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ShadowOfArt wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

ShadowOfArt wrote:

So can we start writing? ^^

I thought we already did, with the prolouge. But...sure, if you want to get a headstart on the first chapter go ahead.

(Btw Shadow&D-Serpent, you have been added as Council Members  )

I mean writing chapter one 

Can I get listed as an illustrator? ^^

Yup. ^^
Go ahead and get started on Chapter 1 if you would like to.

while madbunny does her prologue, waffle, r you doing the first section of chapter 1 where Espher meets Coil? or should i do that part?

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

while madbunny does her prologue, waffle, r you doing the first section of chapter 1 where Espher meets Coil? or should i do that part?

Maybe both of us, but sort of from our own points of veiw? Like, you can keep the part where you see a kelpie and swim up to it and start talking. Or maybe I could go up and ask you if you have seen any Kelpies around, hoping someone survived the attack?

probably you should, because Coil will be somewhat wary after the royal guards.

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Maybe both of us, but sort of from our own points of veiw? Like, you can keep the part where you see a kelpie and swim up to it and start talking. Or maybe I could go up and ask you if you have seen any Kelpies around, hoping someone survived the attack?

probably you should, because Coil will be somewhat wary after the royal guards.

Alright...so I'll do that up until what point? Maybe Epher starts to swim off sadly when you don't answer/awsner harshly.

how about Coil is friendly, but wary?

like he shakes his head?

on the main post, on madbunny online indicator, you put his/her name with a capital, so the indicator doesn't work.

Waffle27 wrote:

Okay that will work. Epher should tell his story first, in hopes Coil will be sympathetic. But then Epher will start to swim away, when Coil shakes his head, to see if he can find any remaining members?

then what? i'm not sure how Coil asks Espher to stay with him. maybe he offers him some whale?

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Okay that will work. Epher should tell his story first, in hopes Coil will be sympathetic. But then Epher will start to swim away, when Coil shakes his head, to see if he can find any remaining members?

then what? i'm not sure how Coil asks Espher to stay with him. maybe he offers him some whale?

Okay. Then he remembers his conversation with his mother, about the difference between Whales and Ships, and gets all sad again. But then they hear Amaya and go to rescue her?

hm... that sounds good. but Shadow will have to make Amaya be in trouble. like caught in weeds or something.

EDIT: or being attacked by a shark!

Last edited by destructo-serpent (2013-03-19 22:09:42)

Hey Dserpent should we write this part together or seperate?

Crystal had just been enjoying the fresh meat that she found at a weird house underwater, when they found out what had been happening. She didn’t know how they found out, but she knew why. She also knew that if she was captured by the other sirens, the consequence would be death, and so, she ran.
“No” She thought, “Not this time. Not after Altoi’s death.”
Why did she have to be this way? Why couldn’t she live a normal life like the others? Why did she of all people have to live in a world of despair?
They were catching up on her now. If only she could erase all those crimes she had commited.
“You’ll never catch me!!” she screamed and from thin air she grabbed her element sword, and sliced them all in half.
That’s when she saw what she had done…



How is this?

what genders are the different characters??

Ok do we have another character?

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Hey Dserpent should we write this part together or seperate?

let's both write it, from different points of view. you write it in Eshper's view, then i'll copy it and make it Coil's view?

Okay, I'll start right now. It may not be done until Thursday though. Speaking of which, Thursday through the following Thursday I will most likely not be as active because it is spring break and I will be going somewhere over the break.

*Nomolos--There is an official due date on the Charrie Sheet. If you dont turn it in by then, no Virtual Cookie for you.

What is a virtual cookie??