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#251 2012-09-28 05:07:28
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sonicfan12p wrote:
Willpower wrote:
SonicFan12p with Tanks 4
Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10
Total 92/100
ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!
I am beginning to think I need to change the scoring system again since everyone seems to be getting Almost Perfect!! I'm glad it now works with the flash player and it is a lot more difficult than 3- more tanks means you nedd better strategy. As entertaining as always Well Done
Thanks! I wish you were the one judging the Scratch Cup!
I'll get -5 done eventually. I'm reluctant to say soon, because it still need a lot of work. You'll understand why when it finally comes out.
Even though I have not heard of the Scratch Cup- Thanks it means a lot
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#252 2012-09-28 05:08:47
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Willpower wrote:
Benjamin2 with The Level Game "Review 2" - Numbers on the right are what you gotm this time if they are different to before.
Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 8/10, 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10, 10/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 10/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10, 9/10
Total 91/100
ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!
You couldn't really do much better than last time but you did- by one point! The level game is a really cool idea but with 125+ levels coming soon your going to have to find a way of having all those levels without exceeding the upload limit and slowing down everyones computors. Good LuckThe game was a bit glit hy and jumpy on the computer and when I donloaded it, i deleated the credit sprite because it was annoying me but well Done
YES!!! I got up to 91! 
Thanks!
If you look at my project 'July Update', you will see that I've stopped working on it until Scratch 2.0, even though all the levels up to 109 are done and I have ideas up to 125.
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#253 2012-09-28 05:13:18
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Wisperfur with Cat Creator v2!!
Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) errrrm! oh go on 10/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 810
Original (Remix?) 710
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 610
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10
TOTAL: 82/100
EXCELLENT CAT CREATOR!
WOWOWOWOW! I love this for the music "Cute Cute Cute Cute Overload" I do have one suggestion- Changing colours of feet to say Dark Blue was like an 8 click process if you could find a way that you can click feet and then choose a colour it would be amazing. Well Done
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#254 2012-09-28 05:44:51
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Wow thanks! I had no idea that my game, Cyber Defense, was on top of the leaderboard! (: While I'm here I'd like to submit another game for review, if you're up for it. It's received more love and attention than Cyber Defense, and even being the creator of it I find it super addicting. It's Toasty's Adventure! You play as a slice of perfectly toasted bread named "Toasty" and collect powerups and items to aid you in gaining the most points possible before being overwhelmed by obstacles and the speed of the scrolling. Here's a link!
Click me! I'm the link! Woo!
Thanks in advance!
- Z <3
^ My rank on Halo: Reach :3
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#255 2012-09-28 05:51:45
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Billybob- Mario with Ball Quest
Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10
TOTAL: 88/100
EXCELLENT GAME!
You've bounced your way into the 80s. A good mix of difficult and easy levels and no glitches that i could find. Well Done
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#256 2012-09-28 05:57:07
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Zparx wrote:
Wow thanks! I had no idea that my game, Cyber Defense, was on top of the leaderboard! (: While I'm here I'd like to submit another game for review, if you're up for it. It's received more love and attention than Cyber Defense, and even being the creator of it I find it super addicting. It's Toasty's Adventure! You play as a slice of perfectly toasted bread named "Toasty" and collect powerups and items to aid you in gaining the most points possible before being overwhelmed by obstacles and the speed of the scrolling. Here's a link!
Click me! I'm the link! Woo!
Thanks in advance!
- Z <3
Hi Zparx, After I reviewed Plastic Toads project, I am going to start with the new review criteria, however since I am not quite sure when to start with the new criteria let me know if you want to use the old one or I am going to use the new one.
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#257 2012-09-28 05:59:04
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Willpower wrote:
Zparx wrote:
Wow thanks! I had no idea that my game, Cyber Defense, was on top of the leaderboard! (: While I'm here I'd like to submit another game for review, if you're up for it. It's received more love and attention than Cyber Defense, and even being the creator of it I find it super addicting. It's Toasty's Adventure! You play as a slice of perfectly toasted bread named "Toasty" and collect powerups and items to aid you in gaining the most points possible before being overwhelmed by obstacles and the speed of the scrolling. Here's a link!
Click me! I'm the link! Woo!
Thanks in advance!
- Z <3Hi Zparx, After I reviewed Plastic Toads project, I am going to start with the new review criteria, however since I am not quite sure when to start with the new criteria let me know if you want to use the old one or I am going to use the new one.
What if I asked for both? x) Uhmmm. Well whichever criteria you used for Cyber Defense is fine with me! Just, make sure you thoroughly read the notes section! It explains how to play. Thanks again!
^ My rank on Halo: Reach :3
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#258 2012-09-28 06:00:09
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EP Ninja with Adventure Of The Sprite
Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10
TOTAL: 94/100
ALMOST PERFECT GAME!
Sorry Zparx you have been pipped at the post! What a cool idea, a story about a sprite in a scratch project. Cool battle ideas and as you can see I don't really have a big negative. Well Done
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#259 2012-09-28 06:05:51
#260 2012-09-28 06:10:50
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Pokemon Gardevoir with Colours 140,000
Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10
TOTAL: 91/100
ALMOST PERFECT GAME!
Amazing graphics, I got a bit confused that there was only red until I red the comments- it works well donloaded. Unfortunately I did not check if there reakly is 140,000 colours because that would of took years. Wll Done
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#261 2012-09-28 06:16:58
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CN12 with Parking Lot Drifting
Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10
TOTAL: 85/100
EXCELLENT GAME!
Although it did not get 90+ I favourited it as a personal favourite game of mine- Very hard to control where to go. I tried to write my name and ending up drawing two parellel lines but I did manage a figure of eight! Well Done
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#262 2012-09-28 06:28:37
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BlazeX with Mission
Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 5/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10
TOTAL: 85/100
EXCELLENT GAME!
A good one sprite one script game, platformers seem to be first choice for one sprite one script creators. There was only one thing that really let you down and that was the complexity- the first level has only small blocks for you to jump on- if you make it slightly easier it would be in the 90s. Well Done
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#263 2012-09-28 06:45:35
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Ojoe with Target Range
Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 7/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 6/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10
TOTAL: 66/100
OK GAME!
An OK game however it is a bit too easy- everytime you are basically guarateed to hit the target, you mainly lost points because of that and that there was not much change with the targets. Well Done
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#264 2012-09-28 06:48:58
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FireDrake with Fallout
errm, how do you start playing- you said play in flash but it doesn't- might have something to do with the new flash player- If you tell me how to play it I will review with new criteria.
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#265 2012-09-28 06:57:16
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Plastic Toad with Save The Mushrooms
Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10
TOTAL: 85/100
EXCELLENT GAME!
What a cool idea and a great score, the only thing that let it down was the complexity- it was a bit too hard with the mushrooms taking time to reload. Other than that what an idea. Well Done
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#266 2012-09-28 07:11:33
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Zparx with Toasty's Adventure
Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10
TOTAL: 91/100
ALMOST PERFECT GAME!
I decided to do it in the old criteria for the moment, I've played jetpack joyride and as soon as I started this i could see the resemblance. This is a good take on it and as you can tell from the 10s very successful in the way of points. Well Done
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#267 2012-09-28 07:27:40
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I am up to date on reviews- who'd a thought it!?
NEW CRITERIA STARTS NOW!!
Games and Os's:
Scripts (Programming) /10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) /10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music, Required?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) /10
Surprises (New/ Plot Twists) /10
Complexity (Controls, Hard, Easy) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
Re-Playability (Keep you playing) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Animations and Videos:
Scripts (Programming) /10
Bugs & Glitches (Does it run well?) /10
Music (Required?) /10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) /10
Idea (Original, Remix?) /10
Entertaining (Is it fun to watch?) /10
Understanding (Is it easy to get? Instructions) /10
Story (Characters) /10
Effects (Sound, Animation) /10
Personal Opinion (What I really think! This is the space for comments) /10
Beta's and Projects you want bug checked:
I try and find the bugs and glitches and there are no points.
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#268 2012-09-28 07:33:31
- pokemongardevoir
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further
Willpower wrote:
Pokemon Gardevoir with Colours 140,000
Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10
TOTAL: 91/100
ALMOST PERFECT GAME!
Amazing graphics, I got a bit confused that there was only red until I red the comments- it works well downloaded. Unfortunately I did not check if there really is 140,000 colours because that would of took years. Wll Done
Actually, It's simple math! Since there are 200 possible hues, 100 possible darkness, and 7 possible saturation, you just do 200 x 100 x 7 and you get 140,000! Include the opacity slider, that's another 100, and you can get 14,000,000!
Last edited by pokemongardevoir (2012-09-28 07:33:56)
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#269 2012-09-28 07:36:33
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pokemongardevoir wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Pokemon Gardevoir with Colours 140,000
Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10
TOTAL: 91/100
ALMOST PERFECT GAME!
Amazing graphics, I got a bit confused that there was only red until I red the comments- it works well downloaded. Unfortunately I did not check if there really is 140,000 colours because that would of took years. Wll DoneActually, It's simple math! Since there are 200 possible hues, 100 possible darkness, and 7 possible saturation, you just do 200 x 100 x 7 and you get 140,000! Include the opacity slider, that's another 100, and you can get 14,000,000!
Ok Change the name to 14,000,000 colours then
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#270 2012-09-28 08:38:01
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Willpower wrote:
Calexby with Mine Fall
Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 6/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 10/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10
TOTAL: 70/100
GREAT GAME!!
Overall a great game, I didn't have any real problems with the game. The minor problem which lost you the most points was the lack of sound. I also agree with BerberBerber about adding changes in velocity to the game.
Thank you very much.
You mean sideways velocity, don't you?
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#271 2012-09-28 09:05:03
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calebxy wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Calexby with Mine Fall
Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 6/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 10/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10
TOTAL: 70/100
GREAT GAME!!
Overall a great game, I didn't have any real problems with the game. The minor problem which lost you the most points was the lack of sound. I also agree with BerberBerber about adding changes in velocity to the game.Thank you very much.
You mean sideways velocity, don't you?
yes, and also if the speed in which you fall changes as well that would make it a bigger challenge
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#272 2012-09-28 09:07:34
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Willpower wrote:
calebxy wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Calexby with Mine Fall
Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 6/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 10/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10
TOTAL: 70/100
GREAT GAME!!
Overall a great game, I didn't have any real problems with the game. The minor problem which lost you the most points was the lack of sound. I also agree with BerberBerber about adding changes in velocity to the game.Thank you very much.
You mean sideways velocity, don't you?yes, and also if the speed in which you fall changes as well that would make it a bigger challenge
Yes, so it would gradually get harder and harder. That's a good idea, thanks.
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#273 2012-09-28 10:43:18
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further
Willpower wrote:
Wisperfur with Cat Creator v2!!
Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) errrrm! oh go on 10/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 810
Original (Remix?) 710
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 610
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10
TOTAL: 82/100
EXCELLENT CAT CREATOR!
WOWOWOWOW! I love this for the music "Cute Cute Cute Cute Overload" I do have one suggestion- Changing colours of feet to say Dark Blue was like an 8 click process if you could find a way that you can click feet and then choose a colour it would be amazing. Well Done
Thanks :3 I'll definitely try to incorporate these if i do a V3
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#274 2012-09-28 10:49:50
- Firedrake969
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Willpower wrote:
FireDrake with Fallout
errm, how do you start playing- you said play in flash but it doesn't- might have something to do with the new flash player- If you tell me how to play it I will review with new criteria.
Just hit play, sorry, the new Flash Player messed up that script.
But just that one.XD
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#275 2012-09-28 11:29:15
- pokemongardevoir
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further
Willpower wrote:
pokemongardevoir wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Pokemon Gardevoir with Colours 140,000
Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10
TOTAL: 91/100
ALMOST PERFECT GAME!
Amazing graphics, I got a bit confused that there was only red until I red the comments- it works well downloaded. Unfortunately I did not check if there really is 140,000 colours because that would of took years. Wll DoneActually, It's simple math! Since there are 200 possible hues, 100 possible darkness, and 7 possible saturation, you just do 200 x 100 x 7 and you get 140,000! Include the opacity slider, that's another 100, and you can get 14,000,000!
Ok
Well, Opacity isn't really a colour.... Just transparency! Also, the name COLOURS 14000000 was too long, and would show up as COLOURS 14,0000… in the thumbnail
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