Scratch

Syllable order
5,7,5. Whisperfur, check
Ones from above lol

this is really dumb
you are just laughing at your
own jokes you know, right?

Top line is wrong.

"Yes very much, we"

is better. 

And okay.

We were inactive
Let's wake this thread up again
Someone write something!

We've lost computer internet connection for a few days- i'm on my phone, anyway, i can't post anything longer than 512 character until then, so someone wake bookworm studios up- it was brilliant! We had an awesome thing going, but it keeps falling inactive, which is sad, because it was really good. Also, a new writing club has opened up by  pussnboots. It needs some help  getting started. Some of us should join.

*Wince*
@ our school, we aren't meant to get homework for two whole weeks, but not all the teachers realised that-i got homework on the first day. We never get much homework anyway, so it's okay.
Apart from #the trilogy# the only thing i've written in a while is music. Sigh. I broke the haiku pattern. Oh well.

Okay.

Pinnipediator, where's the link to the writing club thing? I might be able to advertise it on the front page of the library and thread. It sounds like a great idea.

here we go- pussnboots' writing club

Yay! Illustration!

Hi   

As the sun set, covering the world in a soft orange glow, and the autumnal trees shook gently in a non existent breeze, scattering golden leaves in a fluttering castade, it turned to night; looking to be a hot and un-autumn like as the day it had followed.

Sighing, Li turned from the sight and looked behind her; the white walls of the city, painted a faint gold in the light, loomed out of the hillside. Even now the Emperor would be awakening to find his most valuable possession missing- "And I have it!" whispered Li with delight. " Better continue on i guess..." she said, before turning towards the sunset and walking onwards.
The morning came in as much glory as the sunset, as if trying to out do it. Bird song mingled with fresh dew-laden air, the crisp crunch of burnt oranges leaves underfoot, clear cloudy skys, still waiting for the heat of day.  " Perfect day for hunting..." Whispered a quieter, deeper voice then Pams. Not in the sunrise as she was, but lying on the bunk of a vardo-wagon, his eyes pouring over a tiny pot of water that to anyone else was just that. He had dark curled hair and a stubbled beard framing a deeply tanned face and drk brown eyes. " Stavos! Stavos" He called in a deep harsh voice" Get o'er boy!"

That's all for now, will carry on later. Yeah you may need to look up what a vardo wagon is, but i wasn't sure if it's other name was PC.

So yeah    Also just out of intrest, what you guys reading right now? I'm reading les miserables; nearly finished too. I'm kinda an advanced reader XD Everyone else
in my class is reading twilight, jaquline wilson and stuff.

Edit: Sorry about spellings, very tired and too lazy to correct

Last edited by Whisperfur (2012-09-23 04:15:23)

Why would you like to join Bookworm Studios?: I like writing and I've been wanting to join a collab since my old one went inactve 
Which role(s) would you like to do (Write, Review, Edit, Illustrate)?:Write, Edit
   *If you write, give an example of a good writing sentence:He ran down the path, legs beating against the ground like pistons.
   *If you edit, give me a sentence and say how to make it better: "I looked up at the pretty tree." can be changed to "I looked up at the beautiful green foliage" 
   *If you illustrate, give an example of your art:
What is your favorite book?: Probably the Redwall series
Will you contribute to this collaboration, and stay active, and are you aware that you will be kicked out if you don't?: I will do my best.

Yeah, looks fine by me but again not humhum XD
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I am a big buzzy bee
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I have total writers block, Wheee!

Shame. Oh well. That's the exact reason why i'm not sharing Shasai Mvad.

can i join?