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Firedrake969 wrote:

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Try me http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/DCP/3019994

Originality:  8/10--Seen things somewhat like this
Addictiveness/replayability:  3/10--no idea what to do
Sounds:  3/5--rather repetetive
Graphics:  1/5--not the best
Smoothness of scripts:  7/10--normally did what I told it to
Any bugs/glitches:  5/10--see above
Length (too long/too short):  4/10--no definite end
Ease of use:  3/10--no real idea on what to do, the speech bubbles covered each other up
Plot:  5/10--barbarians invade, you get money, repeat.
My comments:  15/20
Good idea and such.  However, the graphics and scripting weren't the best.  Your points come mainly from the ideas/originality section.

SCORE:  50/100

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GAME:
Originality:  1/10--BTD5 with different sprites
Addictiveness/replayability:  6/10--fun, but sounds bother you and you can't place towers more than once
Sounds:  1/5--some, not the best, really annoyed me.
Graphics:  2/5--high contrast, plain
Smoothness of scripts:  8/10--see below
Any bugs/glitches:  3/10--MAJOR BUG--I tried to place a tower, and it disappeared.  Huh?
Length (too long/too short):  7/10--No clear end
Ease of use:  3/10--good instructions, but the range indicators covered everything up, can't tell range until you put the tower down, no selling towers, see bugs and glitches.
Plot:  2/10--none
My comments:  10/20
Ok, so this was a tower defense.  I play BTD5 quite a bit, and I instantly knew that this was the same thing.  However, small space, annoying sounds, etc?  Eh.

SCORE:  28/100

Last edited by Firedrake969 (2013-01-05 14:33:46)

LockedOn wrote:

Here's another one!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/LockedOn/3001529

Sorry for the long string, I would have posted after you'd reviewed the others, but I might have forgotten to if I waited. 

-- LockedOn.

GAME:
Originality:  8/10--nice.
Addictiveness/replayability:  3/10--buggy
Sounds:  2/5--repetitive, when it glitched, the loop broke
Graphics:  3/5--good graphics separately, together, they didn't fit.
Smoothness of scripts:  4/10--you used the when key pressed hat block...
Any bugs/glitches:  3/10--Couldn't go two directions at once (see above), enemy couldn't attack in a certain way
Length (too long/too short):  3/10--you had to wait a while to find the enemy, you couldn't really beat the enemy
Ease of use:  3/10--see all above, you didn't have good instructions
Plot:  2/10--No plot.
My comments:  15/20
I liked the idea and such of this.  However, because of all the glitches, it was marked down.

SCORE:  46/100

Sorry, no, it seems like an uncredited remix of this.

Firedrake969 wrote:

GAME:
Originality:  1/10--BTD5 with different sprites
Addictiveness/replayability:  6/10--fun, but sounds bother you and you can't place towers more than once
Sounds:  1/5--some, not the best, really annoyed me.
Graphics:  2/5--high contrast, plain
Smoothness of scripts:  8/10--see below
Any bugs/glitches:  3/10--MAJOR BUG--I tried to place a tower, and it disappeared.  Huh?
Length (too long/too short):  7/10--No clear end
Ease of use:  3/10--good instructions, but the range indicators covered everything up, can't tell range until you put the tower down, no selling towers, see bugs and glitches.
Plot:  2/10--none
My comments:  10/20
Ok, so this was a tower defense.  I play BTD5 quite a bit, and I instantly knew that this was the same thing.  However, no upgrades, small space, annoying sounds, etc?  Eh.

SCORE:  28/100

Whoa, if you can make infinite of a tower, you do it. There are upgrades, there also is no plot in btd5. I also play that too. And cats are in this instead of monkeys, and do you see lava machines or shuriken throwing  monkeys in btd5? no!!! Look at this guys reviews, he reviewed it WAY better and I deserve it and i think that fits my game!!!

http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=112508

Last edited by numberonegamers (2013-01-05 12:42:42)

numberonegamers wrote:

Firedrake969 wrote:

GAME:
Originality:  1/10--BTD5 with different sprites
Addictiveness/replayability:  6/10--fun, but sounds bother you and you can't place towers more than once
Sounds:  1/5--some, not the best, really annoyed me.
Graphics:  2/5--high contrast, plain
Smoothness of scripts:  8/10--see below
Any bugs/glitches:  3/10--MAJOR BUG--I tried to place a tower, and it disappeared.  Huh?
Length (too long/too short):  7/10--No clear end
Ease of use:  3/10--good instructions, but the range indicators covered everything up, can't tell range until you put the tower down, no selling towers, see bugs and glitches.
Plot:  2/10--none
My comments:  10/20
Ok, so this was a tower defense.  I play BTD5 quite a bit, and I instantly knew that this was the same thing.  However, no upgrades, small space, annoying sounds, etc?  Eh.

SCORE:  28/100

Whoa, if you can make infinite of a tower, you do it. There are upgrades, there also is no plot in btd5. I also play that too. And cats are in this instead of monkeys, and do you see lava machines or shuriken throwing  monkeys in btd5? no!!! Look at this guys reviews, he reviewed it WAY better and I deserve it and i think that fits my game!!!

http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=112508

Whoa, I don't review like other reviewers.  Just because one gives you a good score doesn't mean I give you one.  I can make 10 of a tower, at least.  It's called duplicating.  If you're basing it off of BTD5, that means less originality.  And the "lava machine" is a copy of the tack shooter, which turns into a ring of fire.  Shurikens?   Ninja monkeys.  I reviewed it like I said I would.  Don't get mad.  However, I will update this.

ActionTrev wrote:

Firedrake969 wrote:

Sorry, no, it seems like an uncredited remix of this.

Whoa whoa whoa whoa whoa! Take a look at that one you just suggested, and then look at wariobro's. Donkey Kong is a highly remade game, so you can't just say it's a remix! I'm wariobro's actual brother and I know for a fact that this game was completely original. He even custom made that level! And to be honest, wariobro's project is a heck of a lot better than your 'uncredited remix.'

1.  Anybody can say anything on the internet, how do I know?
2.  I've seen too many with the same scripts.  About 20.
3.  He didn't custom make the level.
4.  It isn't better or worse.

numberonegamers wrote:

Firedrake969 wrote:

numberonegamers wrote:

Whoa, if you can make infinite of a tower, you do it. There are upgrades, there also is no plot in btd5. I also play that too. And cats are in this instead of monkeys, and do you see lava machines or shuriken throwing  monkeys in btd5? no!!! Look at this guys reviews, he reviewed it WAY better and I deserve it and i think that fits my game!!!

http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=112508

Whoa, I don't review like other reviewers.  Just because one gives you a good score doesn't mean I give you one.  I can make 10 of a tower, at least.  It's called duplicating.  If you're basing it off of BTD5, that means less originality.  And the "lava machine" is a copy of the tack shooter, which turns into a ring of fire.  Shurikens?   Ninja monkeys.  I reviewed it like I said I would.  Don't get mad.  However, I will update this.

But you don't press space to shoot a shuriken do you? And I will update to add firewall and antivirus swipe, but you are tough to get a 10 on any subject!

The firewall and anti virus swipe were my ideas from my review    Btw, as if you preferred iaoumeur's review! just because he gave you a higher score i'm guessing    fair enough, but do remember how much I helped you! you should appreciate tough reviewers like me and firedrake969.

good luck getting a higher score! and firedrake, try to be a little less vague in your reviews please.

Last edited by Borrego6165 (2013-01-05 15:33:48)

Firedrake969 wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

numberonegamers wrote:

But you don't press space to shoot a shuriken do you? And I will update to add firewall and antivirus swipe, but you are tough to get a 10 on any subject!

The firewall and anti virus swipe were my ideas from my review    Btw, as if you preferred iaoumeur's review! just because he gave you a higher score i'm guessing    fair enough, but do remember how much I helped you! you should appreciate tough reviewers like me and firedrake969.

good luck getting a higher score! and firedrake, try to be a little less vague in your reviews please.

I review how I review.      And I review very critically.

i'm just saying, it's very unclear whether there's a difference between smoothness of scripts and bugs and glitches. At first I presumed smoothness was performance, and bugs were issues, but it either says "see above" or "see below", I don't think there's one review with different comments on each! plus, this please! don't click on the link to Generation:4013 (platinum) i think it's worst than the 4001 version!

anyway, i don't want to be a pest. cya!

numberonegamers wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

numberonegamers wrote:

But you don't press space to shoot a shuriken do you? And I will update to add firewall and antivirus swipe, but you are tough to get a 10 on any subject!

The firewall and anti virus swipe were my ideas from my review    Btw, as if you preferred iaoumeur's review! just because he gave you a higher score i'm guessing    fair enough, but do remember how much I helped you! you should appreciate tough reviewers like me and firedrake969.

good luck getting a higher score! and firedrake, try to be a little less vague in your reviews please.

You only gave me idea of antivirus swipe! And you, borrego6165 don't  grade stuff that harshly. 

check it again, the firewall was my idea! plus, i gave you loads of other ideas too! remember, it isn't about how harsh, it's about how much i try to improve projects. Yours was over a page long because I had that many things to talk about it, and I am very specific with marks, I explain every point i give and take off.