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coil prolouge end, accomadated for Coil meeting Espher.

When Coil awoke, there was no serpent guard dragging him away. He sighed in relief, knowing that they had gone. He swam out of the Fields of Asphodel, somewhat drowsily, and decided to get food, for he had not eaten for a long time. He hunted and caught a whale, and after eating it, set out, away from the kingdom. For days he did this. Then, once, while he was chasing a whale, he saw a selkie.

lundfamily3 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

i think Waffle should write chapter 1,   about Espher meeting Coil.

Could I write chapter three? That's when Amaya meets everyone write?

i think there should be parts of chapter 1, like the prologue. then everyones met, and we've only used up the prologue and one chapter.

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

lundfamily3 wrote:

Could I write chapter three? That's when Amaya meets everyone write?

i think there should be parts of chapter 1, like the prologue. then everyones met, and we've only used up the prologue and one chapter.

Okay. But then is there some time skip where theyve been friends for a while, or do they stay the same?

i think a time skip would just be missing out.

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Okay. But then is there some time skip where theyve been friends for a while, or do they stay the same?

i think a time skip would just be missing out.

I geuss so...but they cant just do everything in the month after there problems begin...

we'll do some time skips. just not right after they've met.

madbunnygal wrote:

Can you give me the list of cryptids we are using??

Crystal meets a sea serpent, a selkie, and a hippocampus in the prologue.

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Waffle27 wrote:

alright, I geuss the eventual tim skipping i okay, its just I dont know what other time you would do it.

boring parts.

traveling maybe

madbunnygal wrote:

Can I write the chapter after everyone else has written one? Because I'd like Crystal to be the last one to meet the cryptids. (meaning a bit of uncertainty before joining them)

Well, it would probably go in the same chapter. She can be the last one to meet up with them though

Okay, so we have the basic outline for the first chapter, and the prolouge. I can't wait until everyone gets there prolouge in!!! This is so exciting you guys!!!

Waffle27 wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

Can I write the chapter after everyone else has written one? Because I'd like Crystal to be the last one to meet the cryptids. (meaning a bit of uncertainty before joining them)

Well, it would probably go in the same chapter. She can be the last one to meet up with them though

Can she not want to join them, but change her mind over something. (A siren spots her and tries to hunt her down, so she decides to join for safety. Only later in the book does she realise, that she actually really wants to stay with them)

Waffle27 wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

Well, it would probably go in the same chapter. She can be the last one to meet up with them though

Can she not want to join them, but change her mind over something. (A siren spots her and tries to hunt her down, so she decides to join for safety. Only later in the book does she realise, that she actually really wants to stay with them)

Yeah thats perfectly fine. Do you still want it to be second chapter, or are you fine with late first chapter?

I don't mind

I still haven't got my prologue done yet!!

can I be a council member and a illustrator?