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Yeah, good idea. Mission 4 couls be pretty long and be to train your apprentice, then part of it could be the dog thing, and a mini-game could be the moss training game. I was also thinking maybe the game tracks your apprentices experience, and when it reaches a certain number, they would become a warrior? And you have to watch as they complete the assessment, you have to try to keep in the shadows so they dont see you. And then you go to the Mooncave for their required stuff with the leader. Maybe then the Mission would end and you would see the foxes in the Mooncave and you, your leader, and your apprentice have to fight them off! So the Fox mission would be Mission 4 instead of 3?
What does everyone think?

no, mission 4 could be training, and mission 5 could be dog

Waffle27 wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

Maybe one of the cats die in between all this?

Maybe your leader wuld lose a life during the fox battle.

Yes!!

About the dog, a cat can't beat a dog on its own. It take 2 or 3 skilled warriors... Unless it is quite a failure of  a dog.

She_Is_Of_Dream wrote:

About the dog, a cat can't beat a dog on its own. It take 2 or 3 skilled warriors... Unless it is quite a failure of  a dog.

That is why I said run back to camp to gather patrol

This what I think should happen:
Mission 3 is still with the fox
in between receive apprentice
Mission 4 Training
Mission 5 Dog

madbunnygal wrote:

This what I think should happen:
Mission 3 is still with the fox
in between receive apprentice
Mission 4 Training
Mission 5 Dog

Again, a new warrior wouldn't be given an apprentice for awhile. Mission 4 being just training seems weird to me. Your a Warrior now, why is a whole section of story dedicated to more training? I can understand it as a Mission Objective, but Mission? Not really. (No offense meant)

For mission 6, I have an idea that could cause drama and character.


What if you catch a newly pregnant LightClan leaving the camp, and follow her, and find she is meeting with an Ember Clan tom, who apparently is the father.

Thoughts?

ShadowOfArt wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

This what I think should happen:
Mission 3 is still with the fox
in between receive apprentice
Mission 4 Training
Mission 5 Dog

Again, a new warrior wouldn't be given an apprentice for awhile. Mission 4 being just training seems weird to me. Your a Warrior now, why is a whole section of story dedicated to more training? I can understand it as a Mission Objective, but Mission? Not really. (No offense meant)

For mission 6, I have an idea that could cause drama and character.


What if you catch a newly pregnant LightClan leaving the camp, and follow her, and find she is meeting with an Ember Clan tom, who apparently is the father.

Thoughts?

Hm...Yes, this could work. What would happen next?

Waffle27 wrote:

ShadowOfArt wrote:

madbunnygal wrote:

This what I think should happen:
Mission 3 is still with the fox
in between receive apprentice
Mission 4 Training
Mission 5 Dog

Again, a new warrior wouldn't be given an apprentice for awhile. Mission 4 being just training seems weird to me. Your a Warrior now, why is a whole section of story dedicated to more training? I can understand it as a Mission Objective, but Mission? Not really. (No offense meant)

For mission 6, I have an idea that could cause drama and character.


What if you catch a newly pregnant LightClan leaving the camp, and follow her, and find she is meeting with an Ember Clan tom, who apparently is the father.

Thoughts?

Hm...Yes, this could work. What would happen next?

Maybe you wait for the tom to leave and confront her? either that or you go and tell the leader without talking to her first?

madbunnygal wrote:

What if you catch a newly pregnant LightClan leaving the camp, and follow her, and find she is meeting with an Ember Clan tom, who apparently is the father.
Maybe before you get an apprentice, this could happen, then the leader will see you trust worthy, and you will get an apprentice

I guess that could work... ^^ What kit would become your apprentice?

This what I think should happen:
Mission 3 is still with the fox
Mission 4You catch a newly pregnant LightClan leaving the camp, and follow her, and find she is meeting with an Ember Clan tom, who apparently is the father.You tell clan leader what you saw.
in between receive apprentice
Mission 4 Train your apprentice, with mini games ect.
Mission 5 Dog

Mission 3 is still the same.
Mission 4: You see a queen leaving camp. You follow her. You see that she is meeting an Emberclan tom, who is the father of their kit. You report to the clan leader
You receive an apprentice
Mission 5: Train your new apprentice. (We could add some mini games in here)
Mission 6: As you are training your apprentice, you see some dog tracks. You race home to get a patrol to track down and defeat the dog. You also hear wailing back at camp. You have to beat the dog within the time limit, so you can get back to camp and see what the commotion is. You find back at camp, there is another dog, and that one of the cats is badly injured. Defeat the dog to save the clan.


Does this make a bit more sense?