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#351 2013-03-19 19:32:32

Waffle27
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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

I want dreaming, if someone wants that, then Magic or Time.

Anyways, back to our current book. Madbunny, when you are done with your Sea Cryptid sheet post it on the first website. Same for you Nomolos.

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#352 2013-03-19 19:32:48

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

i want life

back to the book, how many parts of the prologue do we have? everyone's but nomolo's and madbunny's?

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#353 2013-03-19 19:33:56

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

-Life
-Earth
-Magic
-Dreaming
-Time
If it is these, I will be time.


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#354 2013-03-19 19:35:44

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Elements So Far:

Time--Madbunnygal
Earth--
Magic--Nomolos
Life--destructo-serpent
Dreaming--Waffle27

Anyways, yah, all we need is Bunnys and Nomolos prolouge unless you want me to add to mine

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#355 2013-03-19 19:36:16

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle, can i be second in command?

(he asked hopefully)

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#356 2013-03-19 19:37:16

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle, can i be second in command?

(he asked hopefully)

I geuss so, if everyones okay with that.

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#357 2013-03-19 19:37:22

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

Elements So Far:

Time--Madbunnygal
Earth--
Magic--Nomolos
Life--destructo-serpent
Dreaming--Waffle27

Anyways, yah, all we need is Bunnys and Nomolos prolouge unless you want me to add to mine

mine and Shaodw's have up to the part where they see the group, not join it. you should get to there.

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#358 2013-03-19 19:38:09

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

madbunnygal wrote:

ShadowOfArt wrote:

I have no idea what's happening.

XD

Also, MadBunny, we said SEA Cryptids when we explained. W don't mean a wolf. ^^ Here are some ideas:
Ogopogo
Mermaid
Siren
Ayia Napa sea monster

For covers, I could make one. I have some cryptid sketches lying around her somewhere...

Also, what cryptid should Nomolos be?


And for elements, we could do these for Star Wlves:
-Life
-Earth
-Magic
-Dreaming
-Time

Those are the five elements that make up the world.

I will be a siren then...

Then make your charecter sheet, please. We have waited for you for awhile, and you've been online long enough to do it many times.

Nomolos, do you know what you want to be? ^^

Also, guys, do not make wiki pages with weird names or sentence like dis.

I am deleting the problem pages and remaking them.

And destructo, your page is pnt ready yet, since yours still says "four other Cryptids" when we established MadBunny and Nomolos would meet the others last. ^^

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#359 2013-03-19 19:38:18

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle, can i be second in command?

(he asked hopefully)

I geuss so, if everyones okay with that.

I'm fine with that.


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#360 2013-03-19 19:38:28

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

Waffle, can i be second in command?

(he asked hopefully)

I geuss so, if everyones okay with that.

who want's me to be second in command?

my campaign promise: virtual cookies for everyone!

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#361 2013-03-19 19:39:12

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

So who does Epher meet up with? (confused)

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#362 2013-03-19 19:39:38

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

nomolo, you should be like a loch Ness monster or pleiosaur.

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#363 2013-03-19 19:40:40

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

So who does Epher meet up with? (confused)

Coil. they start the team.

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#364 2013-03-19 19:40:49

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

destructo-serpent wrote:

nomolo, you should be like a loch Ness monster or pleiosaur.

Let them decide, ^^


Waffle27 wrote:

Elements So Far:

Time--Madbunnygal
Earth--
Magic--Nomolos
Life--destructo-serpent
Dreaming--Waffle27

Anyways, yah, all we need is Bunnys and Nomolos prolouge unless you want me to add to mine

Excuses me, I called life, and said if I couldn't have that, Dreaming. hmm


Also, if we're campaigning for deputy,
My promise:
Free freakin' kitten pictures. XD

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#365 2013-03-19 19:42:25

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Ok guys, here could be a prologue for Star Wolves:

September 11th, 9:32pm

The impossible has just occurred. I don't know what exactly , but whatever did had to be supernatural. The stars are falling. Not like a meteor shower, actually falling.

I was outside, sitting on my porch, when it began. Every night on the ranch I look up into the cloudless sky and count the constellations. But tonight something different happened. A lone star, fell from the twinkling sky, but didn't go out. It kept coming, closer and closer to Earth, and it hit. There was no explosion, just a flash of light in the distance.
I would of rubbed my eyes, dismissing it for a small dream I had drifted off to, but more stars fell. I watched with fascination as they twinkled and fell from the sky, landing in the nearby forest.

After six fell, the miracle ended, or so I thought. I'm in my room now, staring at the window, for the forest in which the stars landed in, is glowing.

What do you think?

Also, I don't know what Cryptid I should be. Hmmm.

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#366 2013-03-19 19:42:30

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

ShadowOfArt wrote:

Waffle27 wrote:

I love those elements!!!!
If we do those, I would call anything but earth or life. Sorry, but those are again my least favorites  tongue

Nothing much is going on. Nomolos joined, and the prolouge so far got confirmed now we just need Nomolos and Madbunnys history and we can combine them. I posted my prolouge but I dont know if its enough or if I should add the part where he meets up with some other cryptid... hmm

I call life, then. Unless some wants that, if someone does, Dreaming.

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#367 2013-03-19 19:42:39

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

She_Is_Of_Dream wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

nomolo, you should be like a loch Ness monster or pleiosaur.

Let them decide, ^^


Waffle27 wrote:

Elements So Far:

Time--Madbunnygal
Earth--
Magic--Nomolos
Life--ShadowofArt
Dreaming--Waffle27

Anyways, yah, all we need is Bunnys and Nomolos prolouge unless you want me to add to mine

Excuses me, I called life, and said if I couldn't have that, Dreaming. hmm


Also, if we're campaigning for deputy,
My promise:
Free freakin' kitten pictures. XD

Oops! Sorry.
D-Serpent are you okay with Earth or do I need to take one for the team again?
Unless we could change it to something else

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#368 2013-03-19 19:44:04

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Name: Crystal

Nickname(s)?:

Cryptid: Siren

Appearance: Has long blond hair, and blue eyes. Her tail is made of crystals hence the name Crystal. She has crystal raindrop figures hanging from her hair. Relationships: None (yet)

Personality: She wonders why she has to be who she is. Is feisty and stubborn and is always willing to fight for what she believes. Has a heart of ice (literally).  She has a sword made out of ice, and can make things happen just by thinking them!


History:

Other:


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#369 2013-03-19 19:44:49

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Nomolos wrote:

Ok guys, here could be a prologue for Star Wolves:

September 11th, 9:32pm

The impossible has just occurred. I don't know what exactly , but whatever did had to be supernatural. The stars are falling. Not like a meteor shower, actually falling.

I was outside, sitting on my porch, when it began. Every night on the ranch I look up into the cloudless sky and count the constellations. But tonight something different happened. A lone star, fell from the twinkling sky, but didn't go out. It kept coming, closer and closer to Earth, and it hit. There was no explosion, just a flash of light in the distance.
I would of rubbed my eyes, dismissing it for a small dream I had drifted off to, but more stars fell. I watched with fascination as they twinkled and fell from the sky, landing in the nearby forest.

After six fell, the miracle ended, or so I thought. I'm in my room now, staring at the window, for the forest in which the stars landed in, is glowing.

What do you think?

Also, I don't know what Cryptid I should be. Hmmm.

that doesn't follow the plot or perspective that we have come up with so far. We also aren't writing it yet, and even if we were, we write TOGETHER, and don't just randomly write something. D:

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#370 2013-03-19 19:44:50

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Waffle27 wrote:

She_Is_Of_Dream wrote:

destructo-serpent wrote:

nomolo, you should be like a loch Ness monster or pleiosaur.

Let them decide, ^^


Waffle27 wrote:

Elements So Far:

Time--Madbunnygal
Earth--
Magic--Nomolos
Life--ShadowofArt
Dreaming--Waffle27

Anyways, yah, all we need is Bunnys and Nomolos prolouge unless you want me to add to mine

Excuses me, I called life, and said if I couldn't have that, Dreaming. hmm


Also, if we're campaigning for deputy,
My promise:
Free freakin' kitten pictures. XD

Oops! Sorry.
D-Serpent are you okay with Earth or do I need to take one for the team again?
Unless we could change it to something else

let's change it to Space. you can't have time without space.

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#371 2013-03-19 19:44:55

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Maybe we could change Earth to Death?
Back on topic. So I meet up with Coil. Kay, I should have that soon.

Also what do you guys think about
A)Banner
B)Running for 2nd in command.

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#372 2013-03-19 19:46:00

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

Ok, space is cool. If someone really wants Dreaming I would be willing to change.

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#373 2013-03-19 19:47:33

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ok, i edited my prolouge to fit with the order. here it is. we should both write the part where they meet.

Seaserpentine Maximus the Third was training. As the prince of a kingdom, a kingdom of warrior sea serpents, he was required to train for long hours so he could protect his kingdom should the need arise.
Seaserpentine had glimmering scales and three-foot horns bending so they ran parallel to his back. A short dorsal fin rang down his back. His eyes were orange and shone like small suns. He was forty feet long, so if he swam in a circle, a whirlpool would form, big enough to swallow a small human vessel.

The royal family of serpents had a private training yard, in which he was now. He whirled around, his blue-green scales flashed in the dappled sunlight that reached the shallow sea bottom.

Seaserpentine headed straight at a pillar of bright red coral, at the last second altered his trajectory and corkscrewed so the spikes down the top of his neck sliced through the sharp, hard coral.
Then he whirled around, and slammed another pillar of coral to pieces with the weight of his tail. Seaserpentine used his jaws to pick up boulders that lay on the seabed and crushed them between his sword-like teeth.

After training for what seemed like decades, but really only for a few hours, Seaserpentine stopped and drifted lazily in the circular currents of the training yard. He was very tired after training so vigorously.

Seaserpentine also knew that if his brother, Spear, caught him resting; he would come up with some excuse to steal the throne from him. Their father had died scarcely three days ago, and the kingdom was in hushed silence, waiting for the coronation that, by tradition, must be held five days after a king’s death. He, eldest son of the king, would receive the throne. But Spear could not accept that, and was doing everything in his power to get to the throne.

Seasepentine was about to resume training, but was stopped by a wizened old serpent with glimmering red scales and graying horns that swam like a sailfish towards him.

“Coil!” he was calling.”

"Something must be wrong,” Maximus thought. To address the prince as his birth name was a huge breach in etiquette, only acceptable if a matter of great importance was at hand.

Then Coil recognized the serpent. It was his royal advisor, Judicious. Serpent mothers often named their hatchlings after their qualities. Judicious had finally reached Coil, and seemed about to speak. “What is it, Judicious? What’s wrong?” Coil asked him.

“It’s Spear!” Judicious warned him. “Spear is accusing you of murder! You must flee the kingdom now, or you’ll be killed!” 



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“What? The youngest son of a king can’t accuse the prince of a crime! No one can!” Coil exclaimed.

“He can. He ‘found’ evidence that you killed one of the Royal Cave Guards.”

“Wha-but….” Coil stuttered. “Killing a member of the royal guard is one of the worst crimes anyone could do!”

“He’s done it. And now, you must flee! Go, while you still can!” Judicious warned again. Coil didn’t argue.

“Will you be okay, Judicious?”

“I’ll be fine. Now go! They’re coming!!”

Ten sea serpents practically flew towards him, but they were far enough away that Coil could escape if he went now. He quickly turned and swam away. The guards followed, trying to catch him, but Coil had trained in the royal yard since he was a hatchling, and his tail muscles were incredibly strong.

Coil shot forward like an arrow, the knowledge of what would happen if he stopped his bow. But the guards were fast too. They couldn’t gain on him, but they maintained their distance, and waited for him to tire.

And then Coil saw it. The Fields of Asphodel, which were a huge giant kelp forest, which stretched for miles along the shallow seabed of the reef. They were known to have many shallow caves hidden by the kelp, some of them big enough for even a large sea serpent. They were the perfect hiding place.

Coil quickly altered course and headed straight into the Fields. The flowing green kelp engulfed him. He couldn’t see, couldn’t hear, and couldn’t detect any trace of heat with the organs in his snout. He was lost in the kelp. After he drifted for a moment, his head cleared.

Coil swam around near the seabed until he found a suitable hole. Then he slithered in, curled into a spiral, and slept. 


When Coil awoke, there was no serpent guard dragging him away. However, there was heat from something outside the kelp. He uncoiled and warily crept out of the hole, trying to determine from what creatures the heat emanated. At the edge of the kelp, he saw a selkie.

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#374 2013-03-19 19:47:55

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

I like banner and second in command sounds alright


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#375 2013-03-19 19:48:35

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Re: Arabian Nights--A Writing Collab for Future Authors

let's have a voting box for second in command.

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