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#376 2012-12-06 16:31:40

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

The Current Criteria is: [6th December- (at least 2.0)]

The criteria is different per project:

Games :
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) /10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) /10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) /10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) /10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Total /100

OS’s:
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) /10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?, Run Well?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Sound (Music, Required?) /10
Simplicity /10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) /10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) /10
Apps (e.g. calculator, word processor) /10
Originality (Is it similar to other OS’s?) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Total /100

Animations and Videos:

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) /10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) /10
Music (Required?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) /10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) /10
Plot (Story, Characters) /10
Effects (Sound, Animation) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Total /100

Beta's:

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) /10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Run Well?) /10
Completeness (How far is it off being finished?) /10
Effort (How much effort is being put in to complete it?) /10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Sound (Music, Required?) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Total /100

Educational/ Informative:
Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) /10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) /10
Music (Required?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) /10
Involvement (does it keep the player interested?)
Effectiveness (does it actually help the player?)
Detail (amount of info) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Total /100


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#377 2012-12-06 18:13:35

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Firedrake969 with 3D1s1s World (put under game- tis review is the penultimate one with the old criteria)

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists)  8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
Personal Opinion- Nice 1s1s! I love the way you have combined all the rare aspects of Scratch programs (1s1s, 3D) into one epic masterpiece. The big point loss was music but you do not have any so it is not too great a shame
Total 84/100

I'll add  music.


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#378 2012-12-06 18:30:19

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Could you review OS Thunder? It is still in early stages, but I would like an honest review  big_smile

Thanks
-S

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#379 2012-12-06 18:59:45

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

If your really bored. Its optional but if you want to

Can you review "Grumpy cat the game?"

It was rushed and poorly made in half an hour. I expect very low scores from it.

Its based on a famous cat on the internet

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Project
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#380 2012-12-07 11:54:43

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

mad I tried to update my leaderboard project to celebrate the end of the old criteria and i had finished when i got hit by the disappearing text bug and i have lost everything. I may try again this weekend once i have calmed down- the most annoying thing is i saved it just before it happened several times but it still lost all the info. mad

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#381 2012-12-07 21:28:17

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Firedrake969/2964997
Not expecting a high score.


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#382 2012-12-07 22:16:51

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

how about http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Wes64/2965449?

ill go with animation and videos.  tongue  thanks in advance!


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#383 2012-12-08 03:45:23

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Scratcher5000 with OS Thunder

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?, Run Well?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Sound (Music, Required?) 8/10
Simplicity 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 9/10
Apps (e.g. calculator, word processor) 6/10
Originality (Is it similar to other OS’s?) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
I love the create your own app feature and hopefully with 2.0 you could save those apps so everyone could see them. My main area for improvement is a few more apps as there is a few basic apps and it would be cool to see some apps like Pong, Calculator ect.
Total 80/100

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#384 2012-12-08 04:19:46

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Guess what's being released in a couple of days... my epic terrain generator! It's basically a BETA for the new Generation: Cities God Mode, so I'm releasing it separately so that I can get early feedback.

Hope you'll be still here to review it!

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#385 2012-12-08 04:41:50

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NorthOS 2 please!  smile


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#386 2012-12-08 06:48:41

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Borrego6165 wrote:

Guess what's being released in a couple of days... my epic terrain generator! It's basically a BETA for the new Generation: Cities God Mode, so I'm releasing it separately so that I can get early feedback.

Hope you'll be still here to review it!

Of course i will be here- i have only just got new criteria so there is no point stopping and i don't want to anyway  tongue


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#387 2012-12-08 12:04:07

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Scratcher5000 with OS Thunder

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?, Run Well?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Sound (Music, Required?) 8/10
Simplicity 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
User-Friendliness (complexity, can the user understand what they are doing?) 9/10
Apps (e.g. calculator, word processor) 6/10
Originality (Is it similar to other OS’s?) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
I love the create your own app feature and hopefully with 2.0 you could save those apps so everyone could see them. My main area for improvement is a few more apps as there is a few basic apps and it would be cool to see some apps like Pong, Calculator ect.
Total 80/100

Thanks! I definitely will add more features!
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#388 2012-12-09 04:36:03

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

fillergames with Grumpy Cat The Game

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 8/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 7/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
A really funny video although the video does not seem to relate much to the game apart from the character. Prehaps some future enemies could be "ticklers" and they try and tickle Grumpy Cat. I completed it!
Total 62/100


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#389 2012-12-09 05:24:26

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

mad I tried to update my leaderboard project to celebrate the end of the old criteria and i had finished when i got hit by the disappearing text bug and i have lost everything. I may try again this weekend once i have calmed down- the most annoying thing is i saved it just before it happened several times but it still lost all the info. mad

now it has been updated! Took me 42 minutes though...


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#390 2012-12-09 08:06:15

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Firedrake969 with Fight sim test

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 4/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
A really cool simulator. Prehaps you could turn it into a whole flight simulator with different controls and things like that. Scored low on plot and replayability because nothing else happens but that is too be expected
Total 68/100


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#391 2012-12-09 10:05:28

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

fillergames with Grumpy Cat The Game

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 8/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Plot (surprises? Changes?) 7/10
Gamer-Friendliness (Instructions, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
A really funny video although the video does not seem to relate much to the game apart from the character. Prehaps some future enemies could be "ticklers" and they try and tickle Grumpy Cat. I completed it!
Total 62/100

I know i challenge myself  to make a project in 30 minutes. I had no time for enimies


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#392 2012-12-09 11:08:50

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Okay; I just added the new, review section in my Shop Directory and I'm about ready to put you in, but before I do, what would you like as your banner? And what do you want said below your shop's banner? And how about your sample review?


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#393 2012-12-09 11:19:49

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ErnieParke wrote:

Okay; I just added the new, review section in my Shop Directory and I'm about ready to put you in, but before I do, what would you like as your banner? And what do you want said below your shop's banner? And how about your sample review?

hmm decisions decisions  smile  I will have to make a banner now and make a sample review! It will be finished by the end of the day- UK Time


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#394 2012-12-09 11:29:51

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Hey, I'm very close to putting in the scripts which allow you to place the tiles onto the field, I just need your opinion on the interface. I know I didn't really bother with a loading screen or menu, but if you saw that Generation:Cities BETA Menu I released then you'll know how it will start anyway.

Don't fully review yet!


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#395 2012-12-09 11:41:16

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Borrego6165 wrote:

Hey, I'm very close to putting in the scripts which allow you to place the tiles onto the field, I just need your opinion on the interface. I know I didn't really bother with a loading screen or menu, but if you saw that Generation:Cities BETA Menu I released then you'll know how it will start anyway.

Don't fully review yet!

see your comments!


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#396 2012-12-09 11:44:30

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see yours!


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#397 2012-12-09 12:15:12

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Would love you to review  my space shooter S.E.T.I(beta)
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/jess48/2968435

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#398 2012-12-09 12:18:46

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Wes64 with Textboard

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10
Music (Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 8/10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 10/10
Plot (Story, Characters) 8/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
Setting the benchmark high! I can see that this is based off of that text scolling by app althoug i did not know it was called Polyboard. I do have an improvement idea and that is different colours of the message because it is only blue at the moment. Also aren't sound sliders supposed to be highest on the right  tongue 
Total 92/100

Edit- Wrong account  sad

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#399 2012-12-09 12:58:15

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower wrote:

Wes64 with Textboard

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10
Music (Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 8/10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 10/10
Plot (Story, Characters) 8/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
Setting the benchmark high! I can see that this is based off of that text scolling by app althoug i did not know it was called Polyboard. I do have an improvement idea and that is different colours of the message because it is only blue at the moment. Also aren't sound sliders supposed to be highest on the right  tongue 
Total 92/100

Edit- Wrong account  sad

it is not based off any app... i saw a scrolling text thing in the hall at school and i decided to make it. and the sound is supposed to be that way, but it was hard to drag the slider all the way left so i made it easier  tongue  glad you liked it!


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#400 2012-12-09 13:05:02

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Wes64 wrote:

Willpower wrote:

Wes64 with Textboard

Scripts (Programming, how smooth?) 10/10
Issues (Bugs & Glitches, Incomplete?) 9/10
Music (Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 8/10
User-Friendliness (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 10/10
Plot (Story, Characters) 8/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
Setting the benchmark high! I can see that this is based off of that text scolling by app althoug i did not know it was called Polyboard. I do have an improvement idea and that is different colours of the message because it is only blue at the moment. Also aren't sound sliders supposed to be highest on the right  tongue 
Total 92/100

Edit- Wrong account  sad

it is not based off any app... i saw a scrolling text thing in the hall at school and i decided to make it. and the sound is supposed to be that way, but it was hard to drag the slider all the way left so i made it easier  tongue  glad you liked it!

it is very similar to the app though so that is what gave me the idea!


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