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Willpower wrote:

Firedrake969 wrote:

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Firedrake 969 with Pumpkin Smashing

(My Score= 38)

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 5/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Personal Opinion- Nice- but the recharge hammer time is annoying. You lost points for surprises but there was not really any chance of you getiing many points for that.
Total 79/100

[spoiler][highlight]Actually, if you download it, if there are less than ten seconds, and you have 100 energy, something good happens.... assuming you click.[/spoiler]

hmm- I'll see.
[offtopic] COMBO BREAKER- you were last post on every single "making scratch projects" forum [/offtopic]

0.o and 100th reply.

Partisan, my first project for an online course called CS50x, its a side view fighting game. Thanks for your time, here it is:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/roszellb/2847859

Hey guys, reviews coming up.
@Hotwire- Wow, I did not expect to be asked to review one of your projects!

roszellb with Partisan

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 4/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 10/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
Personal Opinion- Hahaha, I'm not American but this is cool! My favourite part was the random shouting (relating to their ideas while they are fighting) I did notice a small glitch and that is halfway though the battle my character changed from Obama to Romney, I don't know why.
Total 84/100

Hotwire with Blue Night Battle Engine

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 3/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Personal Opinion- Great battle engine. Nice and easy game just hit and block, maybe you could refine the pushing that happens because i got pushed into a corner but i still won with 74 health remaining. Not many points for surprises but then there could not really be any surprises in the first place
Total 77/100

Willpower_Reviews wrote:

Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 10/10
Personal Opinion- I think you are the only person to who i have given a ten for Idea and Personal Opinion! That shows how much I love it- I mean who would not have given 10/10 idea for that, all the different tracks and cars, drs, love it.

thanks a lot :-)

Hi, I'm not asking for a review I'm just asking some of my scratch-friends to give me feedback on this because I've tried on project ideas and I'm not getting anywhere. Basically it's a preview to a game, but I don't want to start making it until I know exactly what scratchers want. Thanks!

EDITED:

Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Hi, I'm not asking for a review I'm just asking some of my scratch-friends to give me feedback on this because I've tried on project ideas and I'm not getting anywhere. Basically it's a preview to a game, but I don't want to start making it until I know exactly what scratchers want. Thanks!

Hi Borrego- no problem!
and anyway i can not really review it because it is just words.

Bits I love:
1) Double the available tiles!
2) Building on hills (that was one of the things that let Generation 4000 and 4001 down)
//If I do include hills it might result in the God Mode being removed, and pre-made landscapes replacing it. This is because, although they sound simple (an area higher than other areas) I've also got to take into consideration whether the player joins up two hills together, which would result in inverted-corners, plus the amount of calculations needed not only to draw this but before that to detect it. There are too many variations of hills, mountains and peaks that I'm not sure if Scratch can handle it. I remember when Generation:3000 got voted twice to be featured, but was turned down for not loading online and crashing peoples' flash players for being over-complicated.
3) DISASTERS!!!!!! 
//I'll try to get tornadoes, UFOs and earthquakes going. I might get fires going too but they might be difficult, and a monster can easily be created using a similar script to the tornado, except when it unleashes fire it has greater coverage. Sadly the drive-mode can't return unless I made a top-down game that would look rubbish.

Bits I am very interested by:
1) Building a waterfall
//It will work like any ordinary tile would.
2) Neighbouring Cities
//They will simply be variables unless they are ran by online players, in that case they will be very complicated!

Bits I recommend:
1) A way to clear whole areas of landscape without changing every individual tile (or can you do that already- i forget)
//If I have to go with pre-made landscapes then this might not be possible, of course you will still be able to remove buildings and foliage. I'll make an option to remove objects from a whole area (which will be roughly 7X7 again).
2) Make roads a more important part of the game- without road, no success so...
//Might be difficult, but I suppose I could make it so that every building must touch a road.
3) Roads should be easier to implement and use.
//Really? You just click on the little symbols pointing in the right direction and lay them, and I'm not sure how to allow the player to drag them over tiles. I'll have to check on Help with Scripts.

Oh yeah and...

DON'T YOU DARE FORGET TO SEND IT TO ME ONCE IT'S FINISHED 

//Cluck off!

Last edited by Borrego6165 (2012-10-21 11:27:42)

13c2games with Saving The Environment

Scripts (Programming) 5/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 2/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 4/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 6/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Saving the environment seems to have become a scratch theme! Personal Opinion- good game- the places where it lost loads of points was where it could not really get any (Surprises ect..) The scripts could do with some cleanup- for example you have two menu buttons which could be merged into one.
Total 60/100

Borrego6165 wrote:

hey- have you read my edits yet?

Yep and i have seen your post in help with scripts! For the waterfall i was not very clear and meant i am intrested in the hydro-electric station on top of the waterfall.

42nd post! 

Anyway, could you review Beach Hunter .3? Make sure you download it (I hope that's fine).

Much appreciated, and thanks in advance!

RoguePhantom01 with Falling Diamonds

It's bad, I know, but please?

I will review any project no matter how bad you think it is- you never know it might be my favourite game ever!

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 4/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7.5/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 6/10
Personal Opinion- Better than you think it is!! It is actually a really nice game and it scores highly across the board (most of them 7s- by accident) Prehaps to improve you could add other falling things that you are not supposed to touch?
Total 71.5/100

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