Scratch

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/coinman/3064917

Can I have some reviews on my pong games, please?

They were submitted a few hours ago.
They have CNMustang in their names.

Game review: CBOX Multi Player Pong Game

Art:  2/10
The art was quite simple and can be done in a few minutes. I'm sorry but I think you could have spent more time on the sprites...

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  3/10
Yeah it was fun but I have played these before and this one isn't much different. Scratchers are making very advanced projects that deserve a better score than this...

Originality: 2/10
I have definitely seen pong games before and I feel now that you are a scratcher you should try harder to make more advanced projects...

Addictive?  4/10
It was fun and I had a go playing my friend but to make it better I think you could have added a CPU option to it...


My personal opinion:  4/10
This isn't the best project I have ever seen but I think you tried hard on it which is what counts!

Total: 15/50
Title:  Fun pong game!

Can you review cuthbert's adventure by 7scratch7?

Game review: Snake v1

Art:  3/10
The art was fairly simple, I think you could have added different fruits or make the snake look a bit more like a snake...

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  4/10
I like playing snake. I liked the original and this was a bit like it, but I also think you should have made it more advanced...

Originality: 3/10
I have seen snake games on scratch before. This isn't much different so therefore gets a lowish score...

Addictive?  5/10
I though it was addictive. I enjoyed getting a great score (which was 47 by the way) so I think this should get a good score too!

My personal opinion:  3/10
It was fun but you could have done better on this game...

Total: 18/50
Title:  Enjoyable classic game!

iaoumeur wrote:

Game review: Scratch Cat detective

Art:  4/10
It was a bit basic for my taste. I know you can produce some excellent graphics so why not put them to use!

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  6/10
I like the scratch cat detective idea and the story seems to be the main thing. I just think it would be more fun if you made it look better...

Originality: 7/10
Never seen a detective game to do with the scratch cat so well done!

Addictive?  6/10
I wanted to earn these coins and see what they do. I'm afraid I can't give a higher score because it is just a demo...

My personal opinion:  6/10
I like this idea and I think it will be a great project when finished. I just think you could have improved the art and I know this is a demo but I have to say it- it needs more puzzles!

Total: 29/50
Title: Interesting detective game!

P.S: The Dot 2 is out if you want to see it...

Quite frankly, in my opinion, you shouldn't have mentioned the art in the story section, but whatever. The art is changing soon, don't worry. I'll have you review the completed game soon!

Game review: Cubert's Adventure (requested by dsaztur)

Art:  9/10
The art really suits the theme and I love the art in the story at the beginning!

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  9/10
There was a really cool storyline (which most platformer games don't have) and I found it really fun. I know the platformer base wasn't yours but I think most of the other stuff is your ideas which is really cool!

Originality: 7/10
Ok I have seen many platformer games before and this had the same plot but the idea and storyline was pretty unique!

Addictive?  10/10
I couldn't stop playing! The scripts were really smooth and the graphics were awesome and gave the game a great feel. I loved it!

My personal opinion:  9/10
I don't have much to say. It's a really cool platformer game with a nice story! It deserved the number of views it got!

Total: 44/50
Title:  Smooth platformer game!

Sholvanic1058 wrote:

This is still me but, on another account! (Project is)

Sonic Smash Bros Demo

I can't really play it... Whenever I play the characters don't appear and I can't fight...

Hey could you review Halo 2D?'

Game review: Halo 2D

Art:  9/10
I really like the art! I think you're really good at drawing and should make the level designs a bit more complex...

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  7/10
It was quite fun to play. It also had a story which was good. However I think the movement was a bit slow. If you made it a bit more smooth it would have got a higher score...

Originality: 8/10
I've never seen a Halo game on scratch and most of the art was yours, well done!

Addictive?  6/10
It was quite addictive but again I think because the movement was glitchy it slowed the game down. I also think there should be more levels!

My personal opinion:  8/10
For one of your first games, this was REALLY good! I really liked the artwork and I think you will do well in scratch!

Total: 38/50
Title:  Halo on scratch!

Game review: Runaway balls

Art:  8/10
I liked the art, it matched the theme and looked great! However I guess you could say it was a bit simple...

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  9/10
It was REALLY fun for me! I love those kind of games and I enjoyed this one just as much!

Originality: 6/10
I've seen this attempted but none have really been as good as this! However I think the cannon was a bit slow...

Addictive?  8/10
I couldn't stop playing! It was really addictive and I wanted to see what different kind of balls there would be but it was a shame there were only three levels...

My personal opinion:  9/10
For one of your first games, this was also very good! The scripts were smooth and when I first saw it it looked like it had been made by a scratcher who had been on here for years!

Total: 40/50
Title:  Smooth ball shooting game!

P.S Sorry I couldn't review it on scratch 2.0...

Last edited by iaoumeur (2013-02-01 12:53:53)

Ok I can't wait to play it! 

Can you do these 2?

Sonic Time Twisted Act 1 ~ Radical Highway ~ Future

Sonic RPG Episode Episode Part 1