, no, hm...idk. We shouldnt do the history thing though, becase these histories arent as interesting.
yeah. long and boring. maybe them meeting
Mm-hm. One of them who just moved could be busy looking at their schedule, then someone bumps into them and they get mad and there power peeks out or something.

hm.... maybe Ethan could do that, and then whoever bumped him sees a flicker of flame in his hand or something, but he doesn't see it, then whoever did it backs away or something.

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-03 23:29:08

or Trevor does that, then whoever gets an electrical shock?

Waffle27 · 2013-04-03 23:30:49

Yeah, something like that, and then the other kids hear rumors and are scared, but maybe the other main charries sympathize and be nice to him/her whoever we choose.

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-03 23:33:43

Waffle27 wrote:
Yeah, something like that, and then the other kids hear rumors and are scared, but maybe the other main charries sympathize and be nice to him/her whoever we choose.

then we should have Trevor. Ethan probably wouldn't trust someone who suddenly started being nice.

Waffle27 · 2013-04-03 23:35:46

destructo-serpent wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
Yeah, something like that, and then the other kids hear rumors and are scared, but maybe the other main charries sympathize and be nice to him/her whoever we choose.
then we should have Trevor. Ethan probably wouldn't trust someone who suddenly started being nice.

All of your characters are very suspicous aren't they? Mel would be like..."Um...Okayyyyy..." In real life though, I would probably just respond like, "yeah," "No," or "Huh." because I dont talk a lot.

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-03 23:37:22

Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
Yeah, something like that, and then the other kids hear rumors and are scared, but maybe the other main charries sympathize and be nice to him/her whoever we choose.
then we should have Trevor. Ethan probably wouldn't trust someone who suddenly started being nice.
All of your characters are very suspicous aren't they? Mel would be like..."Um...Okayyyyy..." In real life though, I would probably just respond like, "yeah," "No," or "Huh." because I dont talk a lot.

yeah. they are. less chances to get surprised. i would probably ask what they wanted if someone suddenly started being nice to me XD

Waffle27 · 2013-04-03 23:39:50

Whenever I write a book, most of the time my charries are, yeah, suspicous, or innocent and follow the strange man and then are like..."What the..." when they leap out at them with a gun. The second option actually makes the reader expect a surprise, then its funny to give them no surprise. Actually, a lot of my charries are a mixture of suspicous and innocent.

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-03 23:44:25

Waffle27 wrote:
Whenever I write a book, most of the time my charries are, yeah, suspicous, or innocent and follow the strange man and then are like..."What the..." when they leap out at them with a gun. The second option actually makes the reader expect a surprise, then its funny to give them no surprise. Actually, a lot of my charries are a mixture of suspicous and innocent.

this is getting kind of offtopic. and i cant think of how to reply to that tongue
should we wait for nomo to do the part, or look at his bio and do it ourselves, and (s)he can edit it when (s)he gets on?

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destructo-serpent · 2013-04-03 23:50:26

destructo-serpent wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
Whenever I write a book, most of the time my charries are, yeah, suspicous, or innocent and follow the strange man and then are like..."What the..." when they leap out at them with a gun. The second option actually makes the reader expect a surprise, then its funny to give them no surprise. Actually, a lot of my charries are a mixture of suspicous and innocent.
this is getting kind of offtopic. and i cant think of how to reply to that
should we wait for nomo to do the part, or look at his bio and do it ourselves, and (s)he can edit it when (s)he gets on?

maybe it would be fairer to do it and let him/her edit it, or else (s)he'll have to do SS and SH hmm

Waffle27 · 2013-04-03 23:55:51

destructo-serpent wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
Whenever I write a book, most of the time my charries are, yeah, suspicous, or innocent and follow the strange man and then are like..."What the..." when they leap out at them with a gun. The second option actually makes the reader expect a surprise, then its funny to give them no surprise. Actually, a lot of my charries are a mixture of suspicous and innocent.
this is getting kind of offtopic. and i cant think of how to reply to that
should we wait for nomo to do the part, or look at his bio and do it ourselves, and (s)he can edit it when (s)he gets on?
maybe it would be fairer to do it and let him/her edit it, or else (s)he'll have to do SS and SH

I don't know. Maybe we should ask them when they get back on. I think they would want to do their part. Maybe it could be Ethan, but...idk.

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-03 23:56:42

Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
this is getting kind of offtopic. and i cant think of how to reply to that
should we wait for nomo to do the part, or look at his bio and do it ourselves, and (s)he can edit it when (s)he gets on?
maybe it would be fairer to do it and let him/her edit it, or else (s)he'll have to do SS and SH
I don't know. Maybe we should ask them when they get back on. I think they would want to do their part. Maybe it could be Ethan, but...idk.

yeah, it could be Ethan... i(also)dk

maybe it should be Ethan, to get it done faster??

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Waffle27 · 2013-04-03 23:58:47

destructo-serpent wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:

maybe it would be fairer to do it and let him/her edit it, or else (s)he'll have to do SS and SH
I don't know. Maybe we should ask them when they get back on. I think they would want to do their part. Maybe it could be Ethan, but...idk.
yeah, it could be Ethan... i(also)dk

maybe it should be Ethan, to get it done faster??

Yeah, probably. But instead of getting pity, maybe Trevor has had similar experiences, and Ula and Trevor were already friends? I dont know. We'll have to check in with Shadow and Nomo.

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-04 00:01:40

hey nomo, escriba su capítulo de SS pronto!
hey nomo, write your chapter of SS soon!

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-04 00:05:01

hm... k, i can write the first part then. (though i may not finish it tonight. i have homework) what should happen? maybe a bully bumps him, then his eyes flash gold (like an eagles) and they get into a fight? (where Ethan would win, since hes a black belt big_smile )

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Waffle27 · 2013-04-04 00:09:51

destructo-serpent wrote:
hm... k, i can write the first part then. what should happen? maybe a bully bumps him, then his eyes flash gold (like an eagles) and they get into a fight? (where Ethan would win, since hes a black belt )

That sounds good. The chapter order would be what?

-D serpent
-?
-?
-?
-?

madbunnygal · 2013-04-04 00:10:42

What did I miss? smile

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-04 00:12:36

Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
hm... k, i can write the first part then. what should happen? maybe a bully bumps him, then his eyes flash gold (like an eagles) and they get into a fight? (where Ethan would win, since hes a black belt )
That sounds good. The chapter order would be what?

-D serpent
-Waffle
-Shadow
-Nomo
-madbunny

in order of activity

Waffle27 · 2013-04-04 00:12:38

madbunnygal wrote:
What did I miss?

Nothin' much.

destructo-serpent · 2013-04-04 00:14:56

k. now i have to juggle online spanish, foruming, and writing. no prob. if i had two brains, six arms, three keyboards, and two mouses big_smile

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