ExtremelyGamer wrote:
F1 2012
by prokohtu
Performance: 7/10
Quality: 7/10
Professionalism: 8/10
Glitches: 10/10
Entertainment: 8/10
Playability: 8/10
Good difficulty: 9/10
Good plot: 7/10
Completion: 9/10
My overall opinion: 7/10
OVERALL 80/100
Comments: The game looks very precise which makes it entertaining. It has several levels and cars. Looks quite professional, though it may need improving on the menu. THe graphics are needed to be improved. It may be better if the car is either smaller or track bigger with AI cars to compete against.
thanks for the tips!
i will probably improve the circuits' graphics in my upcomming f1 2013. also, AI drivers is a really cool feature and i've tried to make it, but it's extremely hard to do with my scrolling system
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Could you please review my hunger games? Please note it is far from completed and that this is the initial release. A lot more is coming.
Link:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Legoguy2/3010701
any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. Thank you.
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rainbow chicken 2
by fillergames [game]
Performance: 9/10
Quality: 9/10
Professionalism 8/10
Glitches: 9/10
Entertainment: 8/10
Playability: 7/10
Good difficulty: 7/10
Good plot: 9/10
Completion: 8/10
My overall opinion: 8/10
OVERALL 82/100
Comments: A good, polished game. It keeps the player playing until wave 5 if they have read the project notes. the game is too easy and I think you should be able to shoot in the direction of the mouse. The rocks also fall too slow and I get pretty bored. Even the demon head didn't really make it harder. But apart from that it has a good plot, an even more good graphics and very very very good ideas about the company trying to make them look like the good guys.
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Legoguy2 wrote:
Could you please review my hunger games? Please note it is far from completed and that this is the initial release. A lot more is coming.
Link:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Legoguy2/3010701
any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. Thank you.
I will review it after a while, remember you can ask me to review it again at any time!
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Firedrake969 wrote:
ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Firedrake969 wrote:
You may want to include different rubrics, because I have not just games, but OSes, algorithms, and other stuff.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Firedrake969/2767728I know that. I have projects to review and enjoy new year. I will probably have the new criteria by the 3rd.
Please... No more. Are you sure you need to have all of them reviewed?Yes.
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Scratch defense
by numberonegamers [Not completed]
Performance: 8/10
Quality: 7/10
Good start?: 8/10
Completion: 8/10
Entertainment: 9/10
Playability: 9/10
Difficulty: 8/10
Clarity: 7/10
Idea: 8/10
My overall opinion: 8/10
OVERALL 80/100
Comments: Good game, though needs to be improved on. With the use of better graphics and cooler and fancier texts you can find on various websites. When I first started playing this, the flame cat didn't work well. It didn't allow me to put it down. It could use a pop up saying, you died. Overall, great start to a game!
Last edited by ExtremelyGamer (2013-01-09 11:15:20)
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Sorry, wronng account, Kirbyoshi my younger brother.
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Applying for reviews, because I want to know what I need to work on in future game-making :
Switch by clickforgames
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please review my OS - Axiom OS
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Race Game 1.1
by numberonegamers [Not completed]
Performance: 8/10
Quality: 7/10
Good start?: 8/10
Completion: 9/10
Entertainment: 8/10
Playability: 8/10
Difficulty: 7/10
Clarity: 8/10
Idea: 8/10
My overall opinion: 8/10
OVERALL 79/100
Comments: The game overall is good, but there was a glitch on some levels that the 2 cars can't move and it will only work if move 1 car backwards and the other forwards. So it's a big trouble and the reason why you didn't score high on Glitches. But I found it fun to ride on the tracks! Maybe you could add a timer and maybe that you need to finish the lap in a specified time or you lose!
Last edited by ExtremelyGamer (2013-01-09 11:16:08)
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Bounce
by iaoumeur [game]
Performance: 10/10
Quality: 8/10
Professionalism: 10/10
Glitches 8/10
Entertainment: 9/10
Playability: 7/10
Good difficulty: 9/10
Good plot: 6/10
Completion: 9/10
My overall opinion: 9/10
OVERALL 83/100
Comments: A brilliant game! Though it may need a plot or storyline, so it's more suspenseful and clear. It could also use more harder levels, but most were entertaining. There was a glitch, where you could jump through the platform. It may need some improving of sprites and more colours. You could use some custom text makers like cooltext.com for title screen
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ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Bounce
Performance: 10/10
Quality: 8/10
Professionalism: 10/10
Glitches 8/10
Entertainment: 9/10
Playability: 7/10
Good difficulty: 9/10
Good plot: 6/10
Completion: 9/10
My overall opinion: 9/10
OVERALL 83/100
Comments: A brilliant game! Though it may need a plot or storyline, so it's more suspenseful and clear. It could also use more harder levels, but most were entertaining. There was a glitch, where you could jump through the platform. It may need some improving of sprites and more colours. You could use some custom text makers like cooltext.com for title screen
Thank you so much!
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Fallout- The dying world
by Firedrake969 [game]
Performance: 10/10
Quality: 9/10
Professionalism: 9/10
Glitches: 9/10
Entertainment: 8/10
Playability: 7/10
Good difficulty: 6/10
Good plot: 9/10
Completion: 9/10
My overall opinion: 7/10
OVERALL 83/100
Comments: A good structure and good plot. The graphics were pretty good, but the text was slightly unclear, maybe choose a more legible text. The plot was brilliant except for the end, where it said, the end is safe for now. You should've explained why it's safe. But overall, it's an original platformer and uses good levels (apart from the fact they're too easy!).
Last edited by ExtremelyGamer (2013-01-09 11:07:10)
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MINECRAFT V 0.8.0
by minecraftpe123 [not completed]
Performance: 9/10
Quality: 8/10
Start (Good start?): 9/10
Playability (Continue playing): 9/10
Completion (Long enough to play): 9/10
Entertainment: 10/10
Clarity (How clear?): 7/10
Difficulty: 8/10
Idea (Good idea?): 9/10
My overall opinion: 9/10
OVERALL 87/100
Comments: Good start to a 3d Minecraft! It needs to be continued to be worked on though. There should be a sort to-do list as it's hard to find out what to do. I found the achievements quite entertaining and fun! There was a sort glitch or problem that it was really hard setting something, apart from trees on fire. Also I would suggest to be able to look around. Since it's a remake of mine craft, you should have a plot. As in your game, you suddenly spawn with stuff to do that the user is supposed to somehow figure out. But overall, I enjoyed it very much and hope you continue its development.
Last edited by ExtremelyGamer (2013-01-09 11:13:19)
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ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Race Game 1.1
by numberonegamers
Performance: 8/10
Quality: 7/10
Professionalism: 7/10
Glitches: 7/10
Entertainment: 8/10
Playability: 8/10
Good difficulty: 7/10
Good plot: 7/10
Completion: 7/10
My overall opinion: 8/10
OVERALL 70/100
Comments: The game overall is good, but there was a glitch on some levels that the 2 cars can't move and it will only work if move 1 car backwards and the other forwards. So it's a big trouble and the reason why you didn't score high on Glitches. But I found it fun to ride on the tracks! Maybe you could add a timer and maybe that you need to finish the lap in a specified time or you lose!
Did you download it? It works way better downloaded.
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ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Fallout- The dying world
by Firedrake969
Performance: 10/10
Quality: 9/10
Professionalism: 9/10
Glitches: 9/10
Entertainment: 8/10
Playability: 7/10
Good difficulty: 6/10
Good plot: 9/10
Completion: 9/10
My overall opinion: 7/10
OVERALL 83/100
Comments: A good structure and good plot. The graphics were pretty good, but the text was slightly unclear, maybe choose a more legible text. The plot was brilliant except for the end, where it said, the end is safe for now. You should've explained why it's safe. But overall, it's an original platformer and uses good levels (apart from the fact they're too easy!).
Can you add it to the leaderboard?
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Hey,
Though I don't expect a huge score, as it is only one level, Here is the first project in my Boss Battles series. It is a sneak peek, and will be slightly better before final release.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Dsteenson/3013168
-dsteenson
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Please!
PS. Hope you like the changes!
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Jetpack Quest
by Firedrake969 [game]
Performance: 9/10
Quality: 7/10
Professionalism: 9/10
Glitches: 9/10
Entertainment: 8/10
Playability: 9/10
Good difficulty: 9/10
Good plot: 6/10
Completion: 9/10
My overall opinion: 8/10
OVERALL 83/100
Last edited by ExtremelyGamer (2013-01-09 11:07:33)
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Firedrake969 wrote:
ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Fallout- The dying world
by Firedrake969
Performance: 10/10
Quality: 9/10
Professionalism: 9/10
Glitches: 9/10
Entertainment: 8/10
Playability: 7/10
Good difficulty: 6/10
Good plot: 9/10
Completion: 9/10
My overall opinion: 7/10
OVERALL 83/100
Comments: A good structure and good plot. The graphics were pretty good, but the text was slightly unclear, maybe choose a more legible text. The plot was brilliant except for the end, where it said, the end is safe for now. You should've explained why it's safe. But overall, it's an original platformer and uses good levels (apart from the fact they're too easy!).Can you add it to the leaderboard?
I only update the leaderboard at the end of the day, makes it easier for me.
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Pumpkin Smash
by Firedrake969 [game]
Performance: 9/10
Quality: 6/10
Professionalism: 7/10
Glitches: 9/10
Entertainment: 7/10
Playability: 5/10
Good difficulty: 6/10
Good plot: 6/10
Completion: 7/10
My overall opinion: 6/10
OVERALL 68/100
Comments: The game is not too good. It is not so entertaining, though it uses some good measurements. I could use a plot and it needs some extra features you are capable of.
Overall I think this game has a lot to improve upon.
Last edited by ExtremelyGamer (2013-01-09 11:12:24)
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ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Pumpkin Smash
by Firedrake969
Performance: 9/10
Quality: 6/10
Professionalism: 7/10
Glitches: 9/10
Entertainment: 7/10
Playability: 5/10
Good difficulty: 6/10
Good plot: 6/10
Completion: 7/10
My overall opinion: 6/10
OVERALL 68/100
Comments: The game is not too good. It is not so entertaining, though it uses some good measurements. I could use a plot and it needs some extra features you are capable of.
Overall I think this game has a lot to improve upon.
Yea. I just did it in an hour or so (including graphics) because of the SDS back then.
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Borrego6165 wrote:
Please!
PS. Hope you like the changes!
O_O can't believe you improved it! Gonna play it now, review it later!
Leaderboard updated!
I will only be able to review 1 project tomorrow, sorry!
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hai, maybe no projects today to be reviewed! D:
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