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The Babysitter |||
Type: Scary
Written by: AllDayKade28471
Back when I was about twelve, I hated everything about Halloween. I hated scary costumes, even though they never scared me; I hated candy, and I hated carving pumpkins. For me, Halloween was just another miserable day.
When my mom and dad were going to an adult Halloween party, I had to stay home by myself. Of course, my mom and dad obtained me a babysitter. I hated babysitters. They both said that when I turn thirteen I would no longer have babysitters EVER again.
When the babysitter showed up, my mom greeted her. I didn't. I simply rolled my eyes at her. She had long, dark hair and green, creepy eyes. Well, I would tell you more, but that's all I could see. She was in a Joker costume. It wasn't even scary to me. It just looked like a clown costume but with different colors. Boring! Since my mom and dad were going to be gone on Halloween night, they said I couldn't go trick-or-treating. I didn't care. I never participate anyway.
Once my mom and dad left, the babysitter disappeared. I thought she might have traveled back home. I cheerfully cheered. I just vanished into my basement to play video games.
Immediately, I heard a scream. Probably just someone trying to scare someone, I thought. In my basement, it's dark, tremendously dark. “Thank God I am not afraid of the dark, or I would be freaked out right now,” I whispered to myself. I suddenly heard knocking.
Being the feckless person I am, I didn't answer it. Minutes after, I heard it again. I became extremely annoyed, so I bolted up the stairs and forcefully opened the door. It was just stupid ol’ trick-or-treaters. I hollered at them, and they scampered away. Hah! Babies, I thought to myself. I shut the door and went back downstairs. The doorbell rang again. I tried to go upstairs, but it was locked. Now my sole way out was the downstairs door. I do have to admit I was becoming a little scared at this point. When I opened the downstairs door, I heard loud footsteps upstairs. I instantly heard the phone ring, but only for two seconds. All of a sudden I heard a boisterous smack. I assumed it was my babysitter answering the phone then hanging up. I walked out the door, and it furiously shut behind me.
I then walked slowly through the tall, moist grass. I noticed a shadow. When I turned around the corner, I saw my babysitter! I was in major relief! I hustled to her and pulled off her mask to give her a titanic hug. The moment I yanked off her mask, I whimpered, "Wait. You're not my babysitter..."
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Last edited by alldaykade28471 (2012-10-28 15:02:59)
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Is this a true story?
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stevetheipad wrote:
Is this a true story?
Yes.
But I have 9 lives. I'm cat/ninja.
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Shouldn't this go in the user-made scary stories?
http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=98332 - User-made Scary Stories
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LanceOhYeah wrote:
Shouldn't this go in the user-made scary stories?
http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=98332 - User-made Scary Stories
It already is.
And I don't think it HAS to go in there...
I think it can go out, so everyone can look at it.
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alldaykade28471 wrote:
LanceOhYeah wrote:
Shouldn't this go in the user-made scary stories?
http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=98332 - User-made Scary StoriesIt already is.
And I don't think it HAS to go in there...
I think it can go out, so everyone can look at it.
It's SUPPOSED to go in there, so it doesn't clutter up the forums. I don't think a single story needs it's own topic.
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LanceOhYeah wrote:
alldaykade28471 wrote:
LanceOhYeah wrote:
Shouldn't this go in the user-made scary stories?
http://scratch.mit.edu/forums/viewtopic.php?id=98332 - User-made Scary StoriesIt already is.
And I don't think it HAS to go in there...
I think it can go out, so everyone can look at it.It's SUPPOSED to go in there, so it doesn't clutter up the forums. I don't think a single story needs it's own topic.
What if I put all my stories in here?
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alldaykade28471 wrote:
LanceOhYeah wrote:
alldaykade28471 wrote:
It already is.
And I don't think it HAS to go in there...
I think it can go out, so everyone can look at it.It's SUPPOSED to go in there, so it doesn't clutter up the forums. I don't think a single story needs it's own topic.
What if I put all my stories in here?
That sounds like a good idea.
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cheddargirl wrote:
alldaykade28471 wrote:
LanceOhYeah wrote:
It's SUPPOSED to go in there, so it doesn't clutter up the forums. I don't think a single story needs it's own topic.What if I put all my stories in here?
That sounds like a good idea.
Could you move this to the Collab section? I think I have a different idea for this...
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alldaykade28471 wrote:
cheddargirl wrote:
alldaykade28471 wrote:
What if I put all my stories in here?That sounds like a good idea.
Could you move this to the Collab section? I think I have a different idea for this...
Done!
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cheddargirl wrote:
alldaykade28471 wrote:
cheddargirl wrote:
That sounds like a good idea.Could you move this to the Collab section? I think I have a different idea for this...
Done!
Thanks!
You can ignore my report.
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Wow, cool. Too bad I'm horrible at writing.
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*cries*
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LanceOhYeah wrote:
Wow, cool. Too bad I'm horrible at writing.
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*cries*
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alldaykade28471 wrote:
LanceOhYeah wrote:
Wow, cool. Too bad I'm horrible at writing.
...
*cries*:P
D-D-D-DON'T LAUGH A-AT MY F-F-FAAAILLUURRRESSS ;_;
Ooooh 100th post :D
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LanceOhYeah wrote:
alldaykade28471 wrote:
LanceOhYeah wrote:
Wow, cool. Too bad I'm horrible at writing.
...
*cries*
D-D-D-DON'T LAUGH A-AT MY F-F-FAAAILLUURRRESSS ;_;
Ooooh 100th post
You went from mad to happy. Interesting.
Anyway, we should probably get back on Topic.
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ImagineIt wrote:
ImagineIt reporting for duty!
Could you please fill out the form?
(It's simple, and you already made it. I just want to get to know you better as a writer.)
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alldaykade28471 wrote:
ImagineIt wrote:
ImagineIt reporting for duty!
Could you please fill out the form?
(It's simple, and you already made it. I just want to get to know you better as a writer.)
Ok.
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ImagineIt wrote:
alldaykade28471 wrote:
ImagineIt wrote:
ImagineIt reporting for duty!
Could you please fill out the form?
(It's simple, and you already made it. I just want to get to know you better as a writer.)Ok.
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Do you like writing: Why else would I be here?
Have many stories have you written?: I got into writing around last year, so I have only written about two others that are good. I got a perfect score on my first one(it was grade) though.
Write a one paragraph story: I'm being pulled in by the most viscous creature ever, the spider. He’s a horrible menace who wants to trap all of us in his web and devour us one by one. He has eight red, devilish eyes. He is a giant who can kill any creature, no matter what. Wait, he just got squashed? I’m sav— Oh no… There’s a foot coming down onto me to… AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
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I'm writing a story right now. It's about an alligator.
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Nice! You're in!
Can you check over my story to fix any mistakes?
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alldaykade28471 wrote:
Nice! You're in!
Can you check over my story to fix any mistakes?
Ok. I have pretty good grammar. My mom is an editor.
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ImagineIt wrote:
alldaykade28471 wrote:
Nice! You're in!
Can you check over my story to fix any mistakes?Ok. I have pretty good grammar. My mom is an editor.
Whoa, sweet!
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