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I think we need to remove the "Must be able to program some C++, which EsenthelScript is based on." in the op and replace it with:

Must be able to program using Javascript, C# or Boo, which Unity scripts are based on.

The elven kingdom of Dontil is first created. The elven priests and druids bring life and magic to the world. The northern kingdom of Doorward, home of the Dwarves, erupts into civil war between clans, vying for the throne of the Underhall. A few of the far western Barbarians of the Wildlands begin to settle, they build villages and farm the land. The Barbarians are eventually united under one banner by the First King. The new kingdom is branded the Shield Lands, and the castle and city of Ravensburg are proclaimed capital. The Icebane clan of Dwarves wins the civil war of the Dwarves. The leader of the Icebane is Amaggor Icebane. He is proclaimed High King of Doorward. The Orcs of the River Tribes raid human and dwarven settlements. The Greenskins grow braver in their attacks; they are led by a warrior by the name of Agatak the Dwarfmangler. The horde of Greenskins march across the Shield Lands. The Dwarves and Elves come to the humans aid. This begins the First War. The war lasts for many months. Eventually Agatak the Dwarfmangler falls in battle to Arcturus Ravenheart, a mighty paladin and commander of the human armies. Ravenheart is named First Knight of the King, Defender of the King and Crown. Arcturus chooses the bravest human warriors to defend the king as his Order of Knights. Peace is maintained for hundreds of years, other than the occasional raid by Orc and Ogre forces. When a red dragon is sighted in the northeastern mountains of Abbor-Alz, a party of adventurers are hired to slay the beast. Ashcalon, the Red Dragon, slays the adventurers. A lich commands an army of undead. The Knights meet the undead in battle. The armies of Elves, Dwarves, and Halfling Mercenaries join the battle with the undead. The army of the kingdom is stretched thin. On one side they battle the rising horde of undead, and on the other Ashcalon.

What do you think?

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Necromaster wrote:

The elven kingdom of Dontil is first created. The elven priests and druids bring life and magic to the world. The northern kingdom of Doorward, home of the Dwarves, erupts into civil war between clans, vying for the throne of the Underhall. A few of the far western Barbarians of the Wildlands begin to settle, they build villages and farm the land.
The Barbarians are eventually united under one banner by the First King. The new kingdom is branded the Shield Lands, and the castle and city of Ravensburg are proclaimed capital.
The Icebane clan of Dwarves wins the civil war of the Dwarves. The leader of the Icebane is Amaggor Icebane. He is proclaimed High King of Doorward. The Orcs of the River Tribes raid human and dwarven settlements.
The Greenskins grow braver in their attacks; they are led by a warrior by the name of Agatak the Dwarfmangler. The horde of Greenskins march across the Shield Lands. The Dwarves and Elves come to the humans aid.
This begins the First War. The war lasts for many months. Eventually Agatak the Dwarfmangler falls in battle to Arcturus Ravenheart, a mighty paladin and commander of the human armies.
Ravenheart is named First Knight of the King, Defender of the King and Crown. Arcturus chooses the bravest human warriors to defend the king as his Order of Knights. Peace is maintained for hundreds of years, other than the occasional raid by Orc and Ogre forces.
When a red dragon is sighted in the northeastern mountains of Abbor-Alz, a party of adventurers are hired to slay the beast. Ashcalon, the Red Dragon, slays the adventurers.
A lich commands an army of undead. The Knights meet the undead in battle. The armies of Elves, Dwarves, and Halfling Mercenaries join the battle with the undead. The army of the kingdom is stretched thin. On one side they battle the rising horde of undead, and on the other Ashcalon.

What do you think?

is it supposed to be readable
or vaguely original

Necromaster wrote:

is this post above me supposed to be clever

Jukyter can be pretty sarcastic, don't mind him.

hungergamesfanatic wrote:

Jukyter can be pretty sarcastic, don't mind him.

do u no wat sarcasm means

Necromaster wrote:

jukyter wrote:

Necromaster wrote:

The elven kingdom of Dontil is first created. The elven priests and druids bring life and magic to the world. The northern kingdom of Doorward, home of the Dwarves, erupts into civil war between clans, vying for the throne of the Underhall. A few of the far western Barbarians of the Wildlands begin to settle, they build villages and farm the land.
The Barbarians are eventually united under one banner by the First King. The new kingdom is branded the Shield Lands, and the castle and city of Ravensburg are proclaimed capital.
The Icebane clan of Dwarves wins the civil war of the Dwarves. The leader of the Icebane is Amaggor Icebane. He is proclaimed High King of Doorward. The Orcs of the River Tribes raid human and dwarven settlements.
The Greenskins grow braver in their attacks; they are led by a warrior by the name of Agatak the Dwarfmangler. The horde of Greenskins march across the Shield Lands. The Dwarves and Elves come to the humans aid.
This begins the First War. The war lasts for many months. Eventually Agatak the Dwarfmangler falls in battle to Arcturus Ravenheart, a mighty paladin and commander of the human armies.
Ravenheart is named First Knight of the King, Defender of the King and Crown. Arcturus chooses the bravest human warriors to defend the king as his Order of Knights. Peace is maintained for hundreds of years, other than the occasional raid by Orc and Ogre forces.
When a red dragon is sighted in the northeastern mountains of Abbor-Alz, a party of adventurers are hired to slay the beast. Ashcalon, the Red Dragon, slays the adventurers.
A lich commands an army of undead. The Knights meet the undead in battle. The armies of Elves, Dwarves, and Halfling Mercenaries join the battle with the undead. The army of the kingdom is stretched thin. On one side they battle the rising horde of undead, and on the other Ashcalon.

What do you think?

is it supposed to be readable
or vaguely original

is this post above me supposed to be clever

well uh
let's play count the cliches
"The elven kingdom of Dontil" hey what about dont'il?? did you forget the bad fantasy writer's constant companion
"The northern kingdom of Doorward, home of the Dwarves, erupts into civil war between clans, vying for the throne of the Underhall" ooh civil war
and dwarven civil war! http://www.wowwiki.com/War_of_the_Three_Hammers
http://wiki.guildwars.com/wiki/Dwarf
it's not like youve already admitted to being wow influenced amirit amirit??
"The Barbarians are eventually united under one banner by the First King." ooh a barbarian race united by mystical stranger
"The Orcs of the River Tribes raid human and dwarven settlements." orcs with a grudge against dwarves! http://lotr.wikia.com/wiki/War_of_the_Dwarves_and_Orcs
"The horde of Greenskins march across the Shield Lands" greenskins for orcs?? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Greenskins
"The war lasts for many months" did u mean yrs
"Agatak the Dwarfmangler" what about ag'a'tak th'e dw'arfma'ng'le'r?? and an orc with a personal grudge against dwarves?? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Azog#Azog ((this one's a little weak i admit))
"Arcturus Ravenheart" http://www.wowhead.com/item=66973/ravenheart-longbow http://www.fantasybookreview.co.uk/David-Gemmell/Ravenheart.html
"When a red dragon is sighted in the northeastern mountains of Abbor-Alz" http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Chromatic_dragon_(Dungeons_%26_Dragons)#Red_dragon http://www.wowwiki.com/Red_dragon
and here on it just smells a bit funny & i cant be bothered to do anymore

^ Well handled.

Anywho I think the storyline is quite good!

Necromaster wrote:

hungergamesfanatic wrote:

^ Well handled.

Anywho I think the storyline is quite good!

Thanks. For a first draft, I think it's great. We should work out some of the details. I think more gods, actually. Like 7 or 8 good gods and 7 evil ones.

So many could get quite confusing though.

Laternenpfahl wrote:

jji7skyline wrote:

Is there a Mac version?

Not yet, but unity (we're switching to it) runs on mac.

Cool. I look forward to it.

Haha! Working on the storyline...

So where is the new design document for Delve?

Necromaster wrote:

Nomolos wrote:

So where is the new design document for Delve?

delve.pbworks.com

It's a wiki, actually.

It says I'm not a member.