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#351 2012-10-04 11:09:55

Willpower
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Registered: 2012-01-26
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

jamiewinter wrote:

is mine next?

AgentRoop is before you, but i have got to post something on the advert thread first. I also have a paper round at half 4 but you will be done some time today before or after paper round.


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#352 2012-10-04 11:10:42

jamiewinter
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Ok


Check out my youtube channel http://www.youtube.com/user/axelregulator/featured

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#353 2012-10-04 11:42:32

Borrego6165
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Registered: 2011-03-10
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 with Ugha 1 and 2

Scripts (Programming) 6/10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 9/10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 9/10
Story (Characters) 9/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
I got a bit stressed reviewing this one- I kept having to check and recheck I added the points up  sad  Personal Opinion- Great Idea, are you thinking about making any more? Long live Ugha! I gave you 6/10 for scripts because there isn't much and 7/10 for music because it is not really required.

Total- 84/100

many Ughas coming up, including a 30+ framed episode.


Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!

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#354 2012-10-04 11:46:03

Borrego6165
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Registered: 2011-03-10
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 with Super Dribbler

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Not bad for under an hours work! Peersonal Opinion- A nice little game but the minus bonus points system is annoying  smile  Yeah thats about it- looking forward to the new level 2!
Total 82/100

well the minus bonus points were there to punish the player, but it's not too harsh.


Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!

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#355 2012-10-04 13:02:35

Shinycortchu
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Registered: 2012-10-04
Posts: 4

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Could you possibly review my game, Etch a Sketch? I don't know how to hyperlink the title, so I'm just going to post the link. Thank you for your time.  smile
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Shinycortchu/2801237

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#356 2012-10-04 13:31:46

Willpower
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Registered: 2012-01-26
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Agent Roop with Cat Feeding

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- This is quite like my Willpower vs The Carebears game but is more compicated and with better graphics! Well done- great sound effects and great fun
Total 84/100


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#357 2012-10-04 13:35:11

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

JamieWinter with pix1

erm how do you play


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#358 2012-10-04 13:39:24

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Shinycortchu with etch-a-sketch

Scripts (Programming) 6/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 10/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 6/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- Woo, I like this pen art, well done. This is a well made game you got 7/10 for sounds because they were not really required. The only improvement i can think of is make the pen colour random in every direction  smile
Total 78/100


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#359 2012-10-04 13:42:20

SD7
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Registered: 2011-09-15
Posts: 100+

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

If you'd care to take a look at my game:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/SD7/2753084


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#360 2012-10-04 13:43:30

Willpower_Reviews
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Registered: 2012-10-04
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Hey peeps, I've got a bit of news for you- I have made this account to do my reviews but I can't edit first place and things with it and this review topic has got a bit messy so what i'm going to do is open a new review topic with this account. The reviewed projects project has already been transfered to this account. See you on the new topic!


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#361 2012-10-04 13:47:45

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

SD7 wrote:

If you'd care to take a look at my game:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/SD7/2753084

hey sd7, can you post this on my new topic that i'm about to make.

I had to post on this account to avoid 180 seconds new scratchers post rule

Requesting topic to be closed, having tea and then making new topic

See you after the break peeps!


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#362 2012-10-04 14:34:32

jamiewinter
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Registered: 2012-08-19
Posts: 100+

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

JamieWinter with pix1

erm how do you play

click the levels
which are red dots
click the one on the right
and when yu beat it go to the one closest until yo win


Check out my youtube channel http://www.youtube.com/user/axelregulator/featured

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#363 2012-10-04 14:38:26

Willpower
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Registered: 2012-01-26
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

jamiewinter wrote:

Willpower wrote:

JamieWinter with pix1

erm how do you play

click the levels
which are red dots
click the one on the right
and when yu beat it go to the one closest until yo win

ok i'll review it on new topic


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#364 2012-10-04 14:53:05

AgentRoop
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Registered: 2012-02-11
Posts: 1000+

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

again, you added my project to the gallery without rating it.


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#365 2012-10-04 14:58:55

Willpower
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Registered: 2012-01-26
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

AgentRoop wrote:

again, you added my project to the gallery without rating it.

*cough*

willpower wrote:

Agent Roop with Cat Feeding

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- This is quite like my Willpower vs The Carebears game but is more compicated and with better graphics! Well done- great sound effects and great fun
Total 84/100

*cough*


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#366 2012-10-04 15:03:46

Lucario621
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Registered: 2007-10-03
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Closed by request of topic owner.


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