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#1 2013-01-15 19:15:38

SilverDomination
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Registered: 2011-11-23
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P200M- My newest song on SoundCloud.

Hi-oh! Incase you didn't know, I have a SoundCloud account under the name of 'Mr. M!'. Recently, I released a new song that I've been working on for around a week now in GarageBand for the iPad. The results? An epic song of my own that is exactly 200 measures at about 140bpm, being about 5 minutes & 43 seconds. Check it out!  smile

https://soundcloud.com/mr-m-32/my-song-16

Sooner or Later. Or sooner. Not much, except for a lot. In a way. But it will come no matter what.

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#2 2013-01-15 19:22:42

MrMokey
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Re: P200M- My newest song on SoundCloud.

Review (Not very organized. The review that is)
Intro: I like this sounding good so far.
First Part: I like that new synth but I think the notes could be less staccato and could flow a bit more.
Next part: Percussion is cool
Next part: Suddenly I am bouncing.
Rest of parts: Wow this is really good, the lead synth is awesome.

There is lots of good layering but I think some bass would really add to the mix, also maybe a sweep or two, if that's possible on the iPad.

I think that you could get some great songs if you start using FL Studio or any other DAW. You have the theory to make it and this is a pretty great song.

In case you didn't know my Soundcloud is www.soundcloud.com/mellowkeys

Last edited by MrMokey (2013-01-15 19:22:58)

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#3 2013-01-15 20:19:29

fire219
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Re: P200M- My newest song on SoundCloud.

The beginning is a little rough, but by 0:56 straightens itself out and becomes awesome.  smile

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#4 2013-01-15 22:06:38

SilverDomination
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Re: P200M- My newest song on SoundCloud.

Thanks for the feedback so far!  big_smile
I do agree that it seems abit choppy at the beginning, but that's just GarageBand. I also do some work with Reason & FLStudios, & the stuff I'm working on in there sounds much better.  wink

Last edited by SilverDomination (2013-01-15 22:07:08)

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#5 2013-01-15 23:26:56

dontbombiraq
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Re: P200M- My newest song on SoundCloud.

I'm sorry to say it, but I'm gonna have to hate on this song.

It's repetitive. You use the same chords over and over until I'm sick of it. Even for a dance song where that's really not a problem, it was kinda bland. More bass or maybe more drum pads in there would make it more satisfying to listen to.

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#6 2013-01-16 09:29:23

SilverDomination
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Re: P200M- My newest song on SoundCloud.

dontbombiraq wrote:

I'm sorry to say it, but I'm gonna have to hate on this song.

It's repetitive. You use the same chords over and over until I'm sick of it. Even for a dance song where that's really not a problem, it was kinda bland. More bass or maybe more drum pads in there would make it more satisfying to listen to.

Well, thanks for your feedback, anyways.  wink

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