Waffle27 wrote:
Maybe we could start thinking up ideas for Chapter 2 so we're not stuck when we get there.
Which leads to another question: What is the character/chapter order?
how about
Waffle
D-serp
Shadow
Nomolos
madbunny
?
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destructo-serpent wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
Maybe we could start thinking up ideas for Chapter 2 so we're not stuck when we get there.
Which leads to another question: What is the character/chapter order?how about
Waffle
D-serp
Shadow
Nomolos
madbunny
?
I'm good with that if everyone else is.
Will there be a time skip after Chapter 2? Because I have a good idea if there was a time skip, but it could also come later in the book if need be.
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ShadowOfArt wrote:
madbunnygal wrote:
Crystal had just been enjoying the fresh meat that she found at a weird house underwater, when they found out what had been happening. She didn’t know how they found out, but she knew why. She also knew that if she was captured by the other sirens, the consequence would be death, and so, she ran.
“No” She thought, “Not this time. Not after Altoi’s death.”
Why did she have to be this way? Why couldn’t she live a normal life like the others? Why did she of all people have to live in a world of despair?
They were catching up on her now. If only she could erase all those crimes she had commited.
“You’ll never catch me!!” she screamed and from thin air she grabbed her element sword, and sliced them all in half.
That’s when she saw what she had done…
How is this?Definiately should be longer. What I am worried about is the fact she can grab stuff from thing air, and the tense errors.
Tell me when you need an editor.
Also, here are the genders:
Coil - M
Amaya - F
Epher - M
Crystal - F
Nomolos charrie - ?
Yeah, it is not finished yet.
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Its just one of the suspenseful pauses?
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destructo-serpent wrote:
so now what? we've done our parts, confirmed them, and uploaded them to the wiki. now we have to wait. and wait. and wait.
And you cant forget about the part where we wait
What about the time skip after the first chapter? Is it okay if I do that or should I wait for later in the book?
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for the Candy Bag (idea box)
let's eventually make a post-apocalyptic book.
would that be Sci-Fi or Fantasy?
a book where ppl who survived the Disaster
must survive with what little they have, such as metal from city ruins
possible title: Disaster Remnants.
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Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
so now what? we've done our parts, confirmed them, and uploaded them to the wiki. now we have to wait. and wait. and wait.
And you cant forget about the part where we wait
What about the time skip after the first chapter? Is it okay if I do that or should I wait for later in the book?
wait until everything is established. maybe chapter three or four...?
what's your great idea, anyway?
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yay, my 500th post
on the main post, maybe you could have a form for ideas for the idea box.
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destructo-serpent wrote:
for the Candy Bag (idea box)
let's eventually make a post-apocalyptic book.
would that be Sci-Fi or Fantasy?
a book where ppl who survived the Disaster
must survive with what little they have, such as metal from city ruins
possible title: Disaster Remnants.
Ok I'll add that. I'm not sure about the genre, thats a good question. I think it might be Sci-Fi, but im not sure.
A Sci-Fi Idea I had was that somewhere in the future, scientists make a lab where there are hundreds of doors that each lead to a planet. When you open a door, you end up on the planet, and the main characters are each Lab Rats for the doors, testing for stability and other life forms. Because Earth's population is overflowing, they need a place to put everyone. Possible Title:Space Doors
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destructo-serpent wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
so now what? we've done our parts, confirmed them, and uploaded them to the wiki. now we have to wait. and wait. and wait.
And you cant forget about the part where we wait
What about the time skip after the first chapter? Is it okay if I do that or should I wait for later in the book?wait until everything is established. maybe chapter three or four...?
what's your great idea, anyway?
Epher goes up to the surface on the night of the Crushing Cryptids festival in order to learn about the times of future destruction.
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Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
And you cant forget about the part where we wait
What about the time skip after the first chapter? Is it okay if I do that or should I wait for later in the book?wait until everything is established. maybe chapter three or four...?
what's your great idea, anyway?Epher goes up to the surface on the night of the Crushing Cryptids festival in order to learn about the times of future destruction.
ohh. Epher really likes spying on humans.
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Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
for the Candy Bag (idea box)
let's eventually make a post-apocalyptic book.
would that be Sci-Fi or Fantasy?
a book where ppl who survived the Disaster
must survive with what little they have, such as metal from city ruins
possible title: Disaster Remnants.Ok I'll add that. I'm not sure about the genre, thats a good question. I think it might be Sci-Fi, but im not sure.
A Sci-Fi Idea I had was that somewhere in the future, scientists make a lab where there are hundreds of doors that each lead to a planet. When you open a door, you end up on the planet, and the main characters are each Lab Rats for the doors, testing for stability and other life forms. Because Earth's population is overflowing, they need a place to put everyone. Possible Title:Space Doors
i like that idea. lots of different settings.
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There. Idea Box Updated. This is such a cool collab.
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Waffle27 wrote:
There. Idea Box Updated. This is such a cool collab.
the coolest.
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while we're waiting for them to finish the prologue, the only thing we can do is stuff the idea box. then we won't have as much confusion next time.
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Well, there's my Arabian Nightmares Idea, where we each write a few 5-10 paged horror stories, then put it in a book.
I also want to eventually make a clone book, maybe where you are part of a secret lab test, theres six of you, but somehow the government finds out and dissproves of it, so tries to destroy the clone server, which will kill all the clones. They successfully kill one of the clones before the clones and normals escape. Maybe some people could be clones, and others normals. It could be called Clone Server
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i kind of want to do a book about a den of snakes. (it's a real word) but i'm probably the only one here who thinks snakes are awesome. people tend to dislike them. :l
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Waffle27 wrote:
Well, there's my Arabian Nightmares Idea, where we each write a few 5-10 paged horror stories, then put it in a book.
I also want to eventually make a clone book, maybe where you are part of a secret lab test, theres six of you, but somehow the government finds out and dissproves of it, so tries to destroy the clone server, which will kill all the clones. They successfully kill one of the clones before the clones and normals escape. Maybe some people could be clones, and others normals. It could be called Clone Server
ooooooohhhhhhhhhh. (ghost voice)
both of them are awesome. that's why you make the storyline for warriors
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It depends if its a snake that wants to kill me or not.
G2G. See you in about 14 hours
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Waffle27 wrote:
It depends if its a snake that wants to kill me or not.
G2G. See you in about 14 hours
cyu.
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awesome idea! how about we write the arabian nightmares in the time we aren't needed writing the current book, and compile them when we have enough?
i think i'll start one now.
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This is my new story!! I scraped the old one. Hope you like !!
Crystal’s life revolved around one song.
Once he hears to his heart's content, sails on, a wiser man.
We know all the pains that the Greeks and Trojans once endured
on the spreading plain of Troy when the gods willed it so—
all that comes to pass on the fertile earth, we know it all!
However, this was not the way sirens were originally taught. Crystal was the only one who knew this. Apart from the sironment who had cleared the sirens memories for knowing they were being controlled. Perhaps this was where she inherited her callousness. The sironment would arrive at her shell tomorrow. She had no idea how they found out the fact that she knew that sirens were being tricked. They were to wipe out her memory.
“Not this time” she thought “I’ll leave my shell before they can lay one finger on me.”
After her quick fish-soul dinner, she quickly packed up a set of seaweed clothes, her wing shields (with various weapons hidden inside), a jar of fish souls (she hated the things) and a mysterious object that her ancestors had passed down a long time ago. It was a crystal shell, and she did not know why she was taking it with her.
“Maybe it will be of some use.” she exclaimed.
Quietly she walked out of her shell, as she heard the singing of the sleeping sirens. In the distance, she thought she heard a bush rustle. She slowly pulled her sword from her wing. Sure enough, her eyes saw what she had feared they would. The sironment.
“What are they doing here?” she thought, her heart racing. “Calm down Crystal, you’ve dealt with these fish brains before.”
“We know you are there crystal. It’s a shame for you that we can wipe your memory right here and now.” One of the sirens said hastily.
“You seal skeleton! Don’t you realise what you’re in for? You’re trying to fight the winner of all the siren tournaments over a misunderstanding? You crab! I’ll kill you now!” Crystal declared, and with one wipe, the siren’s head was clean of her shoulders and on the ground. “Hah! Teaches a now-it-all fish brain to mess with me!”
But to her surprise there were more of them. She slashed her sword at them killed groups of them off but still more came. Soon there were piles of dead sirens laid on the ground in front of her.
“That’s most of the sironment dead. Too bad all the citizens are asleep. They could have made a run for it before the sironment of the next Siren city come and take them captive at their camps. But I have nothing to do with the pearl clan now. I’m a lone-siren now.”
She dived into the black water, and when she reached the bottom, made her way through the weeds, only to discover, she was not alone.
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madbunnygal wrote:
ShadowOfArt wrote:
madbunnygal wrote:
Crystal had just been enjoying the fresh meat that she found at a weird house underwater, when they found out what had been happening. She didn’t know how they found out, but she knew why. She also knew that if she was captured by the other sirens, the consequence would be death, and so, she ran.
“No” She thought, “Not this time. Not after Altoi’s death.”
Why did she have to be this way? Why couldn’t she live a normal life like the others? Why did she of all people have to live in a world of despair?
They were catching up on her now. If only she could erase all those crimes she had commited.
“You’ll never catch me!!” she screamed and from thin air she grabbed her element sword, and sliced them all in half.
That’s when she saw what she had done…
How is this?Definiately should be longer. What I am worried about is the fact she can grab stuff from thing air, and the tense errors.
Tell me when you need an editor.
Also, here are the genders:
Coil - M
Amaya - F
Epher - M
Crystal - F
Nomolos charrie - ?Yeah, it is not finished yet.
This is not the one I am doing anymore
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Waffle27 wrote:
Nomolos wrote:
Rarse's prologue
What do you think? He could probably run into the other characters on his journey in the sea.
Also, it's not very good, because I wasn't taking time to edit it. I'm in a hurry cause I have to go to bed.It sounds kindof like what Epher's was. That would be cool if it was the same fishing vessel.
Yeah. Maybe Rarse could already know Epher because they live near each other?
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destructo-serpent wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
There. Idea Box Updated. This is such a cool collab.
the coolest.
I couldn't agree more.
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