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StarscreamClone wrote:

Molybdenum wrote:

StarscreamClone wrote:

Okay, Molybdenum:
Fun-ness: 10/10
Sprite quality: 10/10
Objective clarity/logic: 10/10
Other comments: It was addictive, and the most interesting game I have ever played.  I like the fact that it doesn't go from level one to level two, etc.  Very well done!

Thanks! But you don't approve? It doesn't have your tag.

Woops!  Optimus Prime Approves!

Yay!

Hey, could you review my game?  It's my latest one.  Here's the link
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Dsteenson/2849454

-dsteenson

Dsteenson, here is yours:

Fun-ness: 9.5/10
Sprite qulity: 5/10
Objective clarity/logic: 9/10
Other comments: Very original, and I loved it!  Optimus Prime approves!  I would work on sprite quality and the backgrounds; maybe you could tweak a default character?  I did that, and I turned a prince into a telemarketer.  Or, make a more human like character, something of the sort. For the background, I would add to it, specifically in the first island.  I particularly liked the handbook; very creative!  Great job, and keep up the good work!

Dsteenson wrote:

Thanks! I didn't expect the sprites to turn out well 

Ah, well.  I get mine mainly off the internet, so I can't say I'm much better.  Your welcome, by the way. 

I think it would be intresting if another reviewer could review some of my projects for once!

Could you please do these ones:
Light The Pumpkins (SDS) v1.1
Brickbreaker v2.3
The Gauntlet v1.3

sorry if i am asking for too much 

Thank You!

By the way i think you have missed out mjoypascual's review 

[offtopic] I have posted a story idea on The New GPD if you have not seen it [/offtopic]

Willpower wrote:

I think it would be intresting if another reviewer could review some of my projects for once!

Could you please do these ones:
Light The Pumpkins (SDS) v1.1
Brickbreaker v2.3
The Gauntlet v1.3

sorry if i am asking for too much 

Thank You!

By the way i think you have missed out mjoypascual's review 

[offtopic] I have posted a story idea on The New GPD if you have not seen it [/offtopic]

Okay!  They are first on my list!

Okay, Willpower.  Here's Light the Pumpkins:
Fun-ness: 8/10
Sprite quality: 8/10
Objective clarity/logic: 10/10
Other comments: Nice!  It is very original, and a lot of fun.  Some suggestions: easy, medium and hard modes; the pumpkins stay lit longer and the cat moves faster in easy, and vice versa for hard.  Music!  I think it would be a lot more enjoyable with music and sound effects.  Very nice job, and keep up the good work!  Optimus Prime approves!

For the second one:
Fun-ness: 9/10
Sprite quality: 8/10
Objective clarity and logic: 10/10
Other comments: Very nice!  A great variation of the default Pong game.  Som suggestions: a different color scheme.  It doesn't seem to be appealing, I think a different background color would change it significantly.  Music; again, I should think it would be a lot more enjoyable with music and different sound effects.  It would also be a bit better if the ball speed was increased slightly.  Lastly, a "GAME OVER" screen instead of just coming to a halt; it enhances the gameplay.  Overall, it's a great project, and Optimus Prime approves!

Last edited by StarscreamClone (2012-10-29 18:50:40)

fillergames wrote:

StarscreamClone wrote:

fillergames wrote:

an extremely early beta of rainbow chicken 2 is out!
uses rainbow chicken 1 graphics as placeholders.
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/fillergames/2869466

Great!  I'll take a look!

I may of repost the first one again 

Did you mean you may have reposted the first one?

fillergames wrote:

StarscreamClone wrote:

fillergames wrote:

I may of repost the first one again 

Did you mean you may have reposted the first one?

I think so. im on PS3 web browser i can't play it!

Yeah, I didn't see much difference.  Tell me when you get it set, okay?

Hey starscream,

This is a test for my new game.  It's unfinished, but you can jump around.  It's got platforms and gravity.  I may even turn it into super mario bros after I finish Wingman.  Here's the link. 

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Dsteenson/2870341

-dsteenson

Okay, Dsteenson.  I will only judge on scripting, etc. since it would be unfair to base on anything else:

It is very nice (and I will say I was never good at games.  My first project shows that very well!  ).  Since it looks like the player has wings, it makes sense that he is gliding.   I see you got the platform scripts.  Oh, quickly, music and a different background would help a great deal.

Tell me when you finish, and I will be very happy to review it for you!

StarscreamClone wrote:

Borrego6165:
Fun-ness: 10/10
Sprite quality: 10/10
Objective clarity/logic: 10/10
Other comments:  Very enjoyable, and it is hard to tell it is Scratch made.  I liked the vampire guide!  Very addictive.  Great work!  If you update, I would suggest making it bigger.

there are 11025 tiles! the list limit is around 15000, and the closest anyone has got to is 625 tiles (when making their own city games)!!!

thanks anyway! 

Last edited by Borrego6165 (2012-10-30 06:16:47)