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Programmer_112 wrote:

Can you please review my Neurono OS?

Um... Sorry but I don't really have a criteria for Os' this thread is for game reviews, sorry...

bonechill wrote:

red dot 1 and 2 please.

I'm working on it!

iaoumeur wrote:

Game review: Red Dot 4.0

Art:  6/10
The art was nice and matched the theme but very basic. You could have made the slime look a little more like slime...

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  6/10
There was no story, I think there should have been for this type of game. It was still quite fun but it got a bit tiresome because it was quite long... 


Originality: 6/10
Again I have seen a lot of platformer games and I do like the fact that there are many additions like teleporters but it would have looked nicer if you made it look more realistic...

Addictive?  7/10
It was addictive, that's for sure! There were some nice additions like ones that allowed you to fly. However, although it is good to have loads of levels I think you overdid it.


My personal opinion:  8/10
Yes it was fun. Yes there were some cool extras but at the end of the day it is just a platformer game... Don't be discouraged though because it is a really great game!

Total: 33/50
Title:  Platformer with loads of levels!

and 2?

Game review: Red Dot 2

Art:  4/10
Again I feel the art could have been improved, this was just exactly the same as the first but with new levels

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  4/10
Sorry but I didn't feel that this was fun. After playing the first I got bored very easily...


Originality: 3/10
I'm so sorry, this is a good game but I think you could have changed it a bit from the the first one... When I played it it felt exactly the same.

Addictive?  5/10
Again it was fun but it was the same as the first so I got bored...


My personal opinion:  5/10
I don't have a lot to say. All I can tell you, bonechill is that I think you should have made it a bit better than the first one. After all, it is a sequel...

Total: 21/50
Title:  Kinda fun sequel...

Tower of Death

iaoumeur wrote:

Game review: Fruit Ninja demo

Art:  7/10
The art was nice, I really liked the watermelons however there could have been more fruit to slice. I know this is a demo but you could have added a couple of extra things...

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  7/10
Yeah it was fun slicing fruit just like in the original. But although this is a demo I think you could have added a menu or different game modes...

Originality: 2/10
Yeah... This is kinda copied. It has already been made on scratch AND as an app so you got a low score...

Addictive?  6/10
It was quite addictive with the points and stuff but again I think you need more game modes...

My personal opinion:  8/10
I do like this game, I can see you put effort into this game and want it more well known. However it is just a demo so I can't really give it an accurate score...

Total: 28/50
Title:  Addictive fruit slicing game!

I think you are being a bit generous...

I think, in the state it is in, it deserves about 20/50, just for pure lack of a finished game but...

Game review: Tower of Death

Art:  8/10
I loved the art! It had a great RPG feel to it which was nice, however it would have been great if it was a little bigger. I wear glasses and it was kinda hard to see...

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  8/10
There was no story but I think there should have been! For such a great game there should be a great story to go with it! It was still really fun though, I loved the infinite levels!

Originality: 9/10
Never seen something like this before! It was like a typical RPG but in a tower. I have also never seen a game with infinite levels, how did you do it?

Addictive?  9/10
I was addicted! There were infinite random levels that were filled with monsters and chests, nice idea!

My personal opinion:  9/10
This game was really fun. I don't need to expand on that but I also think there could have been slight improvements. For example, with the variable "Armed" you could have had a sword in the character's hands instead. However it was still a cool idea!

Total: 43/50
Title:  Epic RPG game!

iaoumeur wrote:

Game review: Tower of Death

Art:  8/10
I loved the art! It had a great RPG feel to it which was nice, however it would have been great if it was a little bigger. I wear glasses and it was kinda hard to see...

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  8/10
There was no story but I think there should have been! For such a great game there should be a great story to go with it! It was still really fun though, I loved the infinite levels!

Originality: 9/10
Never seen something like this before! It was like a typical RPG but in a tower. I have also never seen a game with infinite levels, how did you do it?

Addictive?  9/10
I was addicted! There were infinite random levels that were filled with monsters and chests, nice idea!

My personal opinion:  9/10
This game was really fun. I don't need to expand on that but I also think there could have been slight improvements. For example, with the variable "Armed" you could have had a sword in the character's hands instead. However it was still a cool idea!

Total: 43/50
Title:  Epic RPG game!

Yay! Thanks so much. 

iaoumeur wrote:

Game review: Terminator facility

Art:  6/10
I like the artwork. It contains the basic platformer art like lava and an exit but I feel you could have spent a little more time making things look a little more realistic...

Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable):  8/10
Nice story! I like the 1101 test subject idea, but I think you could have changed the background to match the theme like having jail cells and stuff like that. It was still very enjoyable though!


Originality: 5/10
Yeah, I've seen LOADS of platformer games and this one isn't that much different although it does have a nice storyline... You also used Wes64's platformer base (I think?)

Addictive?  8/10
I did want to keep playing but I think there were a few things you could have done to make people want to play on like having it timed and you post your time in the comments. It was still very addictive though!


My personal opinion:  7/10
I did like this game like I did with the many other platformer games but it didn't stand out to me. I still think it's a great game!

Total: 34/50
Title:  Fun platformer game!

Thanks! will you improve the rating if I add updates?

Last edited by dsaztur (2013-01-22 12:02:43)

Hey man, you mentioned on my review segment that you had one, so I'm also gonna hit you with one of mine. The art work is not mine but I spent a lot of time making it work well with as few glitches as possible, thanks.

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/bullelk12/2888106

numberonegamers wrote:

scratch defense again but more transparent towers, less bugs, 3 new stages, difficulty, and selling towers!

Ok I'll update the old review!

Thanks! If I could do pixel art like that, I'd do it myself in a second.