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destructo-serpent wrote:

we should just combine them, and have it be third person

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Okay, sounds good. So one charrie, right? You can make the bio, since I'm working on Chap. 3 right now.

Waffle27 wrote:

When Epher came to, blurry faces were dancing above him. He struggled to roll over, but he was much too cramped and sore. “What—where am I?” he asked groggily.
    “You were in a little human boat.” Coil said accusingly. “You’re not anymore.”
    “Thanks,” Epher said, assuming by Coil’s slightly smug look that the Sea serpent did something to the boat, and probably the humans inside of it.
    “Epher!” Epher heard the Hippocampi’s voice seconds before it floated into view. “What did I tell you about the festival?” Epher groaned. For once, couldn’t he have listened to the Hippocampus? It wasn’t helping that she was going on and on about how she had told him the risks, and to be careful, and how if Coil hadn’t shown up he would have been stuck in that horrid boat forever.
    “I know, I know,” Epher groaned, feeling a tingling sensation return to his flippers. “You told me so.”
    “How did you get in that boat in the first place?” Rarse wondered. “I doubt you just hopped in.”
    “Might as well have,” Epher managed to pick himself up off the sea floor, and his eyesight slowly cleared to reveal his friends, standing in a tight knit circle around him. Seaweed waved by the sandy colored stones, and a small crab scuttled around on the sea bottom. “I turned into a human and ran into a human lab!” he blurted, then cowered, afraid of the tart responses.
    “What?!?” Amaya cried. “I told you to be careful! Why don’t you ever listen to me, Epher?”
    Epher sighed. “I tried to be careful; I really did, but…” Epher told them the entire story, from the point where he met Tattoo and Stubble, to the point where Glasses poked him and they brought him out to sea.
    “That cylinder was called a hypodermic needle,” explained Crystal, “that must’ve been what put you to sleep.”
    “I guess so,” Epher agreed. “But I am very tired…” he yawned. Without further ado, Epher found a cozy clump of seaweed and curled up. Before Amaya or the others could question him further, he was soundly asleep.


Theres the ending of Chapter 3! 

changed two things. is that better?

Last edited by destructo-serpent (2013-03-28 03:19:15)

Waffle27 wrote:

Yup, thats better. I didnt relly know about solemnly, but I wanted it to be something-ly. Okay, so now we just combine them and wait to see if the others are okay with there parts or not. So...Werefrogs...I'll do a creepy intro scene if you want. Or at least I can try. Maybe we should both do one and pick whichever one is best?

you can do one, then we can edit it and stuff.
and for humans in fighters, how about "softskins" 

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Yup, thats better. I didnt relly know about solemnly, but I wanted it to be something-ly. Okay, so now we just combine them and wait to see if the others are okay with there parts or not. So...Werefrogs...I'll do a creepy intro scene if you want. Or at least I can try. Maybe we should both do one and pick whichever one is best?

you can do one, then we can edit it and stuff.
and for humans in fighters, how about "softskins" 

Yeah, softskins sounds good. And in Birds of Prey they should be "No-Wings" or soething like that.
Okay, I'll do an entry scene but how should it start out? With someone hearing a weird sound and investigating, or a frog invasion, or a news clip/article?

how about like my werewolf one?

Waffle27 wrote:

Okay, and that was when they were walking or something? Oh, maybe we should just use the begining of the werewolf one but tweak it a little.

yeah, like they are walking in a marsh then suddenly a shadow jumps out of the water and graabs them or something.

k

i will, but i have to go to bed. i'll do it tomorow. good night.

Only person online!! Whoo hoo!

Waffle27 wrote:

Here are some story ideas for fanfics I came up with:

Possible Title: On the loose: A Harry Potter Fanfic
Genre: Fan fiction
Style: Action, mystery
Summary of Idea: The time of Voldemort is past. Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry is now safe. Or is it? When students and valuables start disappearing, five Hogwarts First Years decide to take it upon themselves to solve the crime. But when they figure out a band of criminals have escaped from Azkaban, will they have the courage to stand up to the escapees? And will they have the strength to defeat them?

Possible Title: Quest for the Healers: A Warriors Fanfic
Genre: Fanfic
Style: Adventure
Summary of the Idea: Humans have taken the medicine cats of the clans at a Half-moon meeting. There are no cat’s eligible to train as a Medicine Cat at the moment. With sickness and disease spreading through the camp, and nothing to stop it, Star Clan sends cat(s) from each clan to find their healers.

Possible Title: Birds of Prey: A Warriors Fanfic
Genre: Fanfic
Style: Action
Summary of Idea: Owl Clan, Eagle Clan, and Hawk Clan have lived in peace for a long time but when an omen comes foretelling the arise of Bird Clan (the ancestors of the Clans) with the help of certain birds inside each clan, members faithful to the Black Nest (Evil ancestors) emerge to stop them.


For HP Fanfic, they don’t have to be a First Year, but I think they should be.
For Warriors Fanfic, we can decide if we have real clans or clans we make up.
For second Warriors Fanfic, the one with birds, the humans would be called No-Wings. I know it sounds a lot like Omen of the Stars but I didn’t mean for it to sound that way, sorry. It was going to be different but I can’t figure out how to explain it better yet.
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Bird Info I have collected:

-Instead of  litters, they are called Broods
-For owls
~Barn Owls: typically 5-7 eggs to a brood, but it can get up to 11
~Great Horned Owls: typically 2-3 eggs in a brood, but can get to more than 6
-For Eagles
~Golden &Bald Eagles: typically 1-3 eggs per brood

-Prey percentages
~Barn Owls eat mostly small rodents and other birds, but eat the occasional reptile or amphibian
~Golden Eagles eat mostly small mammals (especially Jackrabbits) and large mammals
~Bald Eagles eat mostly Fish or small mammals and rodents

I know pretty much nothing about Hawks, but I could find out.
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Or the HP Fanfic could be something more unusual. A goblin rebellion! 

Uh... recap? xD

lundfamily3 wrote:

Uh... recap? xD

We finished Chapter 3, are thinking about doing a newspaper. Thats all I can think of righ now.

back online    i'll work on the bio. we need a name for this.

lundfamily3 wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Agg725 wrote:

Do I have any assignments yet?

No major assignments right now, thanks for checking. If you want to, you can draw the characters (character sheets on the wiki) but thats not essential right now.

Except no doing Amaya    I want to do her.

I just need to fine to draw. .-.

destructo-serpent wrote:

back online    i'll work on the bio. we need a name for this.

Wha? o.o

an Arabian Nightmare me and Waffle are doing.