oh is christopher related to my character?
mines Thomas Black, an old war veteran whos taken up the art of blacksmithing/ advanced robotechnology, meaning he creates really good space armour and weaponry. he lives on Vega 6 a machine planet, and hes human. he's around 55 years old, and hes got a big bushy beard
by the way, my chair's back just broke off
/sad
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No. Or maybe. He only remembered he had a mom.
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how old is he? cuz what if Thomas Black is his grandad
oh yes, 13
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Who knows? Well anyways, Chris is on Earth II. Earth II is in a predicament: follow the much-more-powerful-than-the-planet Vendeeni or be destroyed. The public has mixed feelings. The government of the planet has mixed feelings.
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the answer is easy
follow it
why destroy your civilization?
if someone asked you to join their reading club or get your brains blown out, what would be the obvious answer?
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Actually, the I.F. will do just about anything to destroy Vendeeni followers. If someone asked you to join their reading club or get your brains blown out, but if you join, another reading club will try to blow your brains out. A currently more powerful one.
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Yeah. In the midst of the confusion, the Vendeeni say "You have one day to decide." Now the confusion was more frantic. "And don't even think about getting help: we've cut off all ways off the planet as well as any from of communication," they add.
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did i forget to mention that Thomas Black was a space pirate back in the day?
well heres whats gonna happen
he hears about his grandson's trouble and assembles his old crew and they crashland on earth 2 and help refugees and stuff, then they have pirate adventures! in space!
and they tie into the main plot and stuff too
ugh but this is gonna take me ages to write out and i gotta go do my civics homework
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Chris won't join probably. Heart of steel, remember?
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by the way whys he hunting alex? alex didnt even do anything yet and besides hes only 13 he cant kill a 25 year old
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Ahem. That kid killed the king Groopian (Groopians are creatures that love acid as a weapon). And the reason he's attacking Alex is because of an order by IF...
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why? so he joined some random assasin group? you should make some older characters, 13 year olds arent really that strong
i beat up a bunch of grade 7s when i graduated elementary
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Why are all your characters so young, google? How can a 13 year old be a bounty hunter? Unless of course they're an incomplete arcobaleno or something but that's from another show.
And why is an assasin group after a space detective?

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No, reborn. I don't watch bleach.
An arcobaleno is a cursed baby. An adult becomes a baby for the rest of their life. If it's an incomplete arcobaleno, they start to age after being turned into a baby,
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LIAR U WATCH BLEACHHHHHH
so whats with chris? cuz i thought he was on earth 2 so shouldnt he be trying to defend his planet instead of working for the people who are trying to take it over?
what i understand is that earth 2 is being fought over by I.F. and the vermeedi
its just like alien vs. predator
no matter who wins, earth II loses
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Alex and the butler finally arrive at the mansion. "Here we are, Master Alex." says the butler as he opens the door. A man in a custom made italian tuxedo is standing at the top of the stairs. "Alex Farrel, welcome to my manor." he says as he walks down. "William, please bring us some coffee." he says to the butler. "Right away, master." says the butler as he walks away. "I would like you to investigate the death of Rebecca Wyndell." "Ah, I've heard about that. She was the wife of that space station tycoon, Jeremiah Foster, wasn't she?" asks Alex. "Yes. About 2 months ago, she commited suicide after getting a divorce from her husband. He has claimed that she had started drinking after they hit a rough patch, and that she wasn't acting like herself. The official reason for the divorce was Rebecca's unborn baby who died in the womb, but the real reason was because she had cheated on him with one of the gardeners. A source I have has said that she and the gardener had made plans to get together, but she killed herself the day before the meeting. I find it odd that she would prepare to such lengths and then kill herself. I know the husband has something to do with this." "I see. So you want me to investigate the husband, and find out what I can, eh? No problem. But what is your relationship with this Rebecca that you'd hire me to find her killer?" "It's because she is my sister. I can give you clearance into his buildings, as I was a former executive of his company." says the man.
Alex sets off from the mansion to one of Foster's business towers. At the front desk, he shows the secretary his pass, and then enters the building. A tall man walks up to him. "Who are you, and why are you here?" he asks. "I'm a private accountant hired by Mr. Foster to investigate the profit margin of his company." replies Alex. "I never heard of this. I'm going to ask Foster myself." "Uh, wait! I heard that Mr. Foster recently left for an important business trip to Famura Exius." "Is that so? I guess I must have confused the times for the trip. Anyway, how is your investigation going, Mr.-" "Ah, Falters. Roy Falters. It is going relatively well. I need some history on Mr. Foster. Do you think you could assist me?" "Very well." replies the man as he starts talking.
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Lupin wakes up but non one is there. "Huh? where am I?" He mumbles to himself and discovers that he isn't at Serenity Lake. He's sitting in a chair in a white room. "Welcome, your testing is about to begin." A disemodied female voice says. "Huh?" Lupin mumbles then the room turns into a field with an odd creature in a cage. "The Rekeenar will be released." The voice says as the cage opens and the things eyes open.
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My characters are young because I like making characters that aren't much older than me.
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norberts wrote:
But it isn't that believable or realistic making a kid who's a bounty hunter.
I know, it came to me in a dream. Except the kid was a bit older.
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So anyways Alex and the businessman talk. Alex finds out that the wife was cheating on the rich spaceship tycoon. "Well, thanks for the information." he tells the guy. A feeling in his gut tells him he's not through yet, so he secretly follows the other guy after he pretended to leave.
"Sir, I've told the man who came to inquire about your wife everything you told me to." he says while on the phone. Alex exits the building, but decides to do a little investigation before returning to the client. "Ah *, he's got my ship." Alex says, remembering that the Bloody Mercury is parked at the client's house. He remembers that an old aquainte of his lives around these parts, a weapons dealer by the name of Shady Jim. He heads out for Jim's shop.

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