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#26 2013-01-07 11:27:30
Re: Game Reviews!
Game review (demo): Pixiana 1.8
Art: 10/10
The art is really awesome! I love the RPG look to it. You can change from a guard to a wizard and back. The enemies look great and the stage designs are just epic! Great work!
Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable): 9/10
Very enjoyable! I like the the way the enemies slowly deduct you're hearts and I like the fact that you have to jump around to get treasure chests. I know this is a test but I wish you could attack enemies, hope you add that in!
Originality: 9/10
I have seen RPG's but none as good as this. This has a wizard theme where you can perform spells and these cool enemy blobs attack you. I have never seen an RPG as good as this yet!
Addictive? 10/10
You have to make the full version! I was so into this that when I got to the last playable level on the demo I was in despair. Very addictive!
My personal opinion: 9/10
I love this game and I can't wait until you make it (if you do) the only reason it got a 9 was because you can't attack enemies, I know you will probably include this in the full version but you could have put it in the demo.
Total: 47/50
Title: Epic RPG Game demo!
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#27 2013-01-07 12:07:13
Re: Game Reviews!
iaoumeur wrote:
Game review (demo): Pixiana 1.8
Art: 10/10
The art is really awesome! I love the RPG look to it. You can change from a guard to a wizard and back. The enemies look great and the stage designs are just epic! Great work!
Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable): 9/10
Very enjoyable! I like the the way the enemies slowly deduct you're hearts and I like the fact that you have to jump around to get treasure chests. I know this is a test but I wish you could attack enemies, hope you add that in!
Originality: 9/10
I have seen RPG's but none as good as this. This has a wizard theme where you can perform spells and these cool enemy blobs attack you. I have never seen an RPG as good as this yet!
Addictive? 10/10
You have to make the full version! I was so into this that when I got to the last playable level on the demo I was in despair. Very addictive!
My personal opinion: 9/10
I love this game and I can't wait until you make it (if you do) the only reason it got a 9 was because you can't attack enemies, I know you will probably include this in the full version but you could have put it in the demo.
Total: 47/50
Title: Epic RPG Game demo!
Wow! I did not think this would get such a high rating! Remember, most of the monster sprites were not made by me, they were made by CopperHawk, another member of the collaboration.
We will add the ability to attack enemies but for now we are still in testing mode, working on expanding the landscape and adding new monsters. I am actually trying to implement the spells and sword in the next version right now, so it hopefully should be added soon.
Thank you so much for taking the time to rate this!
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#31 2013-01-07 15:32:08
- numberonegamers
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Re: Game Reviews!
iaoumeur wrote:
Game review: Race Game 1.1
Art: 7/10
I like the artwork for this game, the car looks good enough and the stage designs are really cool. I really like the space stage! However there could have been a bit more effort put into this game
Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable): 8/10
Quite enjoyable, there are missions and many stages depending on what difficulty you prefer. There is also a two player mode but to get a better score you would have to add CPU cars. This is still a great car game though!
Originality: 5/10
This is not original. I know it is a bit different to other car games but it has been done before. There are a few added extras like missions but to be honest it was just another car racing game.
Addictive? 8/10
I liked playing this game because there were many stages, this is what scratchers never do when they make a car game. This is the only racing game I have seen with 7 stages AND the option to create your own track. Nice idea!
My personal opinion: 9/10
I can see you have worked hard on this game. There were some really good drawing and ideas. However, there were some glitches like some obstacles from the previous stage would go onto the next stage, I have ignored this purely because I saw that you had spent long on this game.
Total: 37/50
Title: Fun Car racing game!
Good luck if you decide to improve it!
Thanks, I did try to do CPU but it took 45 minutes to do 1 track so I gave up! Also, how old are you? Cause I am 13 and it was my bday on the 6th
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#32 2013-01-08 11:04:11
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Game review: Chose your own adventure
Art: 9/10
I really like the artwork considering you did it all by yourself. The scenes were very colourful and imaginative. I really like the troll by the way!
Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable): 9/10
The main point of this adventure is the story! I like the fact that you get to chose your own adventure. I used to read a lot of books where you do this so maybe this is why I enjoyed this so much!
Originality: 10/10
I haven't seen one of these on scratch before so I'm guessing it's very original. This scored full marks because all the artwork was drawn by you which is what I really like in a project!
Addictive? 8/10
This isn't really made to play again but because you can chose something different each time I wanted to play it a few times through. This would have scored higher if you maybe added a few more minigames. I found the snowball one really fun and it made the game more exciting.
My personal opinion: 9/10
I really loved the idea for this game and the artwork behind it. It was really imaginative and creative and just fun to play! I can see you thought about this and spent time on it so well done!
Total: 45/50
Title: An original adventure game!
(This doesn't really count as a game but I only reviewed it because it had the minigame.)
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#33 2013-01-08 11:15:29
- pokemongardevoir
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Thanks for the great review! But remember, Cfuller helped a lot too with the music, and my sister sang the end theme too. 
My website has been approved by the Scratch Team. (^_^)
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#34 2013-01-08 11:17:29
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pokemongardevoir wrote:
Thanks for the great review! But remember, Cfuller helped a lot too with the music, and my sister sang the end theme too.
That's alright, I don't really have a topic for music anyway!
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#36 2013-01-08 15:37:38
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Game review: F1 2012
Art: 8/10
I really like the track design! I can see that you copied some images from the internet so you would get a better score if you drew some things yourself, but otherwise great drawings!
Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable): 8/10
I liked this idea. You made a very realistic formula 1 racing game which is hard to make on scratch. This would have been better if you added some missions or different tracks rather than just one track.
Originality: 9/10
I don't think there is another Formula 1 racing car game as advanced as yours yet so well done! This would have got a ten if you drew EVERYTHING by yourself. Nice idea though!
Addictive? 8/10
I loved trying out all Aerodynamics and options and then just racing around trying to get a good time. However if you added some more tracks I would have loved playing it even more. Still great though!
My personal opinion: 9/10
I loved this racing game (I know I've said that so many times). It was a really unique idea and very creative. The only reason it got a 9 was because of a small glitch where the lap time carries on after you go back to the menu. The other thing is I don't think you drew everything by yourself. Now enough of me being fussy, THIS GAME IS EPIC! Just go and play it and see for yourself! Well done to you prokohtu!
Total: 43/50
Title: The best F1 game on scratch!
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#38 2013-01-09 09:23:30
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I know it's not a true game, so just give it a score out of whatever.
Made it in my spare time: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Dsteenson/3027061
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#39 2013-01-09 11:05:52
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Game review: Moon Defense Part 1
Art: 9/10
I really liked the alien spaceship designs, did you draw them? I also loved the power up designs!
Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable): 9/10
Really enjoyable! Everything worked smoothly, the power ups were interesting and I loved the smart bombs! To improve though I think you should make the power ups appear more often because I got a bit bored waiting for the next one...
Originality: 6/10
Yeah... There have been a lot of these on scratch. The space ship idea is used a lot and even if you give it a different name it doesn't change the content. HOWEVER, for some reason I enjoyed this one the most!
Addictive? 9/10
I couldn't stop playing! I was really always looking forward to getting the next power up. This would have got a better mark if the game was a bit harder...
My personal opinion: 8/10
Really fun to play, my only request is to make it slightly harder but I should stop moaning because this game is really great so I think you deserve a pat on the back jess48!
Total: 41/50
Title: Really addictive defense game!
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#40 2013-01-09 11:08:47
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jess48 wrote:
Heres the 1st of my two games(newest)
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/jess48/3026770
and the 2nd(my favourite)
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/jess48/2983932
Take a look
Sorry I can't review the second because of the violence. Sorry again...
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#41 2013-01-09 11:12:21
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Dsteenson wrote:
I know it's not a true game, so just give it a score out of whatever.
Made it in my spare time: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Dsteenson/3027061
-dsteenson
Do you really want me to review it? It will get a really bad score. And its also not really a game it's more like a Q and A session. Sorry but it doesn't really fit any of my categories.
I still like it though!
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#42 2013-01-09 12:49:23
- Firedrake969
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Re: Game Reviews!
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Firedrake969/2767728
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Firedrake969/3015687
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#43 2013-01-09 13:07:09
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Game review: Fallout-the Dying World
Art: 9/10
I loved the glowing green ball thing! (I don't know its name) I also loved how you could only see walls when you got close to them even though it was sometimes annoying. I liked the way most things glow in this game.
Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable): 10/10
I really enjoyed playing this! It's a very unique and interesting game to play. There were many levels and a storyline as well which was very interesting to read. So far I've found no glitches!
Originality: 9/10
Although many scratchers decide to make platformer games, this one is totally different! It's unique graphic design gave this project a really great score!
Addictive? 9/10
There isn't much to say here. With loads of levels and loads to do I couldn't stop playing!
My personal opinion: 9/10
This is a really unique and interesting platformer game where you are a green ball who has to get to the exit. Sounds simple but playing it is really fun! Well done Firedrake969.
Total: 46/50
Title: Totally unique platformer game!
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#45 2013-01-09 13:34:12
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Game review: Negatives
Art: 6/10
I understand the art had to fit in with the theme but it was just a little too simple for my taste. However I did like the way the ball would switch whenever in got to the white side.
Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable): 7/10
Sorry but this to me was just any other ordinary platformer game. I didn't really like trying to jump onto tiny dots BUT I still did like the theme of black and white!
Originality: 8/10
Again, this feels repeated. There are so many platformer game out there that when I play this one I don't feel any different. This still got quite a good score because of the theme and I also really like the name!
Addictive? 7/10
It was fun but I feel the bottomless pit thing was kind of annoying. I know you could press r to reset but it got a bit tiresome. However there were many levels which made it quite interesting.
My personal opinion: 6/10
Sorry but I feel your other project was a lot better. This is a lot like any other platformer game. But maybe I'm just being fussy. This is still a really good game and I recommend it to people who enjoy platformer games!
Total: 34/50
Title: A unique themed platformer game!
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#46 2013-01-09 13:50:09
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Game review: Space Academy- The battle of station 3
Art: 7/10
I liked the art in this project! I can see you drew everything yourself which some scratchers don't do so well done!
Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable): 5/10
I do like fighting the robot idea, but I feel there could have been a short animation story before it. I think it was fun to play, but quite simple. You could have added power ups or more enemies. It was still really good though!
Originality: 7/10
I have seen tings like this before, there is no question about that. But this still got a good score because I can see that you drew all the sprites yourself which makes it more original than other scratchers projects.
Addictive? 6/10
This was fun to play and I really loved the robot exploding graphics at the end. But I feel there was so much more you could do with this like put in power ups.
My personal opinion: 6/10
This is a nice game and all but just a bit simple for my taste. It was all over in about half a minute. To make it addictive you should add different game modes or make more enemies. Look at my review on Moon defense to see what I'm talking about. Don't be upset though, you should be proud because this is a really cool game!
Total: 31/50
Title: A cool space themed game!
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#47 2013-01-09 14:47:24
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iaoumeur wrote:
Game review: Space Academy- The battle of station 3
Art: 7/10
I liked the art in this project! I can see you drew everything yourself which some scratchers don't do so well done!
Storyline(if there is one, if not then how enjoyable): 5/10
I do like fighting the robot idea, but I feel there could have been a short animation story before it. I think it was fun to play, but quite simple. You could have added power ups or more enemies. It was still really good though!
Originality: 7/10
I have seen tings like this before, there is no question about that. But this still got a good score because I can see that you drew all the sprites yourself which makes it more original than other scratchers projects.
Addictive? 6/10
This was fun to play and I really loved the robot exploding graphics at the end. But I feel there was so much more you could do with this like put in power ups.
My personal opinion: 6/10
This is a nice game and all but just a bit simple for my taste. It was all over in about half a minute. To make it addictive you should add different game modes or make more enemies. Look at my review on Moon defense to see what I'm talking about. Don't be upset though, you should be proud because this is a really cool game!
Total: 31/50
Title: A cool space themed game!
Thanks. I'll try to take your suggestions into account when I make my next Space Academy game. Also, could you please review this as well: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/calebxy/2692066
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#48 2013-01-09 15:50:56
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Thanks for reviewing 'Moon defence(part1)' iaoumeur and the great score you gave it.
I've taken on board your comments, I restricted the amount of power ups because I didnt want to make the game any easier than it is
Health only appears when you really need it and weapon power ups only appear if you lose your weapons or the alien craft get harder to destroy.
The game is abit easy but I wanted to give players the chance to play it till the end.
I have lots of ideas for part 2(new power ups, ships ect) I will include an hard/easy option, harder to destroy enemy craft but lots more power ups and if I can get it working properly a level editor for people to play about with(which should be interesting)
Thank you for taking the time to review it and i'm glad you enjoyed it.
Ps I understand you not being able to review the other project i submitted
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#50 2013-01-10 10:47:52
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jess48 wrote:
Thanks for reviewing 'Moon defence(part1)' iaoumeur and the great score you gave it.
I've taken on board your comments, I restricted the amount of power ups because I didnt want to make the game any easier than it is
Health only appears when you really need it and weapon power ups only appear if you lose your weapons or the alien craft get harder to destroy.
The game is abit easy but I wanted to give players the chance to play it till the end.
I have lots of ideas for part 2(new power ups, ships ect) I will include an hard/easy option, harder to destroy enemy craft but lots more power ups and if I can get it working properly a level editor for people to play about with(which should be interesting)
Thank you for taking the time to review it and i'm glad you enjoyed it.
Ps I understand you not being able to review the other project i submitted
Ok, I'm glad your taking my ideas onboard! I'm sorry I couldn't review your other game, it was REALLY good but just a bit too violent...
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