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#226 2012-09-13 11:20:49

Willpower
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Wario X with Blob Nation Welcome to the world Part 1

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10

TOTAL: 87/100

EXCELLENT GAME!!

A great game, the only critisism I really have with it is that the dialogues were a bit too long for my liking. I also seemed to kill the demon 3 times and it did not die. Well Done  smile


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#227 2012-09-13 11:31:12

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Zparx with Cyber Defence

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 7/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 93/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

Woo, Well worth the wait! I love tower defence games and this is one of the best I have seen on scratch. I loved it and favourited it and only have one critisism which is at the end of the "level" you lose all the turrets you had the level before- sure its a good challenge but it is kind of annoying if you do not have much money (like me!) Well Done  smile

Zparx wrote:

I love when people decide to review games. I just hope you commit to it, as it can be lots of work.

Yep, I started reviewing in May and did not get many requests but now I have tons and yeah its hard... but fun. I don't really look at other peoples projects much- I mostly just update my ones so I decided to review so I could see other peoples projects.


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#228 2012-09-13 11:40:27

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Mweidman with Adventure for the ring.

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10

TOTAL: 90/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

I am too young to have played the "old Atari 2600 game adventure" but I have played games like this before. I like the addition of the Dragons. They add pressure and stop you from remembering how to get back to the castle. I deducted two points for glitches because the wand did not seem to work- is this a recurring thing? Well Done  smile


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#229 2012-09-13 11:43:01

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Tanks 4 is next! I have to go and do my silly paper round now. Adios Peeps!


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#230 2012-09-13 11:43:14

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Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 with Generation 4000

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9.5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 92.5/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

Borrego is back! The only problem I had really was the fact thaat when I tried to build my coal plant offline it sort of froze and did not work. Good walkthrough like usual. This game reminds me a lot of Sims city 3000, I love that game. Well Done  smile

SO SORRY, but Generation: 4001 Gold is out and needs reviewing! Basically, there was a glitch where placing an object larger than 1X1 tiles on specific squares would cause the image of the placer to stay as an egg timer. When the image is costume 58 (the egg timer) the other scripts do not run (this is to stop letting the player building more than one thing at the same time).

This 'expansion pack' fixes that, so although the scripts will still stop, it has a debug script so that if the object fails to be laid properly (which it shouldn't, as I've fixed that part too) the costume will switch to 1 and the other scripts will work.

Also, it has many graphical improvements (CHECK OUT THE NIGHT-TIME GRAPHICS!!!) and the major thing- music change.


Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!

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#231 2012-09-13 12:10:27

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Willpower wrote:

Tanks 4 is next! I have to go and do my silly paper round now. Adios Peeps!

Alright, come back soon, but don't rush your round!  tongue

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#232 2012-09-15 22:15:44

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#233 2012-09-17 13:09:16

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Wheareyoucomingbackexactly? tongue

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#234 2012-09-17 14:29:41

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Borrego6165 wrote:

Willpower wrote:

Borrego6165 with Generation 4000

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9.5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 92.5/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

Borrego is back! The only problem I had really was the fact thaat when I tried to build my coal plant offline it sort of froze and did not work. Good walkthrough like usual. This game reminds me a lot of Sims city 3000, I love that game. Well Done  smile

SO SORRY, but Generation: 4001 Gold is out and needs reviewing! Basically, there was a glitch where placing an object larger than 1X1 tiles on specific squares would cause the image of the placer to stay as an egg timer. When the image is costume 58 (the egg timer) the other scripts do not run (this is to stop letting the player building more than one thing at the same time).

This 'expansion pack' fixes that, so although the scripts will still stop, it has a debug script so that if the object fails to be laid properly (which it shouldn't, as I've fixed that part too) the costume will switch to 1 and the other scripts will work.

Also, it has many graphical improvements (CHECK OUT THE NIGHT-TIME GRAPHICS!!!) and the major thing- music change.

I'll check it out and do a simple review, not the big long one. Intrested to see the night time graphics


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#235 2012-09-17 14:40:59

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SonicFan12p with Tanks 4

I have found some major glitches (online):
1) No tanks appear at any point
2) With the maze- following the path does not work you can not follow the path (it does not change background), the only way around it is heading right continously and you do not follow the path.


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#236 2012-09-17 15:09:59

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Can you please review Little green man?


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#237 2012-09-17 15:54:14

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Willpower wrote:

SonicFan12p with Tanks 4

I have found some major glitches (online):
1) No tanks appear at any point
2) With the maze- following the path does not work you can not follow the path (it does not change background), the only way around it is heading right continously and you do not follow the path.

That must be the new flash player acting up again.  hmm  It worked fine on the old one. Not cool new player. I'll check it out. Meanwhile, you can dowload it, that should still work.

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#238 2012-09-17 16:17:00

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where's the simple review? well, your old system is simple, so where's the normal review for my game?


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#239 2012-09-25 12:43:07

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Okay, the ST fixed everything except for the Boss, so you can review it now.


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#240 2012-09-25 15:03:52

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Can you please review COLOURS 140,000? Thanks! <3


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#241 2012-09-25 17:16:57

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#242 2012-09-26 10:14:30

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Can you review Mission? Just click my name!


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#243 2012-09-26 12:25:11

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http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/OJOE/2801161

Please review ASAP!!

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#244 2012-09-26 12:26:02

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Review the one in my sig, please.


Alt of Firedrake969.

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#245 2012-09-27 12:21:24

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Please check out http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/PlasticToad/2792257


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#246 2012-09-28 03:50:29

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Benjamin2 with The Level Game  "Review 2" - Numbers on the right are what you gotm this time if they are different to before.

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 8/10, 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10, 10/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 10/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10, 9/10

Total 91/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

You couldn't really do much better than last time but you did- by one point! The level game is a really cool idea but with 125+ levels coming soon your going to have to find a way of having all those levels without exceeding the upload limit and slowing down everyones computors. Good Luck  lol  The game was a bit glit hy and jumpy on the computer and when I donloaded it, i deleated the credit sprite because it was annoying me but well Done  smile


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#247 2012-09-28 03:57:07

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SonicFan12p with Tanks 4

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

Total 92/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

I am beginning to think I need to change the scoring system again since everyone seems to be getting Almost Perfect!! I'm glad it now works with the flash player and it is a lot more difficult than 3- more tanks means you nedd better strategy. As entertaining as always Well Done  smile


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#248 2012-09-28 04:11:33

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ShinyJellicent with KeyDrums

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 10/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 7/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 7/10

TOTAL: 83/100

EXCELLENT GAME!

I have made games like this myself although the graphics are much better on yours! I did find a glitch where when you change the keyboard sound to flute it does not work- i think that is the flash player. Well Done  smile

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#249 2012-09-28 04:34:13

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Oiman with Lazerdodge

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9.5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

TOTAL: 89.5/100

EXCELLENT GAME!

89.5!!!! If you can find a reason for an extra half a mark I'll give it to you  lol  This is a great game, although I got a higher score when I actually didn't move (2100) compared to when I was playing the game properly (900)!!! Well Done  smile


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#250 2012-09-28 04:54:09

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Willpower wrote:

SonicFan12p with Tanks 4

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

Total 92/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

I am beginning to think I need to change the scoring system again since everyone seems to be getting Almost Perfect!! I'm glad it now works with the flash player and it is a lot more difficult than 3- more tanks means you nedd better strategy. As entertaining as always Well Done  smile

Thanks! I wish you were the one judging the Scratch Cup!  tongue  I'll get -5 done eventually. I'm reluctant to say soon, because it still need a lot of work. You'll understand why when it finally comes out.  wink


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