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A Party of Five is a story I'm working on! When done, it will be around the size of an average children's novel. It's about a person who accidently woke up a dragon, and they have to go on a quest with four others to kill it.

Includes:
ADVENTURE!
HUMOR!
ROMANCE! (this will probably be the worst part of the story, but it will still be better than Twilight  )
REFERENCES TO ANOTHER WIP PROJECT THAT INVOLVES MINECRAFT! (it's an adventure map)

Introduction wrote:

Somewhere, deep within space, a dragon slept. The dragon had been sleeping forever since a date close to the beginning of time, and with each passing night, it grew stronger.  Each year, the dragon was awoken, and it would decide the fate of the Earth Year. Many times, the dragon chose to harm the humans in some way, from financial collapse to great wars with countless deaths.  The only thing the dragon really wanted was to approach the humans and set them ablaze with fire, crumble their cities, and, most importantly, curse the descendants of the Great Hero who survived the chaos forever. The dragon couldn’t even count the reasons he was mad at that one human who was chosen to defeat his father and trap the dragon in this deep slumber! The dragon would get his revenge someday. Someday…

    “Sirco the Great! Respond to me!” A voice appeared in the dragon’s head. So Sirco was his name? The master always referred to him as “Beast” or “Great Dragon”
    “Yes my master, I am here,” replied Sirco. While the dragon was asleep, he could still communicate through ESP.
    “It is time for another prophecy to decide the fate of Earth!” said the master.
    “Let’s see… I’ll have all the world’s countries get into a 59-year war, a terrorist shall nuke all the major landmarks in the USA, and-“
    “Oh my gosh Sirco, you have become really violent with your ideas! Let me guess… another plot to wipe out the Great Hero’s descendants? This time, I will veto any plan you give me.”
    “But, how am I supposed to decide the fate, then?
    “Sirco, the prophecy has already been decided. Long ago, when your father was killed by the Great Hero, a fortune teller made a new prophecy. I will now read it too you. I’m sure you will like it.”
    “Alright, carry on."
    The master pulled out a piece of parchment and read to the dragon:

A young child shall awaken the dragon once more
Causing the world to fall to ruin
The foolish child shall travel with an awkward party of five
In an attempt to slay the dragon and save all
One of the party members has the Great Hero in their blood
And that descendant will be the Chosen One;
The wielder of the Blade of Hope
Which may deliver the finishing blow
And save the world once again

    Sirco was confused. “How would I like that prophecy? It ultimately spells my death out!”
    The master sighed. “It didn’t say that you would absolutely die.  Yes, you may perish, but the prophecy says you at least have a chance. Besides, I have taken the responsibility of choosing the ones to go on the quest mentioned. I promise I will choose the least likely to succeed.”
    “Well, alright. If I can at least murder the Great Hero’s descendants, it will be worth the pain.”
    The master chuckled. “You are obsessed with that man. All the dragons ended up being killed by humans in the past, expect for you. And you seem more ready to battle than ever. So, shall the prophecy begin?”
Sirco grinned through his sleep. “Yes. Let it begin.”

So, what do you think?