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#201 2012-08-20 11:33:48

sonicfan12p
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Alright, Tanks-4 is finally out! Sorry for taking so long, but here it is!


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#202 2012-08-20 11:43:07

benjamin2
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

Benjamin2 and Angelica101, I had a quick look at your projects yesterday and

Benjamin 2- I pushed play on the menu screen with no problem and then on the next screen "play" was hidden by the advert at the bottom. So I could not review it

Angelica101- Erm...nice project but I don't see how I am supposed to review it


7 Reviews Left- I will see if I can get on the computer today

Just click the advert, or wait about six seconds


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#203 2012-08-20 11:43:40

Borrego6165
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further


Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!

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#204 2012-08-20 12:35:16

shinyjellicent12321
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Registered: 2011-09-15
Posts: 24

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/shinyjellicent12321/2713256

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#205 2012-08-21 20:23:45

oiman
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Registered: 2010-08-18
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

can you review this project?

the project can be found here

and the game is hard for a reason, it makes it so when you get a high score it actually means something.

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#206 2012-08-23 10:11:11

sonicfan12p
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

bump


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#207 2012-08-23 10:58:51

Whisperfur
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Registered: 2012-06-08
Posts: 100+

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

HI Could you review my game please  http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Whisperfur/2734430  It probably won't score very well but i did work hard on it.


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#208 2012-08-31 14:46:05

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

I have already written this post once, but since I have got a laptop  smile  and i have only been on it for 40 minutes I deleated the wrong tab.  mad  So anyway:

Back from cloudy Cornwall, and I see 12 projects waiting for me. I don't have that long left on the laptop right now  sad  so I will look at your projects and review them later on  lol

Benjamin2- I will try it again, and I see you are going to make the Level Game 126+ levels, I thought 100 would be the end. Good Luck.

Scratch On!

Ps. Check out my new game. Willpower vs The Carebears Defence- its for anyone that does not like Carebears
Here is the topic


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#209 2012-08-31 21:42:30

Billybob-Mario
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Posts: 500+

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Can you please review Ball Quest?

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#210 2012-09-03 06:08:01

Willpower
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Registered: 2012-01-26
Posts: 1000+

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Calexby with Mine Fall

Scripts (Programming) 7/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 6/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 6/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 10/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 70/100

GREAT GAME!!

Overall a great game, I didn't have any real problems with the game. The minor problem which lost you the most points was the lack of sound. I also agree with BerberBerber about adding changes in velocity to the game.


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#211 2012-09-03 06:23:14

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

UltraAdam with Aroball 4 (Is this a re-review I can't find where I reviewed it last time?)

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 90/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

Wow-well Done, I loved the wing flapping of the sprite, you had to be careful you did not miss judge the wing flapping though and hit the red. I loved the angry ninja level, great scripts. I had to take a couple of points away because of the easyness of some of the levels. I also found some of the levels random (Pink) but random is cool. Well Done  smile


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#212 2012-09-03 06:25:46

Willpower
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Bananaman114 with game (cool name!)

I'm sorry but I could not understand this game. If you can tell me how to play I will review it.


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#213 2012-09-03 06:40:06

epninja
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Registered: 2011-01-16
Posts: 59

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Could you review this please? EPNinjaObjective Thanks if you do.

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#214 2012-09-03 08:05:58

NeilWest
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Registered: 2010-01-06
Posts: 1000+

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Love 2: Prologue

Download because of major lag online.

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#215 2012-09-03 08:24:41

UltraAdam
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Registered: 2012-03-03
Posts: 500+

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Willpower wrote:

UltraAdam with Aroball 4 (Is this a re-review I can't find where I reviewed it last time?)

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 8/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 90/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

Wow-well Done, I loved the wing flapping of the sprite, you had to be careful you did not miss judge the wing flapping though and hit the red. I loved the angry ninja level, great scripts. I had to take a couple of points away because of the easyness of some of the levels. I also found some of the levels random (Pink) but random is cool. Well Done  smile

Thanks for The EPIC review!!!!


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#216 2012-09-04 11:47:45

sonicfan12p
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

bump


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#217 2012-09-04 11:48:10

Willpower
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Registered: 2012-01-26
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Borrego6165 with Generation 4000

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 9.5/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 92.5/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

Borrego is back! The only problem I had really was the fact thaat when I tried to build my coal plant offline it sort of froze and did not work. Good walkthrough like usual. This game reminds me a lot of Sims city 3000, I love that game. Well Done  smile


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#218 2012-09-05 15:56:48

sonicfan12p
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

You're almost to mine Willpower, don't stop now!


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#219 2012-09-05 21:15:26

CN12
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Registered: 2012-07-15
Posts: 1000+

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Can you review my Cube World 1.5? It's not hard to find, just go to my profile and it's on the first page.


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#220 2012-09-06 02:02:33

NeilWest
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

NeilWest wrote:

Love 2: Prologue

Download because of major lag online.

Bump.

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#221 2012-09-08 07:39:03

Agg725
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Registered: 2012-03-13
Posts: 500+

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

do u only review games?

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#222 2012-09-11 16:25:49

Willpower
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Registered: 2012-01-26
Posts: 1000+

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

sonicfan12p wrote:

You're almost to mine Willpower, don't stop now!

Don't worry, I will get there! i just have been updating my game Mineshooter at the moment, so I have not been reviewing but it has finished now.


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#223 2012-09-11 16:27:10

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Agg725 wrote:

do u only review games?

Nope, I'll review anything that can be reviewed- Games, OS's, I have even done a couple of videos and animations!


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#224 2012-09-11 19:52:28

MechaRidley
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Registered: 2012-09-08
Posts: 24

Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

Could you review my game? It is Metroid Prime game Demov2. dont forget i have some stuff added not realesed to public yet. still working on v3. and dont forget i have not used scratch very much.

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#225 2012-09-13 10:55:28

Willpower
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Re: Want someone to review your project- Look No Further

CN12 wrote:

Can you review my Cube World 1.5? It's not hard to find, just go to my profile and it's on the first page.

Do you mean Cube World 1.4?- if not where is five?


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