DIY wrote:
Nomolos wrote:
Great! I really despise country music but this song sounds pretty good!
It is awesome to see what a turnaround I've caused for two country non-lovers.
I wouldn't call it a turnaround: I still hate mainstream and most other kinds of country.
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fire219 wrote:
DIY wrote:
Nomolos wrote:
Great! I really despise country music but this song sounds pretty good!
It is awesome to see what a turnaround I've caused for two country non-lovers.
I wouldn't call it a turnaround: I still hate mainstream and most other kinds of country.
Even Johnny Cash?
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All4one wrote:
fire219 wrote:
DIY wrote:
It is awesome to see what a turnaround I've caused for two country non-lovers.I wouldn't call it a turnaround: I still hate mainstream and most other kinds of country.
Even Johnny Cash?
Shockingly, never heard any of his music (unless I forgot about it).
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It's better than your Rock Nomad, but I would have liked to hear more guitar
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fire219 wrote:
All4one wrote:
fire219 wrote:
I wouldn't call it a turnaround: I still hate mainstream and most other kinds of country.Even Johnny Cash?
Shockingly, never heard any of his music (unless I forgot about it).
What??? this is good even though it's a cover also good good even though I don't believe in God an oldie but a goodie
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fire219 wrote:
DIY wrote:
Nomolos wrote:
Great! I really despise country music but this song sounds pretty good!
It is awesome to see what a turnaround I've caused for two country non-lovers.
I wouldn't call it a turnaround: I still hate mainstream and most other kinds of country.
I suppose yes. Still, I'm glad I could produce a country song you enjoy.
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veggieman001 wrote:
fire219 wrote:
All4one wrote:
Even Johnny Cash?Shockingly, never heard any of his music (unless I forgot about it).
What??? this is good even though it's a cover also good good even though I don't believe in God an oldie but a goodie
Or this :p
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Cool!
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Is that Sackers Gothic?
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catachresis wrote:
Is that Sackers Gothic?
The "Gold Ringers" text bit? Probably yeah, although I could have used a similar looking font. But really, feedback on the actual song will be appreciated.
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I didn't like it.
The spirit of the song just wasn't there. You've never been on a horse (probably) and the meaning, the passion behind the song just isn't there, and it comes out forced.
But that's the problem with almost all country music today.
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There's a weird beepy sound in the background like the first minute of the track.
I agree with dontbombiraq, though; it lacks feeling. Sure, the instrumentation is decent, but it comes off a little bland in places. My favourite part about it is the piano, for sure, which does sound pretty good. The vocals are also a bit weak, and it seems to drag on for a bit longer than it needs to.
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dontbombiraq wrote:
I didn't like it.
The spirit of the song just wasn't there. You've never been on a horse (probably) and the meaning, the passion behind the song just isn't there, and it comes out forced.
But that's the problem with almost all country music today.
Well, that's your opinion and I can't really do much to change that. Do bear in mind though that you seem to be overly critical and hostile in your previous comments on my singles ("Light Amidst the Fog/If We Never See the Light" and "Ellipsis") as well. This is not the first time you’ve pointed out faults in my work; you've previously complained about certain chord progressions, songs being a drag and now, lack of spirit.
I do try my best to release songs for people to enjoy and I also appreciate constructive criticism, but I do not fancy constant “running down” of my work.
lmao at the fact that you seem to think a four-wheel drive is a horse. For the record, I have been on a horse although country music isn’t necessarily always associated with horses anyway. I really don’t see the point you were trying to make there…
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DIY wrote:
dontbombiraq wrote:
I didn't like it.
The spirit of the song just wasn't there. You've never been on a horse (probably) and the meaning, the passion behind the song just isn't there, and it comes out forced.
But that's the problem with almost all country music today.Well, that's your opinion and I can't really do much to change that. Do bear in mind though that you seem to be overly critical and hostile in your previous comments on my singles ("Light Amidst the Fog/If We Never See the Light" and "Ellipsis") as well. This is not the first time you’ve pointed out faults in my work; you've previously complained about certain chord progressions, songs being a drag and now, lack of spirit.
I do try my best to release songs for people to enjoy and I also appreciate constructive criticism, but I do not fancy constant “running down” of my work.
lmao at the fact that you seem to think a four-wheel drive is a horse. For the record, I have been on a horse although country music isn’t necessarily always associated with horses anyway. I really don’t see the point you were trying to make there…
I think he's like a Simon Cowell or Pier Morgan. He doesn't like alot but when he does he likes it alot.
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mythbusteranimator wrote:
DIY wrote:
dontbombiraq wrote:
I didn't like it.
The spirit of the song just wasn't there. You've never been on a horse (probably) and the meaning, the passion behind the song just isn't there, and it comes out forced.
But that's the problem with almost all country music today.Well, that's your opinion and I can't really do much to change that. Do bear in mind though that you seem to be overly critical and hostile in your previous comments on my singles ("Light Amidst the Fog/If We Never See the Light" and "Ellipsis") as well. This is not the first time you’ve pointed out faults in my work; you've previously complained about certain chord progressions, songs being a drag and now, lack of spirit.
I do try my best to release songs for people to enjoy and I also appreciate constructive criticism, but I do not fancy constant “running down” of my work.
lmao at the fact that you seem to think a four-wheel drive is a horse. For the record, I have been on a horse although country music isn’t necessarily always associated with horses anyway. I really don’t see the point you were trying to make there…I think he's like a Simon Cowell or Pier Morgan. He doesn't like alot but when he does he likes it alot.
Or John Lennon.
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All4one wrote:
mythbusteranimator wrote:
DIY wrote:
Well, that's your opinion and I can't really do much to change that. Do bear in mind though that you seem to be overly critical and hostile in your previous comments on my singles ("Light Amidst the Fog/If We Never See the Light" and "Ellipsis") as well. This is not the first time you’ve pointed out faults in my work; you've previously complained about certain chord progressions, songs being a drag and now, lack of spirit.
I do try my best to release songs for people to enjoy and I also appreciate constructive criticism, but I do not fancy constant “running down” of my work.
lmao at the fact that you seem to think a four-wheel drive is a horse. For the record, I have been on a horse although country music isn’t necessarily always associated with horses anyway. I really don’t see the point you were trying to make there…I think he's like a Simon Cowell or Pier Morgan. He doesn't like alot but when he does he likes it alot.
Or John Lennon.
Haha, John Lennon had a real acid tongue when it came to those he really disliked for reasons he thought justified, not every Tom, Dick and Harry. Otherwise he could be a really nice man when he wanted to (ever heard of the stranger who was sheltering at Tittenhurst Park, Lennon's former estate, whom John called in for breakfast)? x)
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DIY wrote:
All4one wrote:
mythbusteranimator wrote:
I think he's like a Simon Cowell or Pier Morgan. He doesn't like alot but when he does he likes it alot.Or John Lennon.
Haha, John Lennon had a real acid tongue when it came to those he really disliked for reasons he thought justified, not every Tom, Dick and Harry. Otherwise he could be a really nice man when he wanted to (ever heard of the stranger who was sheltering at Tittenhurst Park, Lennon's former estate, whom John called in for breakfast)? x)
Oh wow, I never heard of that. That's really great.
Yeah, John was a great soul. What he contributed to our world is incredible.
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DIY wrote:
dontbombiraq wrote:
I didn't like it.
The spirit of the song just wasn't there. You've never been on a horse (probably) and the meaning, the passion behind the song just isn't there, and it comes out forced.
But that's the problem with almost all country music today.Well, that's your opinion and I can't really do much to change that. Do bear in mind though that you seem to be overly critical and hostile in your previous comments on my singles ("Light Amidst the Fog/If We Never See the Light" and "Ellipsis") as well. This is not the first time you’ve pointed out faults in my work; you've previously complained about certain chord progressions, songs being a drag and now, lack of spirit.
Overly critical? I was just giving constructive criticism from what I hope is closer to a professional standpoint than a Scratcher standpoint
DIY wrote:
I do try my best to release songs for people to enjoy and I also appreciate constructive criticism, but I do not fancy constant “running down” of my work.
Again, I really wasn't trying to harsh your buzz with these comments. This last one was really directed at country music, not your song
DIY wrote:
]lmao at the fact that you seem to think a four-wheel drive is a horse. For the record, I have been on a horse although country music isn’t necessarily always associated with horses anyway. I really don’t see the point you were trying to make there…
Hmm, I distinctly remember hearing the word "horse" in the song...odd.
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dontbombiraq wrote:
DIY wrote:
dontbombiraq wrote:
I didn't like it.
The spirit of the song just wasn't there. You've never been on a horse (probably) and the meaning, the passion behind the song just isn't there, and it comes out forced.
But that's the problem with almost all country music today.Well, that's your opinion and I can't really do much to change that. Do bear in mind though that you seem to be overly critical and hostile in your previous comments on my singles ("Light Amidst the Fog/If We Never See the Light" and "Ellipsis") as well. This is not the first time you’ve pointed out faults in my work; you've previously complained about certain chord progressions, songs being a drag and now, lack of spirit.
Overly critical? I was just giving constructive criticism from what I hope is closer to a professional standpoint than a Scratcher standpoint
DIY wrote:
I do try my best to release songs for people to enjoy and I also appreciate constructive criticism, but I do not fancy constant “running down” of my work.
Again, I really wasn't trying to harsh your buzz with these comments. This last one was really directed at country music, not your song
DIY wrote:
lmao at the fact that you seem to think a four-wheel drive is a horse. For the record, I have been on a horse although country music isn’t necessarily always associated with horses anyway. I really don’t see the point you were trying to make there…
Hmm, I distinctly remember hearing the word "horse" in the song...odd.
Constructive criticism isn't pointing out all flaws. Sure, you can point out flaws, while giving good advice on where things were nailed down. I have failed to see that in your last three successive feedback comments over a span of Frozen Coco's and my solo singles. Directed at country music in general or not, it still concerns my song as it still classifies as "modern country music".
As you can clearly see, there's absolutely no horse reference here. If I had changed that, an edit notice would have appeared on the first post of the thread (which contains the lyrics that have not been changed at all since release) a long time ago.
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The thing that bothers me is that the vocal track is a bit to tinny sounding and stilll a bit too quiet. It does a bit of clipping like around 1:15. If you come up with some extra money buying a better microphone can really improve a track! Other than that a solid track overall.
As to pretty much all of the comments here best thing to do is ignore "haters" rather than a large argument.
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