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#226 2012-11-04 05:21:13

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

rsakoor wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

prokohtu with F1 2012
Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 19/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 5/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 10/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
Personal Opinion- I think you are the only person to who i have given a ten for Idea and Personal Opinion! That shows how much I love it- I mean who would not have given 10/10 idea for that, all the different tracks and cars, drs, love it. Erm yeah, this if it was not for the sound (3/10 because i can survive without it) and Surprises (which you can not really add to) it would be in the 90s. Only improvements- More cars to race against and markings so you know when you are coming to the corner (i was off the track most of the time) oh yeah and 1:58:8  sad
Total 83/100

I like this game also but I'm hopeless at racing even though I love F1 & Supercars...
p.r [POST REVIEW!] The GB flag has white in it!! (jk it does not really matter)

why the bump?

Yep GCSE French.


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#227 2012-11-04 05:23:36

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

prokohtu wrote:

thanks, i will add rain+other surfaces, incl. penalties if you leave the track and cheat

1) You could do other surfaces like gravel...
2) Could you add DRS zoning things?

I love your game though...

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#228 2012-11-04 05:26:19

Willpower
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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

rsakoor wrote:

prokohtu wrote:

thanks, i will add rain+other surfaces, incl. penalties if you leave the track and cheat

1) You could do other surfaces like gravel...
2) Could you add DRS zoning things?

I love your game though...

+1 for the DRS zones and i have already recommended over surfaces, tyre walls and things


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#229 2012-11-04 05:34:21

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower wrote:

rsakoor wrote:

prokohtu wrote:

thanks, i will add rain+other surfaces, incl. penalties if you leave the track and cheat

1) You could do other surfaces like gravel...
2) Could you add DRS zoning things?

I love your game though...

+1 for the DRS zones and i have already recommended over surfaces, tyre walls and things

OOPS Sorry-  I didnt realise you'd alreadysaid that...

Well, I can remeber every single one of us in that class has to write what we did in that lesson in front of the head of our year. The culprits got punished, not me...

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#230 2012-11-04 06:55:57

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

sportsdude6 with Button Click

Scripts (Programming) 3/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 2/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 3/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 2/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 5/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 5/10
Personal Opinion- ummm. 10/10 on replayability because i had several attempts! Not the highest score ever- in fact it's the lowest! but oh well  big_smile
Total 54/100


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#231 2012-11-04 07:25:43

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Firedrake969 with List OS

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 4/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 4/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 5/10
Personal Opinion- Os's are not really my thing... I gave 7/10 for music because it does not really need it. Again i should probably start thinking of judging Os's in a seperate section so they can get the most marks. I will start doing that now but it will probably only be available next month because that is when this account is hopefully a new scratcher and i can change first post
Total 64/100


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#232 2012-11-04 07:35:57

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

sportsdude6 with Button Click

Scripts (Programming) 3/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 2/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 3/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 2/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 5/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 5/10
Personal Opinion- ummm. 10/10 on replayability because i had several attempts! Not the highest score ever- in fact it's the lowest! but oh well  big_smile
Total 54/100

I'll update this and have it reviewed again.  tongue

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#233 2012-11-04 08:58:38

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Molybdenum with NaOS-H

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 5/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 3/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 4/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 4/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 4/10
Got there at last. Personal Opinion- Like i said on Firedrake's Os's are not my favourite things. Prehaps you could update your instructions.
Total 61/100


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#234 2012-11-04 09:02:47

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Can you re-review button click?

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#235 2012-11-04 09:43:41

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

sportsdude6 with Button Click "Review 2" (not many changes since Review 1) but i'll add some stuff- changes are second number


Scripts (Programming) 3/10, 3.5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 2/10, 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 3/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10, 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 2/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 5/10, 6/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 5/10
Personal Opinion- Love the dramatic music! Yeah not much change but there are a few extra points!
Total 62.5/100


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#236 2012-11-04 09:45:15

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

ah, I am a SCRATCHER!
@Firedrake969- OS catagory coming up soon, feel free to suggest reviewing criteria
I have a lot of redesigning the first post to do...


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#237 2012-11-04 09:45:30

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Waffle Song no.2
MASH
Can you review these two projects for me, please?
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#238 2012-11-04 09:47:31

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

normal_girl wrote:

Waffle Song no.2
MASH
Can you review these two projects for me, please?
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i have not forgotten, i have played MASH just not reviewed it yet. Coming up now!


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#239 2012-11-04 09:52:07

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

normal_girl with MASH

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 7/10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 9/10
Story (Characters) 9/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Personal Opinion- I think you are top of the Animations and Videos category  big_smile  I got i am travelling by Bus  sad  No scores below 7 which is good. The music fits in with the game
Total- 84/100


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#240 2012-11-04 09:59:03

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

normal_girl with Waffle Song (no 2)

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 8/10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 8/10
Story (Characters) 8/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Personal Opinion- very random but random is cool. I like the random red slurpy lazery thing but i have to feel sorry for the waffles!
Total- 83/100


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#241 2012-11-04 10:09:12

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Thanks for reviewing my projects!  big_smile  And technically, (if you live in New York) all you have to get around now is a bus. Oh yeah, and the red lazery thing is the shooper's weapon.  tongue

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#242 2012-11-04 10:30:05

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

BugCraft
BugGame (Name suggestions welcome)
Bugworks
Halloween Game (Name suggestions welcome)

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#243 2012-11-04 11:17:05

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Seems like there is some off-topic arguing going on here...please use the report button if you would like it removed.


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#244 2012-11-04 12:23:58

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Splodgey wrote:

BugCraft
BugGame (Name suggestions welcome)
Bugworks
Halloween Game (Name suggestions welcome)

wow, this is a lot! I will start now but it may lead into tomorrow


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#245 2012-11-04 12:35:55

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Splodgey with Bug Craft

I spotted a glitch, i don't know if you know about it but the green bug does not always fall down when it is in mid air- it just kind of hangs there!

Are you supposed to get different colour bugs? because i could only get green.

Also i think i will start reviewing fully tomorrow, i am too tired to think at the moment  big_smile

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#246 2012-11-04 12:55:29

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Willpower wrote:

Splodgy with Bug Craft

I spotted a glitch, i don't know if you know about it but the green bug does not always fall down when it is in mid air- it just kind of hangs there!

Are you supposed to get different colour bugs? because i could only get green.

Also i think i will start reviewing fully tomorrow, i am too tired to think at the moment  big_smile

The Player is only ever the green bug. I have never come across that glitch, nor do I know how it's cause, but I'll look into it...

Btw, it's Splodgey. Not Splodgy.

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#247 2012-11-05 06:32:52

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/MistralWing/2885994
Could you have a look at this please?It might not work online,but I've play-checked it offline  smile

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#248 2012-11-05 14:56:44

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Please can you review my game:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/06amulla/2842535

Although at the end, I want the finish screen to appear when all of the sprites have touched the grass within the set time. I dont know how to do this, can you help me on this matter???

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#249 2012-11-05 14:58:59

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Ohhh....why not.

Can you review this project?

I spent a while on it. It is pong. But 1s1s. But not only 1s1s. It is also 1s1s1c. DUNDUNDUN.
I don't have music and you have to download, but still.  tongue


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#250 2012-11-05 14:59:36

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Re: Willpower's Reviews (New)- I review any project!

Splodgey with Bug Craft

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 4/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Personal Opinion- I have never played Minecraft  sad  but i see what you are trying to do! One thing i noticed when playing is that you can only destroy blocks that are near you which is a great feature however the blocks that i axe go into the bar of blocks (which is supposed to happen) but i did have 10 and then they reset or something...
Total 68/100


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