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lundfamily3 wrote:

Whats going on o.o

weapons for when COil says they need to learn combat. and an Arabian Nightmare.

Waffle27 wrote:

So are we doing the newspaper? If so, whos all going to do it with what positions?

Did you want to dp this newspaper? So far we have:
BookReveiws--Destructo, Waffle27
Sneak Peeks-Waffle27

And I may also do the Updates if no one else does.

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle, r u ok with Epher learning double daggers? or he could learn sword, and double daggers just in case?

Yah, double daggers sound good for when hes above water. When hes in the water, all he has are seal flippers.

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle, r u ok with Epher learning double daggers? or he could learn sword, and double daggers just in case?

Yah, double daggers sound good for when hes above water. When hes in the water, all he has are seal flippers.

that he can strap daggers to 

For the Arabian Nightmare we're doing, do you want to do the next part?

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Yah, double daggers sound good for when hes above water. When hes in the water, all he has are seal flippers.

that he can strap daggers to 

For the Arabian Nightmare we're doing, do you want to do the next part?

i guess so, though i don't rlly have any idea. how about John's boss tells him to investigate the mysterious disappearances at the swamp?

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

when should this be? when's my nxt chap?
8?
we should do this at my next chapter.

I think your chapter is 4, isnt it? Im pretty sure the order goes like this:
Nomolos
Waffle27
Dserpent
Shadow
Madbunny

Yeah, Johns boss should tell him to investigate the disapearrences, and maybe he brings a camera person with him and when his back is turned, they disapear.

oooooooooohhhhhhhhh.
aaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh.
i like that idea.
and only one more chap till the best part so far :3

Waffle27 wrote:

I dont know...Ephers chapter was pretty good...
So then the camera person is taken and maybe they turn into a ghost werefrog and try to attack him. Or
b) John goes back to tell his boss that cameraperson is gone.

how about C.
he tries to tell his boss, but he can't find his way out.

Hello Arabian Nights! I've been reading the stuff you've been writing, and I must say, you guys rock! You're doing great, and I really want to read the full version of Ocean Explorers! 

so, is this the finished version??

When Epher came to, blurry faces were dancing above him. He struggled to roll over, but he was much too cramped and sore. “What—where am I?” he asked groggily.
    “You were in a little human boat.” Coil said accusingly. “You’re not anymore.”
    “Thanks,” Epher said, assuming by Coil’s slightly smug look that the Sea serpent did something to the boat, and probably the humans inside of it.
    “Epher!” Epher heard the Hippocampi’s voice seconds before it floated into view. “What did I tell you about the festival?” Epher groaned. For once, couldn’t he have listened to the Hippocampus? It wasn’t helping that she was going on and on about how she had told him the risks, and to be careful, and how if Coil hadn’t shown up he would have been stuck in that horrid boat forever.
    “I know, I know,” Epher groaned, feeling a tingling sensation return to his flippers. “You told me so.”
    “How did you get in that boat in the first place?” Rarse wondered. “I doubt you just hopped in.”
    “Might as well have,” Epher managed to pick himself up off the sea floor, and his eyesight slowly cleared to reveal his friends, standing in a tight knit circle around him. Seaweed waved by the sandy colored stones, and a small crab scuttled around on the sea bottom. “I turned into a human and ran into a human lab!” he blurted, then cowered, afraid of the tart responses.
    “What?!?” Amaya cried. “I told you to be careful! Why don’t you ever listen to me, Epher?”
    Epher sighed. “I tried to be careful; I really did, but…” Epher told them the entire story, from the point where he met Tattoo and Stubble, to the point where Glasses poked him and they brought him out to sea.
    “That cylinder was called a hypodermic needle,” explained Crystal, “that must’ve been what put you to sleep.”
    “I guess so,” Epher agreed. “But I am very tired…” he yawned. Without further ado, Epher found a cozy clump of seaweed and curled up. Before Amaya or the others could question him further, he was soundly asleep.

destructo-serpent wrote:

Inker wrote:

Hello Arabian Nights! I've been reading the stuff you've been writing, and I must say, you guys rock! You're doing great, and I really want to read the full version of Ocean Explorers! 

ooohhh. our first fan   
you can read the prologue now if you want, or you can wait until the books done.
the prologue is on our wiki.
heres a link http://scratch-arabian-knights-writing-collab.wikia.com/wiki/Pages_waiting_to_be_put_into_book.

Lol, I already read it!    I was going through the pages of this topic to see what you have written so far, and there it was!

Inker wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Inker wrote:

Hello Arabian Nights! I've been reading the stuff you've been writing, and I must say, you guys rock! You're doing great, and I really want to read the full version of Ocean Explorers! 

ooohhh. our first fan   
you can read the prologue now if you want, or you can wait until the books done.
the prologue is on our wiki.
heres a link http://scratch-arabian-knights-writing-collab.wikia.com/wiki/Pages_waiting_to_be_put_into_book.

Lol, I already read it!    I was going through the pages of this topic to see what you have written so far, and there it was!

spoiler alert 

lundfamily3 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

lundfamily3 wrote:

Technically, you weren't supposed to. O.o

Anyways, can I do book reviews for the newspaper as well? ^^

Also, Amaya doesn't need weapons. O.O shie is a horse-fish, meaning her rock hard hooves and her strong jaw deal terrible wounds. Have you ever seen a horse attack something? It doesn't end well. Their vision lets them easily see predators stalking them, so she's powerful in defense. ^^

ever seen a lion attack a horse? that doesn't end well. neither does anything with any body part being sharp.

Er... I can't think of any place where a lion preys n horses. Also, she has a fish tail, allowing extra agility, so she ca hold her own.

Also, if you mean lions attacking zebras, a lone lion attacking a zebra may sometimes end in a lion with a broken neck.

wild horses in africa. most of the time it ends in a dead horse.
but good points.

or an alligator. alligators always eat horses.
which is closer to what she will probably see in the ocean.