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Please can you review my game:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/06amulla/2842535

Although at the end, I want the finish screen to appear when all of the sprites have touched the grass within the set time. I dont know how to do this, can you help me on this matter???

Ohhh....why not.

Can you review this project?

I spent a while on it. It is pong. But 1s1s. But not only 1s1s. It is also 1s1s1c. DUNDUNDUN.
I don't have music and you have to download, but still. 

Wowcher! two review requests whilst i was doing one review!

Splodgey with Bug Game
(Do you like Bugs???)

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 6/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Personal Opinion- A great idea    Maybe you have got a few too many different bugs because it is very difficult to remember what each of them do. Also may i suggest every bug walking from the sides? Bugs that land on top of you can take you by surprise and come without warning.
Total 78/100

Here's that link!

it's just a menu at the moment...

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Here's that link!

it's just a menu at the moment...

do you want me to review it?

did you get the messages? and no

Borrego6165 wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Here's that link!

it's just a menu at the moment...

do you want me to review it?

did you get the messages? and no

i did get the messages and okay, i will just help someone with their project then have a look 

Oh, and I forgot, if the ball doesn't show when you download it, add a "stamp" block right above the "hide" block. For some stupid reason, sometimes the block will not show.

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Please can you review my game:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/06amulla/2842535

Although at the end, I want the finish screen to appear when all of the sprites have touched the grass within the set time. I dont know how to do this, can you help me on this matter???

Ohhh....why not.

Can you review this project?

I spent a while on it. It is pong. But 1s1s. But not only 1s1s. It is also 1s1s1c. DUNDUNDUN.
I don't have music and you have to download, but still. 

Wowcher! two review requests whilst i was doing one review!

Both of these are different game, so I think you should review them separately... The top game was a creation of my friend. He desperately needs help, even I dont know how to help.

Willpower wrote:

rsakoor wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Please can you review my game:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/06amulla/2842535

Although at the end, I want the finish screen to appear when all of the sprites have touched the grass within the set time. I dont know how to do this, can you help me on this matter???

Wowcher! two review requests whilst i was doing one review!

Both of these are different game, so I think you should review them separately... The top game was a creation of my friend. He desperately needs help, even I dont know how to help.

don't worry i am reviewing them seperatly, i was just bumping them up a bit so i do not forget 

Yayz. :B

Willpower wrote:

Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

woo!

it will have to be tomorrow i lost track of time 

wow! love the graphics and the scrolling. I do not have a file saved though    Are you planning on putting pre-made cities on?

It took a LONG time to download!

over 30MB! but it's only owrth 7.6MB on the scratch website, so that's good! I have to upload it then quickly delete it off the main website just to quickly test the file size to see if it will work!

and i know you don't have a saved file, that's temporary. Basically, currently it says "if mode = 1, show this" when what it should say is "if non-existent list contains 1, show this" but of course, that is not possible at the moment!

Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Willpower wrote:

wow! love the graphics and the scrolling. I do not have a file saved though    Are you planning on putting pre-made cities on?

It took a LONG time to download!

over 30MB! but it's only owrth 7.6MB on the scratch website, so that's good! I have to upload it then quickly delete it off the main website just to quickly test the file size to see if it will work!

and i know you don't have a saved file, that's temporary. Basically, currently it says "if mode = 1, show this" when what it should say is "if non-existent list contains 1, show this" but of course, that is not possible at the moment!

30MB????
No wonder it took so long...

EDIT- and that is just the title 

30. Mega. Bytes.              

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Spodgey with Halloween Game
(The enemies are bugs! Surprise    )


Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 3/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 6/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Personal Opinion- I have got to give you 9/10 for surprises purely for the bug enemies    i did not see that coming. Like all your other projects, really music/sound is the major points loss. Also you seem to not be able to kill the bugs, can you confirm this?
Total 66/100

Cannot kill the bugs? How are you trying to kill them? It works fine for me and everyone else that has played it 

I checked again and you can definitely kill them.

Sound effects are a possibility in the near future of all my games, as I've recently got a microphone, so I can records sounds.

Last edited by Splodgey (2012-11-06 12:11:34)

I was wondering, will you review another project for me?

Please can you review my project:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/mix91132/2889247

Thanks!