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fillergames · 2013-01-02 17:39:20

bananaman114 wrote:
fillergames wrote:
The Russian story had me crying. Nikolai Krestinsky has better grammar then me.
it's ok youll learn one day
im sorry i was so mean

No problem. Im actually learning thanks to you! Your very helpful.

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bananaman114 · 2013-01-02 17:42:02

fillergames wrote:
bananaman114 wrote:
fillergames wrote:
The Russian story had me crying. Nikolai Krestinsky has better grammar then me.
it's ok youll learn one day
im sorry i was so mean
No problem. Im actually learning thanks to you! Your very helpful.

cant tell if sarcastic

fillergames · 2013-01-02 17:51:28

bananaman114 wrote:
fillergames wrote:
bananaman114 wrote:

it's ok youll learn one day
im sorry i was so mean
No problem. Im actually learning thanks to you! Your very helpful.
cant tell if sarcastic

Not sarcastic.

luiysia · 2013-01-02 19:41:45

fillergames wrote:
bananaman114 wrote:
fillergames wrote:
The Russian story had me crying. Nikolai Krestinsky has better grammar then me.
it's ok youll learn one day
im sorry i was so mean
No problem. Im actually learning thanks to you! Your very helpful.

Well, for one thing, you're means you are and your is a possessive.

fillergames · 2013-01-02 20:19:29

luiysia wrote:
fillergames wrote:
bananaman114 wrote:

it's ok youll learn one day
im sorry i was so mean
No problem. Im actually learning thanks to you! Your very helpful.
Well, for one thing, you're means you are and your is a possessive.

I fail.Very badly.

luiysia · 2013-01-02 21:07:18

fillergames wrote:
luiysia wrote:
fillergames wrote:
No problem. Im actually learning thanks to you! Your very helpful.
Well, for one thing, you're means you are and your is a possessive.
I fail.Very badly.

Also, use a space after periods.

fillergames · 2013-01-02 21:11:46

luiysia wrote:
fillergames wrote:
luiysia wrote:

Well, for one thing, you're means you are and your is a possessive.
I fail.Very badly.
Also, use a space after periods.

Double fail!

luiysia · 2013-01-03 00:05:28

this story best

but seriously, you should maybe not give up so easily...

fillergames · 2013-01-03 00:08:17

luiysia wrote:
this story best

but seriously, you should maybe not give up so easily...

OK moar influence to stay.

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bananaman114 · 2013-01-03 00:37:00

dude chill seriously
if you didn't notice grammar isn't my strongest point either, i /n consistently and generally have complete disregard for grammar in my posts
as for unreal-ism uh it's a fimfic i have no quams with that!
listen all writers gotta start somewhere and you're just starting now so your stuff isn't gonna be the best! thats ok!
i was too harsh and i know that would have discouraged me when i started!
pls 4giv

cheddargirl · 2013-01-03 00:54:50

Closed by request.

cheddargirl · 2013-01-03 02:36:37

Reopened by request.

fillergames · 2013-01-03 02:39:16

bananaman114 wrote:
dude chill seriously
if you didn't notice grammar isn't my strongest point either, i /n consistently and generally have complete disregard for grammar in my posts
as for unreal-ism uh it's a fimfic i have no quams with that!
listen all writers gotta start somewhere and you're just starting now so your stuff isn't gonna be the best! thats ok!
i was too harsh and i know that would have discouraged me when i started!
pls 4giv

Ok i was going crazy anyways. Blame it on the coffee i was drinking earlier. Way too much caffeine.

fillergames · 2013-01-03 08:43:44

Any ideas here? Im lazy right now.

fillergames · 2013-01-03 10:23:30

Episode 2 part 2

PONYVILLE-RAIRTY'S SHOP

NAM
This shop doesn't look bad from the outside!

RARITY
The inside has to be cleaned! Wait a second.

Ten minutes later.

NAM
You only said one second! Not ten minutes.

RARITY
Its ready now! Buy what you need.

NAM
Mind if i buy this bottle of soda?

RARITY
Yes its 4.800 PON (Pony money BTW)
NAM
What kind of currency is that! Dollars please!

RARITY
Four dollars and 80 cents (Overpriced)

NAM
What? For bottle of soda! In my country it 99 cents! I'll buy it anyways.

RARITY
Thank you for shopp......

Suddenly a customer enters!

TBC

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fillergames · 2013-01-03 11:04:37

Episode 2 part 3

SWEETIE BOT walks into the store.

NAM
Is that the animal i ran over earlier? How is it still alive?

RARITY
What do you need SWEETIE BELLE?

SWEETIE BOT
I NEED A GIFT FOR TWILIGHT!

NAM
You talk like Microsoft Sam. Is that offensive to you? If it is, im extremely sorry.

RARITY
Is this good? Its flowers!

SWEETIE BOT
HOW MUCH IS THE PRICE UNTIL TRUE?

NAM then laughs "Is this a joke or something. Im sorry but the way you talk is extremely funny"

TBC

fillergames · 2013-01-03 11:14:57

Episode 2 part 4

RARITY
NAM! Stop making fun of her. How would you feel if you had talking issues? Anyways SWEETIE BELLE. Its 180.900 PON

NAM
What! Your overpricing those flowers to her. Your a thief!

SWEETIE BOT
ERROR! PRICE IS ABOVE THE AMOUT I HAVE.

NAM
Here all my money. I hope you have enough!

RARITY
Yeah she does now! SWEETIE BELLE you should thank NAM for that money.

SWEETIE BOT
YES I WILL. THANK YOU MR. NAM

NAM
Your welcome! Im leaving this place!

NAM & friends leave the store

TBC

fillergames · 2013-01-03 11:23:47

Episode 2 part 5

PONYVILLE-LONG PATH.

NAM
Who makes a straight path this long? It fells like a highway!

DERPY
I asked for it. Spliting paths confuse me and get me lost!

STUBBY CAT
That is the most unintelligent thing i have heard. Do you know what signs are? THERE TO HELP YOU FIND YOUR WAY DUMMY!

DERPY
You know, screaming was unecessary right?

NAM
He probably knows. He's just annoying you.

After half in hour. NAM & friends are at the hospital.

TBC

fillergames · 2013-01-03 14:24:13

Sorry to say this but.... ITS STILL 1800!

jukyter · 2013-01-03 14:45:15

:b

fillergames · 2013-01-03 15:10:56

jukyter wrote:
:b

Huh? more detail.

dontbombiraq · 2013-01-03 15:14:55

fillergames wrote:
bananaman114 wrote:
dude chill seriously
if you didn't notice grammar isn't my strongest point either, i /n consistently and generally have complete disregard for grammar in my posts
as for unreal-ism uh it's a fimfic i have no quams with that!
listen all writers gotta start somewhere and you're just starting now so your stuff isn't gonna be the best! thats ok!
i was too harsh and i know that would have discouraged me when i started!
pls 4giv
Ok i was going crazy anyways. Blame it on the coffee i was drinking earlier. Way too much caffeine.

how much coffee did you drink??

fillergames · 2013-01-03 15:23:51

dontbombiraq wrote:
fillergames wrote:
bananaman114 wrote:
dude chill seriously
if you didn't notice grammar isn't my strongest point either, i /n consistently and generally have complete disregard for grammar in my posts
as for unreal-ism uh it's a fimfic i have no quams with that!
listen all writers gotta start somewhere and you're just starting now so your stuff isn't gonna be the best! thats ok!
i was too harsh and i know that would have discouraged me when i started!
pls 4giv
Ok i was going crazy anyways. Blame it on the coffee i was drinking earlier. Way too much caffeine.
how much coffee did you drink??

1 small glass.

dontbombiraq · 2013-01-03 15:42:24

fillergames wrote:
dontbombiraq wrote:
fillergames wrote:

Ok i was going crazy anyways. Blame it on the coffee i was drinking earlier. Way too much caffeine.
how much coffee did you drink??
1 small glass.

what kind of coffee did you drink??
also, in a glass?? not a mug??

fillergames · 2013-01-03 15:45:33

dontbombiraq wrote:
fillergames wrote:
dontbombiraq wrote:

how much coffee did you drink??
1 small glass.
what kind of coffee did you drink??
also, in a glass?? not a mug??

Yeah. it was cold with alot of sugar.

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