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madbunnygal wrote:

OK what am I doing now? 

We're making charrie sheets for the Superhuman idea. See the form Lund gave us. (Gah, stupid 60 second rule)

Name: Katrina
Nicknames: Stripes, Kitty, Cat-girl
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Race: Part Tiger
Appearance: Has long brown hair that has streaks of white and black dye. Wears a dress that has a short bottom which has tiger stripes on it. Wears boot-heels.
Personality: Doesn't care about anyone. She used to be a model. Looks prettier than what she is on the inside.
Power 1 (Big): Can turn into a tiger, and have the abilities a tiger has.
Power 2 (Small): Can turn into other big cats. (This can only last 30 mins)
Power 3 (Small):
History: She used to be part of the circus (As a tiger. They didn't know she was human). She got kicked out, and decided to show the human part of herself. She became a really famous model. Her parents abandoned her when they realised she was part tiger.
Other:


Is this alright?

madbunnygal wrote:

Name: Katrina
Nicknames: Stripes, Kitty, Cat-girl
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Race: Part Tiger
Appearance: Has long brown hair that has streaks of white and black dye. Wears a dress that has a short bottom which has tiger stripes on it. Wears boot-heels.
Personality: Doesn't care about anyone. She used to be a model. Looks prettier than what she is on the inside.
Power 1 (Big): Can turn into a tiger, and have the abilities a tiger has.
Power 2 (Small): Can turn into other big cats. (This can only last 30 mins)
Power 3 (Small):
History: She used to be part of the circus (As a tiger. They didn't know she was human). She got kicked out, and decided to show the human part of herself. She became a really famous model. Her parents abandoned her when they realised she was part tiger.
Other:


Is this alright?

Yup, this works! The only turning into another big cat for 30 mins is interesting, it would be funny if she got trapped in a cage or something, and turned back into a human

madbunnygal wrote:

Name: Camilla
Nicknames: Stripes, Kitty, Cat-girl
Age: 13
Gender: Female
Race: Part Tiger
Appearance: Has long brown hair that has streaks of white and black dye. Wears a dress that has a short bottom which has tiger stripes on it. Wears boot-heels.
Personality: Doesn't care about anyone. She used to be a model. Looks prettier than what she is on the inside.
Power 1 (Big): Can turn into a tiger, and have the abilities a tiger has.
Power 2 (Small): Can turn into other big cats. (This can only last 30 mins)
Power 3 (Small): Can talk to animals in the cat family.
History: She used to be part of the circus (As a tiger. They didn't know she was human). She got kicked out, and decided to show the human part of herself. She became a really famous model. Her parents abandoned her when they realised she was part tiger.
Other:

Changed a few things

How is she part tiger? Genetic engenring? If not, her mother would have to be a tiger and her father a human (father can't be the tiger in this situation. The 'process' isn't possible for a male tiger and female human.)
Otherwise, I like it.

ur AN was good 

i added my bio to wiki.

@waffle
what's my section about?

destructo-serpent wrote:

i added my bio to wiki.

@waffle
what's my section about?

Him in the swamp,  and the cameraman getting attacked.

We could always make up a town name, unless someone has ideas.

Last edited by Waffle27 (2013-04-02 00:23:57)

destructo-serpent wrote:

somewhere big. how about Miami?

Okay, I geuss so.

or maybe Denver. big, but not really massive.

yeah, i vote for denver.

now he has powers i want. he can fly, like it want to able to do for, well, the freedom. and he can shooot fireballs which gos well with the wings. and i want to be good at parkour.

Here is the first section of my AN:

[Warning: If you hate horror don't read! Also, this still needs editing (some stuff go autocorrected, I think]


A tall girl with raven hair stood at the school entrance. She was fourteen years old, soon to turn fifteen. The girl was waiting for her boyfriend so they could go have a picnic in the forest near her home.

The sun was high in the sky, with barely any clouds. Kids ran out the doors, probably to go swimming. Today was the last day of school, why not celebrate?

The girl finally caught sight of a boy. He was fifteen, with night black hair and brown eyes. He walked towards the girl and said, "Miara! I've missed you so much!"

Miara rolled her eyes, "You saw me at lunch." Her voice didn't hide her amusement. The boy laughed.

"Seriously though, History was more tortuous when it was the only thing standing between us and a good day."

"Well, come on Ezio." They both laughed. Miara calling her boyfriend, who's real name was Stephan, Ezio was an inside joke. Both of them had an obsession with Assassins Creed. To add to this, both of them were learning Parkour and Freerunning, Assassin style.

Miara pulled Stephan along the side walk, "Come on, I need to get the stuff from my house."

Soon they were at Miara's house, which forced them to end their conversation about Minecraft. Stephan and Miara walked inside, and began to gather sandwich material and salad. They also packed a camera, as the forest held some pretty flowers that always made for lovely photos.

Within a half an hour they had arrived to the edge of the woods. A conversation about how Conner Kenway would use the trees to his advantage. Miara insisted that he would climb up a large oak and use the rope dart, however Stephan waved this away, saying the Tomahawk Kill would be more effective. They soon reached a clearing and sat sown to pull everything out from a plastic bag.

It was already around five a clock, and the clouds had already covered the sun. The forest began to grow dark. The couple however, didn't notice. The began taking videos of each other using some free running moves on the trees, ' for the heck of it'. They contuened until Miara suddenly said, "That's weird. My camera shows static around the edge-"

She dropped the camera and covered her ears as it began to make a weird noise. Stephan, who also had is ears covered, came over to her. The camera stopped. Stephan said, "That was weird."

He looked up, "You know what, it is getting dark though. Let's go home before we miss the raid tonight." Miara nodded. The raid was, of course, in a video game called World of Warcraft. Tonight they were going to help a newer player with Naxxramas.

They packed up, and began to leave when Stephan's cell phone begun to ring. He answered it, "Hello?" He hung up. Miara looked at him, "Who was it?"

"Just static."

Miara nodded. Wh was the electronics being so weird?

They kept walking. It was now around seven o clock, and it was very dark.

"Why is it so dark?" Stephan said.

Miara shrugged, "We are in forest, it is cloudy, and it getting late. Don't worry, well get home."

And then she screamed. The ground in front of Miara had collapsed, and a shape began to rise out of it.

Stephan pulled Miara back and pushed her behind him as the shape was recognized through the dust.

It was a reptile head. The scales were a deep blue with lighter blues accents. The head was the size of a small care. The eyes were large, gold, orbs with cat like slits. The nostrils flared, and the creature bared knife long fangs. It swerved its long neck, trying to get a good look at them.

A powerful feminine voice came out of the mouth, yet her mouth didn't move. The voice sent vibrations through the ground and the human's bodies.

"You dare come here, so close to my nest? You humans are fools. Dragons are not meant to be caught and placed in cages, yet you insist on finding us and stealing our eggs. You have nearly forgotten, yet you always find us."

Miara spoke, carefully and timidly, "We didn't know dragons existed... But still, we would never tell, ever. We weren't going to steal your eggs, either... We just want to go home." Miara started crying, and Stephan hugged her, brushing her hair with his hands. "it's going to be ok," He whispered.

Stephan was, too, terrified. He didn't want to show it though, he didn't want Miara to get any more scared.

The dragon spoke again, "I guess your right. You wouldn't tell. However, my eggs hatch today and they need food. Why let prey go?"

Claws flashed out of the pit, grabbing Miara and Stephan. They pulled them into the pit.

The pit opened into a huge cave. Hundreds of feet tall, infact. The dragon had been on her hind legs, using her tail to balance.

"Look what you made me do to the ceiling." The dragon hissed. She flicked her long tail, and the rocks went back to how they were before she broke through.

Surprisingly, the cave wasn't dark. There was an orb in the wall, castin out light. Miara turned to see the dragon, now that nothing stopped her. She squirmed in the dragons claws to see a large body, with leathery wings folded, spines running down the back, and gems... Hundreds of gems. Sapphires, rubies, diamonds, all covering the dragons belly.

The dragon dropped the humans, 5 feet to the ground. Miara was lucky, she landed on a pile of grass. However, her love fell on a rock. The sickening sound of something breaking filled the air. As the dragon walked past them to the middle of the cavern, Miara ran to Stephan.

"No... No... No..." His legs were bent in such a horrible way. His breath was in shallow gasps.

Miara bent over him, "Stephan, you can't die, not yet! I haven't told you I love you enough, we haven't gotten maried, we haven't grown old..." Her tears landed on his face. He looked up at her and smiled.

"You've done everything. I love you too. I always will. No matter what, I always will." His eyes closed.

Miara stood up and turned towards the dragon, "Why did he die? You should have let him go! Killed me! Why?" She shrieked.

The dragon turned, "Because you alone aren't enough food for little ones."
Her voice seeped amusement. The dragon contuined, "Don't worry. I haven't finished playing with you two. Infact, we haven't begun. Look here, they are hatching!"

In front of the dragon was a huge nest, full of five eggs. Each had huge cracks, and Miara could see something inside.

After a moment, the eggs all burst. Wolf-sized hatchlings lay on the ground. They appeared to have leather like skin, the color of their mothers scales. Their mother began to speak, "Erysi,Ymi Elytlm Senos, deygh t'fyst."

The hatchling stood up quickly, and turned towards Miara and her dead love. She screamed, and began to climb a wall. She reached a ledge before they reached her.

The mother let out a laughing noise. She whispered something and energy bloomed around Stephan. His legs returned to normal, blood disappeared from he ground. His eyes opened. He stood. He turned.

And the hatchlings turned too. They ran towards Stephan. Miara had to watch the one she loved most die again? She was shocked, was he alive? What was happening?

Stephan began to run from the hatchlings, yet they were faster. One was leading the others, and prepared to pounce towards Stephan. The dragonling leaped towards Stephan, and tackled him to the floor. It bared long fangs, seeping with some green liquid. The other young dragons gathered round Stephan, watching their 'leader'. The lead dragon let the venom drop onto the human's face, where it slid down to his chest.

Then the dragon let a spark slip from its mouth. Stephan's face was englufed it flame. The predators bared down and began ripping at the human, blood splattered the floor. Eventually the screams faded.

Now it was time for another death. The dragons turned, blood covered faces looking up at Miara. After a moment they were suddenly under the ledge, pouncing at her. And one caught her. She fell down with the hatchling, screaming.

The mother dragon spoke, watching from the shadows, "My children, already good hunters, you will be good soldiers for the rebellion against the humans."

Miara was only concours of the feeling of her insides touching the aid, the sensation of a face being ripped, of a bone being chewed on. Of a life being brutally torn from a body.

Oh, great thanks  , I was about to go to sleep...
Jk, that was great! A little confusing, but that made it scarier, good job!