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#301 2012-09-29 14:39:32

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Review the project in my sig again, I made updates.  I think.


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#302 2012-09-29 14:47:14

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coalbucket wrote:

I wrote my first project today.  It works in the Scratch program on my computer, but not when I put it online by selecting the Share This Project Online button in the Scratch program on my computer.  Can you tell me what I should do to get it to work?
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/coalbucket/2806485

It did not work online or offline for me and I know why!! You did not put when green flag pushed before your code so when you push the green flag nothing works!

sorry about bad scratchblocks!!

Before

stop all sounds
play sound [wallpaper v]
broadcast [background v]
set size to [40%]
 
ect...

After
when gf clicked
stop all sounds
play sound [wallpaper v]
broadcast [background v]
set size to [40%]
 


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#303 2012-09-29 14:58:45

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rsakoor with Hero of Bob Town

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 9/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 7/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 7/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Personal Opinion- I liked this game, a good take on the old map game. A well balanced game and I can't find any bugs and glitches- the only thing that I would suggest would be to make the game map bit slightly bigger, I am sure you had lovely gaphics on the man but I could not see them!

rsakoor wrote:

I guess that I have to do the hats off for Willpower...

and i'll guess i have to do the hats off for rsakoor- great game.  lol

Total- 82/100

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#304 2012-09-29 14:59:34

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fair enough! if you ever wanna become a member on my Advert Thread 2, you can review projects, gain points for them and win prizes! Also, just advertising your own projects on there will get you points too! However, one of the rules for reviewers is you have to use my template which is available on the thread!

This reviewing please!

Thought it might be interesting to compare the two!

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#305 2012-09-29 15:01:24

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Firedrake969 wrote:

Review the project in my sig again, I made updates.  I think.

@Borrego
Don't advertise your own thing in this thread...


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#306 2012-09-29 15:04:18

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Firedrake969 wrote:

Review the project in my sig again, I made updates.  I think.

Hmm- online and offline when you push start it goes to "welcome to training recruit 0123456789 ect." and then nothing happens. Is there supposed to be a button?


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#307 2012-09-29 15:11:37

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Firedrake969 wrote:

Firedrake969 wrote:

Review the project in my sig again, I made updates.  I think.

@Borrego
Don't advertise your own thing in this thread...

he's a good reviewer, it's like offering him a job!


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#308 2012-09-29 15:12:24

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Borrego6165 wrote:

fair enough! if you ever wanna become a member on my Advert Thread 2, you can review projects, gain points for them and win prizes! Also, just advertising your own projects on there will get you points too! However, one of the rules for reviewers is you have to use my template which is available on the thread!

This reviewing please!

Thought it might be interesting to compare the two!

Havn't I already reviewed Generation3000?

I agree with Firedrake about advertising on other peoples threads however I have been looking at the advert thread recently and it looks good, shame about the reviewers template though,  you seem to have quite a few projects on your thread that have not been reviewed...


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#309 2012-09-29 15:15:10

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can't remember the G:3000 one, are you sure you're not mixed up with something else? and i left a comment above your comment


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#310 2012-09-29 15:24:25

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Borrego6165 wrote:

can't remember the G:3000 one, are you sure you're not mixed up with something else? and i left a comment above your comment

Oh no I reviewed 4000 not 3000, i've had enough of reviewing for today- i'll probably review it late morning/ afternoon tomorrow, i'm cycling in the morning. I saw the post above my post and it would be cool- as i said in my post- you have a lot of reviews that have not been done but I am not sure I will be able to cope doing two sets of reviews with two different criteria. Remember me being 12 reviews behind on this thread!?


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#311 2012-09-29 15:40:13

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Alright Peeps, i'm now giving out favourties and love its

Old System:

80+
KeyDrums
Cat Creator V2
Ball Quest
Parking Lot Drifting
Mission
Save The Mushrooms

90+
The Level Game
Tanks 4
LazerDodge (it was 89.5 and I feel mean!)
Adventure of the Sprite
Colours 140,000
Toasty's Adventure
Generation4001
Adventure for the Ring


New System:

80+
Little Green Man
Lime
Hero Of Bob Town

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#312 2012-09-29 16:01:00

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

can't remember the G:3000 one, are you sure you're not mixed up with something else? and i left a comment above your comment

Oh no I reviewed 4000 not 3000, i've had enough of reviewing for today- i'll probably review it late morning/ afternoon tomorrow, i'm cycling in the morning. I saw the post above my post and it would be cool- as i said in my post- you have a lot of reviews that have not been done but I am not sure I will be able to cope doing two sets of reviews with two different criteria. Remember me being 12 reviews behind on this thread!?

don't worry! n i can't even ride a bike!


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#313 2012-09-29 16:20:52

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Borrego6165 wrote:

Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

can't remember the G:3000 one, are you sure you're not mixed up with something else? and i left a comment above your comment

Oh no I reviewed 4000 not 3000, i've had enough of reviewing for today- i'll probably review it late morning/ afternoon tomorrow, i'm cycling in the morning. I saw the post above my post and it would be cool- as i said in my post- you have a lot of reviews that have not been done but I am not sure I will be able to cope doing two sets of reviews with two different criteria. Remember me being 12 reviews behind on this thread!?

don't worry! n i can't even ride a bike!

Maybe we could join together sometime- my reviews and your adverts, until then good luck trying to get three first places in a row- prehaps I should ban you!...  tongue

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#314 2012-09-29 16:33:05

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Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Willpower wrote:


Oh no I reviewed 4000 not 3000, i've had enough of reviewing for today- i'll probably review it late morning/ afternoon tomorrow, i'm cycling in the morning. I saw the post above my post and it would be cool- as i said in my post- you have a lot of reviews that have not been done but I am not sure I will be able to cope doing two sets of reviews with two different criteria. Remember me being 12 reviews behind on this thread!?

don't worry! n i can't even ride a bike!

Maybe we could join together sometime- my reviews and your adverts, until then good luck trying to get three first places in a row- prehaps I should ban you!...  tongue

i must warn you G:3000 is old, glitchy and not as good as G:4001 by miles! and about merging, how would that work? I can't change the critera system as I love my own, just as you love yours, so it's not like you could take over reviewing on my thread.


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#315 2012-09-29 16:41:12

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Borrego6165 wrote:

Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:


don't worry! n i can't even ride a bike!

Maybe we could join together sometime- my reviews and your adverts, until then good luck trying to get three first places in a row- prehaps I should ban you!...  tongue

i must warn you G:3000 is old, glitchy and not as good as G:4001 by miles! and about merging, how would that work? I can't change the critera system as I love my own, just as you love yours, so it's not like you could take over reviewing on my thread.

Meh i don't know. G:3000 has an alien attack though!


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#316 2012-09-29 16:51:24

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Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 wrote:

Willpower wrote:


Maybe we could join together sometime- my reviews and your adverts, until then good luck trying to get three first places in a row- prehaps I should ban you!...  tongue

i must warn you G:3000 is old, glitchy and not as good as G:4001 by miles! and about merging, how would that work? I can't change the critera system as I love my own, just as you love yours, so it's not like you could take over reviewing on my thread.

Meh i don't know. G:3000 has an alien attack though!

ikr! i was so upset I had to get rid of smoother scrolling, aliens, tornados and the drive mode! they were what made the original so unique, but at least you can build a city in G:4001. problem with G:3000 is that it's that glitchy all you really do is build a 'shell' of a city to drive around and destroy, but for G:4001 you get the real city simulator and lose the fun arcade-extras.


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#317 2012-09-29 17:11:58

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Firedrake969 wrote:

Review the project in my sig again, I made updates.  I think.


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#318 2012-09-30 02:57:00

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

Firedrake969 wrote:

Review the project in my sig again, I made updates.  I think.

Hmm- online and offline when you push start it goes to "welcome to training recruit 0123456789 ect." and then nothing happens. Is there supposed to be a button?


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#319 2012-09-30 03:01:06

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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

MoreWillpower wrote:

Willpower wrote:

Firedrake969 wrote:

Review the project in my sig again, I made updates.  I think.

Hmm- online and offline when you push start it goes to "welcome to training recruit 0123456789 ect." and then nothing happens. Is there supposed to be a button?

Move to the bottom right using the arrow keys.  wink


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#320 2012-09-30 03:36:57

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BirdByte wrote:

MoreWillpower wrote:

Willpower wrote:


Hmm- online and offline when you push start it goes to "welcome to training recruit 0123456789 ect." and then nothing happens. Is there supposed to be a button?

Move to the bottom right using the arrow keys.  wink

Thank you, i will try that!

Ignore the random MoreWillpower post, forgot i was on that account when i posted it


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#321 2012-09-30 04:26:50

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funny if G:3000 scored higher than G:4001!


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#322 2012-09-30 06:43:46

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FireDrake with Fallout

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 6/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 8/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 9/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 9/10
Yay, finally managed to work out how to play this game- so my one major improvement for this game is for you to put controls somewhere. The thing that boosted complexity up from a really low score for no instructions was the great balance of easy hard levels. Personal Opinion- I completed it! All 15 levels although level 11/12 is not really a level  smile  I enjoyed this game and send me the sequel to review after you have made it. I think your first on the leaderboard but i'm updating the project today.

Total- 86/100


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#323 2012-09-30 06:53:18

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don't review G:3000 yet! I'm planning on making some changes to it


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#324 2012-09-30 07:06:43

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Borrego 6165 with Generation 3000.
Lets compare, and remember this one is with the new criteria so all your projects would prbobably have lower scores.

past reviews wrote:

Borrego6165 with Generation 4000

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9.5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 92.5/100

Borrego6165 with Generation 4001
Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Total 95/100

Borrego6165 with Generation3000

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Not as high scoring as the other two but still a good score- I played this game whilst listening to Gangnam Style- the two musics did not fit very well together! I had fun creating Willville and then crushing it with an alien attack. If you can find a way of putting alien attacks in the new Generation Game  yikes  It went a bit mental at times and wouldn't place buildings even though I had enough money and space that is why its 9/10 for B&G. Personal Opinion- Love the aliens, keep creating Generation games!
Total- 83/100


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#325 2012-09-30 07:19:58

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Willpower wrote:

Borrego 6165 with Generation 3000.
Lets compare, and remember this one is with the new criteria so all your projects would prbobably have lower scores.

past reviews wrote:

Borrego6165 with Generation 4000

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9.5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 92.5/100

Borrego6165 with Generation 4001
Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Total 95/100

Borrego6165 with Generation3000

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) 8/10
Idea (Original, Remix?) 9/10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) 8/10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) 8/10
Not as high scoring as the other two but still a good score- I played this game whilst listening to Gangnam Style- the two musics did not fit very well together! I had fun creating Willville and then crushing it with an alien attack. If you can find a way of putting alien attacks in the new Generation Game  yikes  It went a bit mental at times and wouldn't place buildings even though I had enough money and space that is why its 9/10 for B&G. Personal Opinion- Love the aliens, keep creating Generation games!
Total- 83/100

I were planning on adding improvements to G:3000, but you know how New Scratcher's scripts are a lot messier than experienced Scratcher's scripts, well let's just say I had no idea what any of it meant so I'm not goanna change anything from G:3000. Personally, I think the glitches should be at least 2 lower, and because this has loads less SF and music then G:4001 either G:4001 should get a higher mark for sound to make the difference or G:3000 should get less, but I think a gap greater than 1 would be more realistic.

Sorry about having no drive mode or disasters, but with the new clone system it might be possible! You see, in G:4001 you have a bulldozer tool. Now, a disaster is the exact same as a bulldozer, except it destroys stuff auto-matically. The issue with G:4001 is that for a start, the stamps would have to update every 0.1 seconds for everything destroyed, and for the drivemode there would have to be a way for the car to hide behind buildings (which is not possible with stamps!)


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