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hungergamesfanatic · 2012-12-23 01:20:23

Have you ever wondered why we have clowns? How they got the idea of clowns? Well, the story behind it is a gory one, and it will change the way you think of clowns. Are you still ready?

Many many years ago, in the year of 1912 there was a young boy of seven, named Jason. Now like most boys he loved to imagine, yet his imaginings were a little.. Disturbing. He had heard of many murders and he pretended to be a killer himself. He'd go through his mothers garden dissecting frogs and mice with his pocketknife. His mother knew nothing of this and thought, the cat was killing off the small creatures. Jason formed a sort-of club, with his friends. They grew through the years and they were in their adolescent years. One boy, Charles, particuarly hated the boys. He called them names until one named stuck. The Clowns.

The boys were angered deeply, December 24th was the night they knew who they were. They took butcher knives and headed to the Charles' house.

*Gore skipping because this is Scratch, and I want people who can't handle gore to be able to read this story.*

Charles lay ice cold on the floor of his bedroom in a pool of sticky red blood. The killing was done. The 'Clowns' scooped up handfuls of blood and spread it across their faces, made themselves look like today's clowns with their dramatic faces.

They grabbed the dead Charles, and threw his body into the barrel of ale outside the saloon. The body froze there that Winter. The Clowns enjoyed stabbing their victims, and they went after everyone who called them names. They never left any evidence behind, except one night, Jason was pushed around by another boy, and dropped his knife. With fingerprints on it.

They were eventually caught and were hung on the gallows on April 26th, 1937. The young boy who enjoyed torturing frogs and mice- was dead.

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DONE! I may add a bit more later, but you can consider it done.

Please, don't just be all like, This is so good!!!!!!111!!!;! I mean, you can if you want but, I would rather have some constructive criticism.

Last edited by hungergamesfanatic (2012-12-24 11:30:20)

bananaman114 · 2012-12-23 01:36:47

serial killers yay

luiysia · 2012-12-23 01:38:41

note 2 da kiddez

clown (n.)
1560s, also cloyne, "rustic, boor, peasant," origin uncertain. Perhaps from Scandinavian dialect (cf. Icelandic klunni "clumsy, boorish fellow;" Swedish kluns "a hard knob, a clumsy fellow"), or akin to North Frisian klönne "clumsy person," or, less likely, from L. colonus "colonist, farmer." Meaning "fool, jester" is c.1600. "The pantomime clown represents a blend of the Shakes[pearean] rustic with one of the stock types of the It. comedy" [Weekley]. Meaning "contemptible person" is from 1920s.

hungergamesfanatic · 2012-12-24 11:23:29

Bump!

mythbusteranimator · 2012-12-24 11:36:57

Cool!

But isn't that fact from Ronald McDonald's autobiography?

zubblewu · 2012-12-24 11:41:57

mythbusteranimator wrote:
Cool!

But isn't that fact from Ronald McDonald's autobiography?

no itſ from jaſonſ
jaſon iſ beſt clown
i ſee hiſ ſhow every friday the 13th

mythbusteranimator · 2012-12-24 11:47:11

zubblewu wrote:
mythbusteranimator wrote:
Cool!

But isn't that fact from Ronald McDonald's autobiography?
no itſ from jaſonſ
jaſon iſ beſt clown
i ſee hiſ ſhow every friday the 13th

Aww..
Why Jason?
Can't it be someone WITHOUT superpowers from a demon heart or curse or something?

jukyter · 2012-12-24 13:51:27

luiysia wrote:
note 2 da kiddez

clown (n.)
1560s, also cloyne, "rustic, boor, peasant," origin uncertain. Perhaps from Scandinavian dialect (cf. Icelandic klunni "clumsy, boorish fellow;" Swedish kluns "a hard knob, a clumsy fellow"), or akin to North Frisian klönne "clumsy person," or, less likely, from L. colonus "colonist, farmer." Meaning "fool, jester" is c.1600. "The pantomime clown represents a blend of the Shakes[pearean] rustic with one of the stock types of the It. comedy" [Weekley]. Meaning "contemptible person" is from 1920s.

srsly u ly
don u no 'clown' com from nintyn twelv wat hugr gam fan attik said omgg

banana500 · 2012-12-24 23:15:20

It seemed your story had potential, but then you cut out the gore, and made it flat.

Can you at least make the gore part invisible and say "Highlight at your own risk" or omethin like that?

hungergamesfanatic · 2012-12-25 01:37:59

Ah, good idea. Will do.

777w · 2012-12-25 02:07:52

banana500 wrote:
It seemed your story had potential, but then you cut out the gore, and made it flat.

Can you at least make the gore part invisible and say "Highlight at your own risk" or omethin like that?

if they gave me a warning for drug references i dont think gore will fly, at all

soupoftomato · 2013-01-25 13:33:47

777w wrote:
banana500 wrote:
It seemed your story had potential, but then you cut out the gore, and made it flat.

Can you at least make the gore part invisible and say "Highlight at your own risk" or omethin like that?
if they gave me a warning for drug references i dont think gore will fly, at all

we had bodies twitching on the ground
(but im not sure if they noticed that yet man)

hungergamesfanatic · 2013-01-28 00:00:27

Bump

Necromaster · 2013-01-28 00:05:55

ok now im going to have nitemares

srsly :OOO

hungergamesfanatic · 2013-01-28 00:19:50

Necromaster wrote:
ok now im going to have nitemares

srsly :OOO

Ahaha..

Good.

Last edited by hungergamesfanatic (2013-01-28 00:20:18)

hungergamesfanatic · 2013-02-14 22:21:02

BURMPZS

and that Is how to bring up your post if You are awesome

zubblewu · 2013-02-14 22:25:54

needs more death :'(

Laternenpfahl · 2013-02-14 22:28:10

zubblewu wrote:
mythbusteranimator wrote:
Cool!

But isn't that fact from Ronald McDonald's autobiography?
no it's from jaſon's
jaſon is beſt clown
i ſee his ſhow every friday the 13th

No ſ ſhall be uſed at the end of a word, zubblewu. It is againſt the rule.

zubblewu · 2013-02-14 22:30:35

Laternenpfahl wrote:
zubblewu wrote:
mythbusteranimator wrote:
Cool!

But isn't that fact from Ronald McDonald's autobiography?
no it's from jaſon's
jaſon is beſt clown
i ſee his ſhow every friday the 13th
No ſ ſhall be uſed at the end of a word, zubblewu. It is againſt the rule.

yes but rules r 4 luzrs
#YOLO

Necromaster · 2013-02-14 22:43:48

zubblewu wrote:
Laternenpfahl wrote:
zubblewu wrote:

no it's from jaſon's
jaſon is beſt clown
i ſee his ſhow every friday the 13th
No ſ ſhall be uſed at the end of a word, zubblewu. It is againſt the rule.
yes but rules r 4 luzrs
#YOLO

Ah, I see we don't respect the rules of grammar either, do we?

zubblewu · 2013-02-14 22:50:08

Necromaster wrote:
zubblewu wrote:
Laternenpfahl wrote:

No ſ ſhall be uſed at the end of a word, zubblewu. It is againſt the rule.
yes but rules r 4 luzrs
#YOLO
Ah, I see we don't respect the rules of grammar either, do we?

it's a rule
4 luzrs like u lololol
i m so superyr
rules are made to be broken

GeonoTRON2000 · 2013-02-14 23:12:54

zubblewu wrote:
rules are made to be broken

With an axe.

hungergamesfanatic · 2013-02-14 23:25:09

GeonoTRON2000 wrote:
With an axe.

OH SHANAP

ahem back on topic

if you wish to discuss ſ's and grammar this link

banana500 · 2013-02-14 23:35:40

777w wrote:
banana500 wrote:
It seemed your story had potential, but then you cut out the gore, and made it flat.

Can you at least make the gore part invisible and say "Highlight at your own risk" or omethin like that?
if they gave me a warning for drug references i dont think gore will fly, at all

Yes of course.

Because everything here must be SAFFFEE FO DA KIDDIEEEZ.

777w · 2013-02-14 23:37:01

banana500 wrote:
777w wrote:
banana500 wrote:
It seemed your story had potential, but then you cut out the gore, and made it flat.

Can you at least make the gore part invisible and say "Highlight at your own risk" or omethin like that?
if they gave me a warning for drug references i dont think gore will fly, at all
Yes of course.

Because everything here must be SAFFFEE FO DA KIDDIEEEZ.

scratch is supposed to be an all ages site tho so i can see why they take all these measures against anything remotely objectionable

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