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ShadowOfArt wrote:

ACtually, this is the 1000th post 

No. That is the 1001th post. The counter on the Collaboration page does not count deleted posts.

Hi just wondering what genre would you like me base my story in or would you like me to be an editor instead!

destructo-serpent wrote:

maybe we should just write madbunnys part and she can change what Crystal does and stuff?

Yeah, it doesn't look like she'll be coming on soon.

Nomolos wrote:

“Why are you alone?” Epher asked the merman. “The nearest mer-people village is that way, and it seems you were traveling the opposite direction.” He eyed Rarse suspiciously. No one noticed Coil swim off.
Rarse hung his head, the recent memories painfully returning. "Humans," he murmured, and told his story.
     Epher gasped, horrified when he had finished. “That's the same thing that happened to me!” he said. “I bet it was the same Fishing Vessel."
     “Human Divers captured my mother...” Amaya whispered, and looked down to the sandy floor.
     “Those filthy humans! They've made so many suffer and don't give any second thoughts.” Epher said, a sudden wave of resentment flowing over him. "I think it's time they got what they deserved."
     “They captured my father. They'll pay for that,” snarled Rarse angrily, and looked back toward his village with renewed hate and grief, silently cursing the humans that had attacked.
Epher looked at Rarse in the eye, and a set look of determination appeared on his face. he held out a fin.
     "Join us, and together we can destroy this abominable race."
Rarse decided nearly instantly and took the fin shaking it twice. "I'm with you all the way."
They stayed like that for a couple minutes, before looking around and noticing Coil's absence. As if on cue, Coil suddenly swam down to them, dragging a large shape behind him.
"Anyone want humpback?" he asked, dropping the carcass in front of them.
Rarse grinned, and swam slightly away from the whale.

Merged!

As they were eating, maybe crystal could show up. Aka attack them for the whale soul?

madbunnygal wrote:

Sorry I havn't been on. When you guys are on, I am in bed asleep!!

Yay! You're on! It seems we're a couple hours apart! 

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it's prime scratching hour, and no one is on. weird
if we're not getting crystal in the group anytime soon, i wonder if i can make some of chapter 3.

Waffle?

Last edited by destructo-serpent (2013-03-21 21:05:01)

tinfoil maybe?

idk. maybe a gun locker Xd

Nomolos wrote:

Where's madbunny? D:

1000th post on this topic!

Ok guys!! I am going to write the part where they meet crystal. You can change some if you want.

(can this be the part where they are eating whale meat?)

Crystal peered from behind one of the rocks. As she had fully recovered, food was going to be a vital part of her day. She looked at the cryptids. What a sight!

Where did you find this whale meat? (Anybody says this)
Says the destination (Anybody says this)
Its so good! (Anybody says this)

There's my food...

Hey did you here something? (Anybody says this)
No (Anybody says this)
waits few seconds. (Anybody says this)
Did you see that? (Anybody says this)
Yes... (Anybody says this)

Crystal grabbed her sword, jumped out of her hiding position and pointed at the hippocamp's neck.

"You didn't see that one coming! Hand over the meat, and I'll leave your precious teammates alone!"



I did it quickly, so its not that good.

Sorry but I don't understand wether you want me to write (if so what genre) or be an editor either is fine by me    !

madbunnygal wrote:

ShadowOfArt wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

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it's prime scratching hour, and no one is on. weird
if we're not getting crystal in the group anytime soon, i wonder if i can make some of chapter 3.

Waffle?

I just got on. Sorry for the delay, my friends rats CHEWED THROUGH THE CAGE. I had to tape cardboard around it, but their chewing through that too! D:
Anyone have tips?

Putting that aside, does anyone want to do a join me and watch me draw the cryptids?

Can I draw crystal? No tips on rats though...

Sure, if you want, I guess o3o

madbunnygal wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

Where's madbunny? D:

1000th post on this topic!

Ok guys!! I am going to write the part where they meet crystal. You can change some if you want.

(can this be the part where they are eating whale meat?)

Crystal peered from behind one of the rocks. As she had fully recovered, food was going to be a vital part of her day. She looked at the cryptids. What a sight!

Where did you find this whale meat? (Anybody says this)
Says the destination (Anybody says this)
Its so good! (Anybody says this)

There's my food...

Hey did you here something? (Anybody says this)
No (Anybody says this)
waits few seconds. (Anybody says this)
Did you see that? (Anybody says this)
Yes... (Anybody says this)

Crystal grabbed her sword, jumped out of her hiding position and pointed at the hippocamp's neck.

"You didn't see that one coming! Hand over the meat, and I'll leave your precious teammates alone!"



I did it quickly, so its not that good.

i thought she ate souls?

ShadowOfArt wrote:

Oh notch, I just realized something, Amaya as the only female, is the only one who could resist Crystal's song. o3o Coil and Epher would be like, "PRETTY GIRL SINGING!"

Firetruck.

lol

i don't think cryptids, or even sea creatures, would be afftected by that.