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SeraGungor with Bounce

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 7/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 6/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
A nice bouncy game, i like the elevator and the bouncy stages although i do not believe we get enough of them especially the Elevator so the next step would be to add some more different levels to engage the player more!
Total 78/100

Hello Willpower, I'm here to invite you to help out with the top ten projects of the week thread. All you would need to do is tell me which two projects you reviewed this week scored the highest every Friday. Thanks if you can help out!

I got another one for ya! but this time it is scary.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fredmaster45/3031010









could you review it?

Last edited by fredmaster45 (2013-01-19 23:52:46)

...I'm guessing you don't review Python tutorials then? or should I bump it a third time?

Borrego6165 wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Would you be able to rate the first two of these (I'm not sure if the first long is long enough for you to have reviewed it deep enough, but I had to make them short so people could learn easier)

Python Lesson 1
Python Lesson 2

Thanks!

bump

Borrego6165 wrote:

...I'm guessing you don't review Python tutorials then? or should I bump it a third time?

Borrego6165 wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Would you be able to rate the first two of these (I'm not sure if the first long is long enough for you to have reviewed it deep enough, but I had to make them short so people could learn easier)

Python Lesson 1
Python Lesson 2

Thanks!

bump

I am going on Python as soon as Dad has finished what he is doing now so don't worry they will be reviewed!

oh was it you who said about the weekend thing? sorry, thought it was someone else...

Borrego6165 with Python Tutorial Series

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 5/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 8/10
Music (Required?) 6/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 9/10
Involvement (does it keep the player interested?) 10/10
Effectiveness (does it actually help the player?) 10/10
Detail (amount of info) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
My first Educational/Informative project review and as you can see by all the 10s- very effective. Although there is no music in the project you have said that people should play their own music so you gained points for that. I did notice that you left somethings out like the "" round Cat and Dog. 10/10 for idea because you are using Scratch to explain Python which makes it easy for the User. I am looking forward to the others in the series
Total 85/100

Borrego6165 wrote:

I've noticed that quite a few people who have used Python are complaining that I don't go and cover everything, even though the idea is that you learn as you go along and not all in one go. Also, how is the programming not smooth? Does it lag? And shouldn't I get more for music considering your mark scheme says "Is it needed?" If I did include music, it might be distracting, then the other scores (such as effectiveness) would go down because of it. Finally, you never stated why I lost the user-friendliness point or the glitches point, you just gave me a lower score for the sake of it. You need to mention why someone loses or gains every point, which probably explains why your reviews are quite short.

i will explain why people lose points now. You lost points for programming because, i agree it is very smooth but it is not particualy challenging compared to other programming. I never give points just for the sake of it- the User-Friendliness one was "" round cat and dog and things like that which seems to be essential in Python for them to work and the glitches one is not just glitches now, the series is not complete and as i am reviewing the whole series i took one mark off for that and little things like the cat issue combined. I did not want to take off a whole mark for a not complete series as i sort of am only reviewing the ones there are.

Also i was learning as i went along by mistakes, i accidently misspelled "variable" "varible" and the "varible = Bob" still worked which shows you can call your variables anything!

Last edited by Willpower (2013-01-14 02:10:15)

hey review my project using the link below. all the instructions are there.

scratch.mit.edu/projects/lindalisha/3033489

Numberonegames with Scratch Defense 5 (New scores are in [] brackets with reasons for changes)

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 8/10 [9/10- Interesting scripts to create the new turrets]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 6/10 [9/10- Much more complete than the earlier version with extra turrets and music]
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10 [10/10- music!]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 8/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10 [9/10- now the game is much more challenging!]
I am loving the changes that you have made, i have also noticed that you have (prehaps accidently) fixed a glitch where you could move the turret which you are only supposed to be able to place in water- on land- now it is much more effective. You have gained 6 points from last time so congratulations!
Total 82/100 [88/100]

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Musclecf with Make A Level

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 7/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 7/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
The idea for this project is amazing however there are a couple of things i have picked up like sometimes when you click on Lava- you get the colour for ground and so on which means it is quite hard to make the level that you desire. Perhaps add some more different types of terrain like "Water" to add more depth to the project. Finally it would be cool if the Lava, Ground and Bounce blocks would hide when they are not clicked on so you can build over that side of the screen
Total 71/100

YOU HOVER NOT CLICK HOW MANY TIMES HAVE I SAID THAT SO FAR!!!!

iauomeur with The Dot

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10 [wall jumping and other such things give this a 10]
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 10/10 [Very well made game with lots of levels]
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10 [It seems like you only get music after level 23]
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10 [Perhaps there could be different colour backgrounds or something similar?]
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10 [Fun but it takes a determined player to complete all the levels    ]
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 10/10 [great storyline to go along with the game!]
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 9/10 [it takes dedication to complete! I love the sort of walthrough you have as well
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10 [Sadly i have seen most of this stuff before but the walkthrough again is a bonus as well as the storyline
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10 [Very addictive game but the length might put some people off]
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
I loved this game and despite only getting to the "that looks thin" level due to not too much time i really enjoyed it and will be trying to improve over the next week and finish the game!
Total 91/100

Last edited by Willpower_Reviews (2013-01-19 13:46:39)