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Willpower · 2012-09-30 07:28:51

Borrego6165 wrote:
don't review G:3000 yet! I'm planning on making some changes to it

whoops!

Borrego6165 · 2012-09-30 07:45:10

Willpower wrote:
Borrego6165 wrote:
don't review G:3000 yet! I'm planning on making some changes to it
whoops!

don't worry, did you get my other message? (bottom of page 13)

rsakoor · 2012-09-30 12:41:11

Willpower wrote:
rsakoor with Hero of Bob Town

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- I liked this game, a good take on the old map game. A well balanced game and I can't find any bugs and glitches- the only thing that I would suggest would be to make the game map bit slightly bigger, I am sure you had lovely gaphics on the man but I could not see them!
rsakoor wrote:
I guess that I have to do the hats off for Willpower...
and i'll guess i have to do the hats off for rsakoor- great game.

Total- 82/100

Thanks for this, I needed comments/review for this game to be included in the report for this game

RoggerBob · 2012-09-30 23:12:32

Can you please review Ninja Jump.

Link:http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/RoggerBob/2807774

The main sprite that was used was taken from henley's: How to make a game in 12 steps.
the rest including levels and other sprites and modifications are all my work.

Thanks

P.S if you like it can you help draw attention to it please?

pokemongardevoir · 2012-10-01 15:56:45

Willpower wrote:
pokemongardevoir wrote:
Willpower wrote:

Ok Change the name to 14,000,000 colours then
Well, Opacity isn't really a colour.... Just transparency! Also, the name COLOURS 14000000 was too long, and would show up as COLOURS 14,0000… in the thumbnail
Good point- you win!

Arigatou Gozaimasu tongue

rahman_95 · 2012-10-02 09:40:40

Please review my game, the link is:

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/rahman_95/2811607

thanks

Willpower · 2012-10-02 11:04:25

NOTE FOR MYSELF:
All completed reviews before this were added to the review project

Just so I don't get confused!

Last edited by Willpower (2012-10-02 11:04:57)

Willpower · 2012-10-02 11:14:01

Kitty681 with My Small Town (Requested from Gallery)

I'll review this under the animation criteria because it is not really a game

Scripts (Programming) 4/10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 6/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 6/10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 9/10
Story (Characters) 7/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 0/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 5/10
This is one of those awkward projects that does not fit into Games or Animations so it is better than the review says it is. You got 6/10 for music even though you did not have any because it is "required?" as well and I think that it works without music. Great instructions. Personal Opinion- Not my cup of tea but a nice project.

Total- 60/100

Willpower · 2012-10-02 11:19:28

RoggerBob wrote:
Can you please review Ninja Jump.

Link:http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/RoggerBob/2807774

The main sprite that was used was taken from henley's: How to make a game in 12 steps.
the rest including levels and other sprites and modifications are all my work.

Thanks

P.S if you like it can you help draw attention to it please?

It's not there- you have no projects.

Willpower · 2012-10-02 11:34:32

rahman_95 with The Return of Carlos

Scripts (Programming) 6/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 5/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 4/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 7/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 4/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 5/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 5/10
Personal Opinion- An okay game however a bit too similar to lots of other games to get too many points on this. A few extra levels would be nice since there is only one and it only lasts 10 seconds. Also I think you have overcomplicated some of your scripts for example

 when gf clicked
 hide
forever
 if [start_state = 1]
show
end
if [start_state = 0]
hide

could become

 when gf clicked
show

and it would not make the game any different

Total- 61/100

Spyderblade · 2012-10-02 12:54:37

Hi! Could you please review my newest project, Training Challenge? Please click HERE!

UnknownGlaze · 2012-10-02 20:46:36

I have a display of the NEW elder scrolls war! http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/UnknownGlaze/2812890

Willpower · 2012-10-03 14:34:01

Spyderblade with Training Challenge Platform

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Woo, I loved it, Personal Opinion- A different type of platformer which is always good- one where you can bounce off walls. Lovely! Very entertaining and fun game with a great balance of level difficulty.
Total 84/100

Spyderblade · 2012-10-03 14:50:13

Woohoo! Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! big_smile

Borrego6165 · 2012-10-03 14:55:53

For animation & Videos:
Ugha! and Ugha 21

you might want to make a merged review instead of reviewing them both separately, they are very similar. They both have 18 frames, share a similar pattern and of course a similar graphics style.

For Games & OSs:
Super Dribbler!

kitty681 · 2012-10-03 16:00:29

Will Power!!! It was animated!!! The movie was an animation sad !!! But I don't care! big_smile Thx for reviewing my project! cool

Willpower · 2012-10-03 16:28:37

kitty681 wrote:
Will Power!!! It was animated!!! The movie was an animation !!! But I don't care! Thx for reviewing my project!

Ahh i saw that as well but forgot about it- sorry big_smile

AgentRoop · 2012-10-03 16:59:21

can you please review my project cat feeding survival? It's in my signature.
EDIT: not any more, cuz my cat ate my sig. It's my latest project.

Last edited by AgentRoop (2012-10-03 19:48:35)

jamiewinter · 2012-10-04 02:57:54

plz can you review pix 1.
its in my sig

Last edited by jamiewinter (2012-10-04 10:40:09)

Blaze_ · 2012-10-04 03:08:23

If i only had some projects

Willpower · 2012-10-04 10:47:19

Blaze_ wrote:
If i only had some projects

Are you going to make any projects?

Willpower · 2012-10-04 10:48:23

UnknownGlaze wrote:
I have a display of the NEW elder scrolls war! http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/UnknownGlaze/2812890

This has much more instructions and seems to be coming together well- now for the character sprites and battle!

Willpower · 2012-10-04 10:55:50

Borrego6165 with Ugha 1 and 2

Scripts (Programming) 6/10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) 10/10
Music (Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) 9/10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) 9/10
Story (Characters) 9/10
Effects (Sound, Animation) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
I got a bit stressed reviewing this one- I kept having to check and recheck I added the points up sad Personal Opinion- Great Idea, are you thinking about making any more? Long live Ugha! I gave you 6/10 for scripts because there isn't much and 7/10 for music because it is not really required.

Total- 84/100

Willpower · 2012-10-04 11:02:15

Borrego6165 with Super Dribbler

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 7/10
Not bad for under an hours work! Peersonal Opinion- A nice little game but the minus bonus points system is annoying smile Yeah thats about it- looking forward to the new level 2!
Total 82/100

jamiewinter · 2012-10-04 11:02:35

is mine next?

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