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Waffle27 · 2013-03-18 21:55:08

ShadowOfArt wrote:
Flipped one. Cryptids

Oh, okay, or that^^ Was it heads or tails ?(Tails never fails)
Smiley face makes me sad...unless it was just a general smiley face

ShadowOfArt · 2013-03-18 22:02:49

Waffle27 wrote:
Nah, thats okay. We can do Crypids. Will we eventually get around to SW though? If not, I'll just write a book about it, cause that was like my best idea ever

It would be fun to do after Cryptids, if you would be willing to wait smile
It was a general smiley ^^

Here is a charecter sheets

http://scratch-arabian-knights-writing-collab.wikia.com/wiki/Charecter_Sheets

Waffle27 · 2013-03-18 22:04:25

Kk, I called dibs on Pheonix...and...hmm...I'm going to do...I'm going to think about the rest. (This would be fun to make into a video game after we're done)

She_Is_Of_Dream · 2013-03-18 22:04:58

Yes it would ^^
Also, it was tails big_smile

destructo-serpent · 2013-03-18 22:07:41

video game or RPG. awesome. big_smile and SW is AWESOME. we will do it after.

ShadowOfArt · 2013-03-18 22:24:18

Name: Amaya

Nickname(s)?: Night, Rain, or Maya are nicknames friends may call her.

Cryptid: Hippocampus

Appearance:

Her chest, forelegs, and head are that of a horse. Her fur is a chocolate brown, and her glossy black hair covers her blue eyes most of the time. She has a white, star shaped marking on her forehead. Her hooves are a deep raven color.

Her back is a long 'fish' tail, which often is ciling and uncoiling. The scales are a brown were it molds into fur, but it slowly goes to blue to white. The large fin at the end of her tail is pure white with silver markings.

Relationships:
Undecided, yet, for the most part.

Humans - Hated, feared

Personality: Reckless, and paired with her ability to not care waht others think, can lead to her being rude. She tries to be nice, but she also hates working or putting herself out of her comfort zone. She is very excitable, and rarely serious. She is often worried for her friends, but hides it.

History:
Amaya's father didn't stick around to see her born. After Amaya was born, she lived with her mother for a short time, until a day came when the warm, shallow waters they had been living in had been discovered by humans. Amaya's mother told her to go through the small passage in the cave they were trapped in, however, her mother was captured by humans.

Amaya traveled deep into the sea, relying on the mercy of sea creatures. One day, she swam into a current and got rammed into a rock. She fell unconscious. She woke up, some time later, to see other Cryptids. She has stayed with them since.

Other:
This is a draft smile

Waffle27 · 2013-03-18 22:45:56

destructo-serpent wrote:
video game or RPG. awesome. and SW is AWESOME. we will do it after.

Both ideas were awesome, thats why we got a tie smile
This is going to be such a cool collab!!!

ShadowOfArt · 2013-03-18 22:55:53

Waffle27 wrote:
destructo-serpent wrote:
video game or RPG. awesome. and SW is AWESOME. we will do it after.
Both ideas were awesome, thats why we got a tie
This is going to be such a cool collab!!!

Going to be? It is! ^^

Crits on my CS draft?

destructo-serpent · 2013-03-18 22:56:07

Name: Seaserpentine Maximus the Third

Nickname(s)?: Coil

Cryptid: Sea Serpent

Appearance: thirty feet long, with blue-green scales and a tapered tail. Glowing orange eyes and three foot horns bending aerodynamically backwards. foot-long spikes down the top of his neck. teeth like double-bladed swords.

Relationships: ...

humans: Neutral, Disgusted.

Personality: Fierce, friendly, reserved, loyal, very bad to have as an enemy.

History: heir to the throne of a kindom of warrior sea serpents, Coil was usurped by his brother, who framed him as a murderer. Coil fled the kingdom. pursued by guards. he managed to escape and continued to move in the opposite direction, laughing at how easily he avoided the humans. eventually he found three other cryptids, and saw no reason not to join them.

Other: who likes?

(oh good, our first writing/typing, even if we haven't started yet.)

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ShadowOfArt · 2013-03-18 22:59:18

I like it ^_^

destructo-serpent · 2013-03-18 23:01:01

a usurped king should add to the storyline some smile

Waffle27 · 2013-03-18 23:01:16

Is it okay for there to be a boy Kelpie? Sorry, I only know the basic Cryptids. Well ifso...
Name:Epher
Nicknames:None really, though is often playfully called "Ephie" or "Seal"
Cryptid:Kelpie
Appearence: Brown seal in water, with white birthmark on his tail flipper. Out oof water, he is a handsome young man, about 20, with a tall, lean figure, and messy windblown brown hair with big, dark, eyes.
Hore Form is a chestnut horse with a White sock on his back left foot, and a white staron his forehead
Realationships: None. Yet...
Humans-Hates most of them, but has a few good friends that are humans
Personality-Mostly serious and stern, solemn, brave, opens up arounds his friends, and despite his stern personality, is fairly good at making new friends, though he doesn't get the chance to often.
History: Used to live in a safe sanctuary full of thriving Kelpie life, when one day a Human ship leaking oil floated above his village, dragging fishing nets in the water. Some of the Kelpies were trapped by the nets, others choked on oil. Epher had broken free of a fishing net, only to see his family lying dead from the oil. He swam fast and far, and is the only one he knows of who survived the attack on his village.
Met up with some other cryptids soon enough and made fast friends.

destructo-serpent · 2013-03-18 23:02:45

let's add the sheets to the wiki.

i'll add Coil

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ShadowOfArt · 2013-03-18 23:03:34

Waffle27 wrote:
Is it okay for there to be a boy Kelpie? Sorry, I only know the basic Cryptids. Well ifso...
Name:Epher
Nicknames:None really, though is often playfully called "Ephie" or "Seal"
Cryptid:Kelpie
Appearence: Brown seal in water, with white birthmark on his tail flipper. Out oof water, he is a handsome young man, about 20, with a tall, lean figure, and messy windblown brown hair with big, dark, eyes.
Hore Form is a chestnut horse with a White sock on his back left foot, and a white staron his forehead
Realationships: None. Yet...
Humans-Hates most of them, but has a few good friends that are humans
Personality-Mostly serious and stern, solemn, brave, opens up arounds his friends, and despite his stern personality, is fairly good at making new friends, though he doesn't get the chance to often.
History: Used to live in a safe sanctuary full of thriving Kelpie life, when one day a Human ship leaking oil floated above his village, dragging fishing nets in the water. Some of the Kelpies were trapped by the nets, others choked on oil. Epher had broken free of a fishing net, only to see his family lying dead from the oil. He swam fast and far, and is the only one he knows of who survived the attack on his village.
Met up with some other cryptids soon enough and made fast friends.

Oooooooohh, waffle you thinking what I am thinking for Amaya and Epher?

Opinions? ^^

Waffle27 · 2013-03-18 23:06:16

ShadowOfArt wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
Is it okay for there to be a boy Kelpie? Sorry, I only know the basic Cryptids. Well ifso...
Name:Epher
Nicknames:None really, though is often playfully called "Ephie" or "Seal"
Cryptid:Kelpie
Appearence: Brown seal in water, with white birthmark on his tail flipper. Out oof water, he is a handsome young man, about 20, with a tall, lean figure, and messy windblown brown hair with big, dark, eyes.
Hore Form is a chestnut horse with a White sock on his back left foot, and a white staron his forehead
Realationships: None. Yet...
Humans-Hates most of them, but has a few good friends that are humans
Personality-Mostly serious and stern, solemn, brave, opens up arounds his friends, and despite his stern personality, is fairly good at making new friends, though he doesn't get the chance to often.
History: Used to live in a safe sanctuary full of thriving Kelpie life, when one day a Human ship leaking oil floated above his village, dragging fishing nets in the water. Some of the Kelpies were trapped by the nets, others choked on oil. Epher had broken free of a fishing net, only to see his family lying dead from the oil. He swam fast and far, and is the only one he knows of who survived the attack on his village.
Met up with some other cryptids soon enough and made fast friends.
Oooooooohh, waffle you thinking what I am thinking for Amaya and Epher?

Opinions? ^^

Ooooo.... I wasn't actually thinking that but now that you mention it, the book could use a little romance wink

But we have to wait a bit first...drop sly hints here and there....

destructo-serpent · 2013-03-18 23:06:23

do we have a completed character sheets page on the Wiki?

ShadowOfArt · 2013-03-18 23:08:04

Waffle27 wrote:
ShadowOfArt wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
Is it okay for there to be a boy Kelpie? Sorry, I only know the basic Cryptids. Well ifso...
Name:Epher
Nicknames:None really, though is often playfully called "Ephie" or "Seal"
Cryptid:Kelpie
Appearence: Brown seal in water, with white birthmark on his tail flipper. Out oof water, he is a handsome young man, about 20, with a tall, lean figure, and messy windblown brown hair with big, dark, eyes.
Hore Form is a chestnut horse with a White sock on his back left foot, and a white staron his forehead
Realationships: None. Yet...
Humans-Hates most of them, but has a few good friends that are humans
Personality-Mostly serious and stern, solemn, brave, opens up arounds his friends, and despite his stern personality, is fairly good at making new friends, though he doesn't get the chance to often.
History: Used to live in a safe sanctuary full of thriving Kelpie life, when one day a Human ship leaking oil floated above his village, dragging fishing nets in the water. Some of the Kelpies were trapped by the nets, others choked on oil. Epher had broken free of a fishing net, only to see his family lying dead from the oil. He swam fast and far, and is the only one he knows of who survived the attack on his village.
Met up with some other cryptids soon enough and made fast friends.
Oooooooohh, waffle you thinking what I am thinking for Amaya and Epher?

Opinions? ^^
Ooooo.... I wasn't actually thinking that but now that you mention it, the book could use a little romance

But we have to wait a bit first...drop sly hints here and there....

Yes! It would be so cute <3 xD

Also, no we don't have charecter lists yet. Should I do that or does someone else want to?...

destructo-serpent · 2013-03-18 23:09:12

ShadowOfArt wrote:
Waffle27 wrote:
ShadowOfArt wrote:

Oooooooohh, waffle you thinking what I am thinking for Amaya and Epher?

Opinions? ^^
Ooooo.... I wasn't actually thinking that but now that you mention it, the book could use a little romance

But we have to wait a bit first...drop sly hints here and there....
Yes! It would be so cute <3 xD

Also, no we don't have charecter lists yet. Should I do that or does someone else want to?...

you can make the page, then we can all add our sheets when we finish

destructo-serpent · 2013-03-18 23:10:12

how about, in the prologue, there's four parts, and each part briefly goes through the history of one of the characters?

Waffle27 · 2013-03-18 23:10:16

lol LOL a mix between a hippocamp and a kelpie=Hippopie!!!

Waffle27 · 2013-03-18 23:12:28

destructo-serpent wrote:
how about, in the prologue, there's four parts, and each part briefly goes through the history of one of the characters?

Oh, yes good idea. But it would be suspenseful, so like
...Amaya watched as the net was thrown over her mother...

~Epher tasted something foul in the water. It was surrounding him, choking him...

Then later we would come back to Amaya or whoever the first person was.

Speaking of 1st person, is this going to be 1st person or 3rd person Point of Veiw?

ShadowOfArt · 2013-03-18 23:17:07

I like de prologue idea. ^^

http://scratch-arabian-knights-writing-collab.wikia.com/wiki/Cryptids:_Character_Sheets
You can add charecter sheets here^

Also, remember to take turns adding them, otherwise, we could mutilate it. XD

Who should go first, adding sheets?

Also, should we start writing our charecters part for the prologue? ^^

destructo-serpent · 2013-03-18 23:19:00

ill put mine on first

Waffle27 · 2013-03-18 23:20:27

ShadowOfArt wrote:
I like de prologue idea. ^^

http://scratch-arabian-knights-writing-collab.wikia.com/wiki/Cryptids:_Character_Sheets
You can add charecter sheets here^

Also, remember to take turns adding them, otherwise, we could mutilate it. XD

Who should go first, adding sheets?

Also, should we start writing our charecters part for the prologue? ^^

Yeah, I added that to the To-Do list.

*Hands Everyone Virtual Cookie*

Celebration Time!!! Our first book is now in progress!!

*tear* Big Milestone for this collab. Why, I remember the days when we were still picking out the genre...*memorful sniffle*

Waffle27 · 2013-03-18 23:22:09

Okay, when we're done with our history part, post it on here for the editors to, well, edit, and so the editors can combine them and make them suspenseful.

ANyone opinions on POV? I think third person would work best, what do you guys think?

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