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medog wrote:

UltraAdam wrote:

Can you Re-view this please?

SHIFT 3

Graphics
20/50; The only weak part of the game. The lava could have been flatter and more colorful, the platforms could have looked nicer, and the box- well, it's just a box.

Script Quality
50/50; No bugs or glitches, works on both players, the physics are AMAZING, this gets the high score!

Game Concept
40/50; Much like another platformer, but the story of this game adds some flavor to it.

Gameplay
50/50; Absolutely PERFECT. I never want to stop playing the game, it has great replay ability due to it's plenty of levels, and it is FUN. REALLY FUN. This is actually the first 50/50 I'm giving on gameplay! Great job!

Final Rating
160/200; an amazing game! I'm gonna keep playing once I've finished this review!

ADDITIONAL NOTES

The music was AWESOME! I now regret not giving music ratings.

Thanks for the best Re-view ever!

sonicfan12p wrote:

Would you review Tanks-4? I suggest downloading and playing in performance mode.

TANKS 4.3

Graphics
30/50; Definitely not bad, but a little plain.

Script Quality

20/50; This was EXTREMELY glitchy. Once I got to negative lives, once I could not move (no, it wasn't the cutscene) and so so many times I died for absolutely no reason, having to start the entire game over!!!

Game Concept
35/50; There were plenty of games like this, but the "Fortress of the pink leader" and the password guy at the beginning made it more creative.

Gameplay
25/50; WAAAAY too hard. It is frustrating to be fired at by a billion annoying pink tanks,
get certain death from helicopter missiles, and become hopeless once you see giant pink tanks.

Final rating:
110/200; It is extremely annoying to start the entire game over when you die. When the pink tanks start firing, they NEVER stop.

northmeister wrote:

Could you review Balloon Dodge please? 

BALLOON DODGE

Graphics
50/50; Incredible! Incredible! I've never seen graphics these good in my entire scratch life! Awesome!

Script Quality
50/50; No bugs at ALL, amazing; especially for such a fast paced game!

Game Concept
50/50; I have never seen a game like this, and it proudly succeeds to show me that this is a very good concept!

Gameplay
50/50; This is what separates this game from "Generation 4000" The gameplay is extremely fast paced, exciting, and fun! I want to play this FOREVER!!!!

Final Rating
200/200; This could easily be considered the best game in scratch history! Everyone who is viewing this forum is strongly advised to try it out.
                                                      

Last edited by medog (2012-09-01 13:21:47)

medog wrote:

sonicfan12p wrote:

Would you review Tanks-4? I suggest downloading and playing in performance mode.

TANKS 4.3

Graphics
30/50; Definitely not bad, but a little plain.

Script Quality

20/50; This was EXTREMELY glitchy. Once I got to negative lives, once I could not move (no, it wasn't the cutscene) and so so many times I died for absolutely no reason, having to start the entire game over!!!

Game Concept
35/50; There were plenty of games like this, but the "Fortress of the pink leader" and the password guy at the beginning made it more creative.

Gameplay
25/50; WAAAAY too hard. It is frustrating to be fired at by a billion annoying pink tanks,
get certain death from helicopter missiles, and become hopeless once you see giant pink tanks.

Final rating:
110/200; It is extremely annoying to start the entire game over when you die. When the pink tanks start firing, they NEVER stop.

That's odd, I spot checked it really well this time.    Negative lives, with how I set it up, is theoretically impossible, if the program functions normally. I could think of only one way you couldn't move, and that's the maze, which the wall occassionally glitch up, but it worked 9/10 in testing. Also, you shouldn't have started over, it would start at last checkpoint. A.K.A. levels 1, 2, 3, and the boss. If you clicked the start from last checkpoint button. I won't say anything about the graphics, since I drew them myself, and am a very rushed artist. Not much patience there I'm afraid!    Also, I thought it was a bit easy, considering the last game, but there's a certain trick to it to actually survive. I gave the Tank enough range to stay out of tricky situations. Also, the helicopter can only shoot at the lower half of the screen. Just go above it. When I was testing, I kept thinking, this is too easy, I should have mad it harder. But I guess not! 

Can you review Fruit Pong v1.1? Thanks! 
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/shinyjellicent12321/2752523

Last edited by shinyjellicent12321 (2012-09-02 00:25:59)

Can you Re-view My Ultra OS please?!

shinyjellicent12321 wrote:

medog wrote:

shinyjellicent12321 wrote:

Can you review Fruit Pong v1.1? Thanks! 
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/shinyjellicent12321/2752523

FRUIT PONG V1.1

Graphics
40/50; Pretty cool, the fruits were the best. They were very creative.

Script Quality
35/50; Not bad, but does have quite a few glitches (that most other pong related games have).

Game Concept
25/50; Well, it's pong; that's for sure. But I'm not sure if the "fruit" part makes it that different...

Gameplay
20/50; Pretty slow and boring, with no special features like power-ups or speed-ups, or anything like that.

Overall rating:
120/200; Not terrible, but a few things hold the game down.

Thanks! There actually are some powerups and bonuses, but I scripted it so that there was a 50% chance of finding a powerup.

Oh, so I just didn't find one.

Pfctink wrote:

Desperation voyage: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Pfctink/2572818

(Not really a game.)

DESPERATION VOYAGE

Graphics
30/50; Nothing special, but the looking around effect is cool.

Script Quality
30/50; The looking around effect could have been smoother, and there are no bugs or glitches mainly because the "game" is unbelievably short.

Game Concept
35/50; I liked the idea, but it could have been released a little better.

Gameplay
0/50; Since this isn't really a game, there is no real gameplay.

Final rating:
95/200; Could use some nice effects, like smoother animations, but overall, not bad at all.

Last edited by medog (2012-09-02 13:44:49)

Please post your game now!

Could you review this please? http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/epninja/2756104. Thanks if you do.

medog wrote:

epninja wrote:

Could you review this please? http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/epninja/2756104. Thanks if you do.

EPNINJA:STORY OF THE SPRITE

Graphics
50/50; I can't believe my eyes! The animation is beautiful and the sprites themselves are amazing!

Script Quality
50/50; I could find absolutely no bugs, and everything (seemingly) functioned the way they were supposed to.

Game Concept
40/50; Mostly an RPG, but all of the "story of the sprite" stuff keeps things interesting!

Gameplay
45/50; Amazing and extremely fun, except some things that would be nice to have were lacked, like the enemy's health bar. But still fun and amazing!

Final Rating:
185/200; A wonderful and fun game! One of Scratch's best projects!

Thanks for the great review!!

Please post your game now!

medog wrote:

northmeister wrote:

Could you review Balloon Dodge please? 

BALLOON DODGE

Graphics
50/50; Incredible! Incredible! I've never seen graphics these good in my entire scratch life! Awesome!

Script Quality
50/50; No bugs at ALL, amazing; especially for such a fast paced game!

Game Concept
50/50; I have never seen a game like this, and it proudly succeeds to show me that this is a very good concept!

Gameplay
50/50; This is what separates this game from "Generation 4000" The gameplay is extremely fast paced, exciting, and fun! I want to play this FOREVER!!!!

Final Rating
200/200; This could easily be considered the best game in scratch history! Everyone who is viewing this forum is strongly advised to try it out.
                                                      

AHHHHHHHHHHHH! I LOST TOP POSITION! Sorry but I'm really competitive, and I'm sure northmeister would agree that us two have to battle it out for top 

basically, I lost on gameplay. Now the thing is that when you play balloon dodge, the first minute is fresh, the there is nothing new which changes the game dramatically. So, even if you could play for say an hour, you'd notice it's getting VERY repetitive. however on G:4000, once you have built the first few types of buildings there are still plenty more to keep you going. Fed up of the music? Change the songs in the playlist! Fed up of the advisor? Replace him with a vampire!

Also, about graphics. The background of clouds had a big 'cut' in it, and looked like it was from google images (in a polite way... YOU CHEATED!!!) Also, the spikes and the border look untidy and unfinished, with no gradient fill and some of the spikes weren't even pointy!!!! (tut tut tut) So most of the graphics were great with smooth animations, but those things need to be taken into consideration.

So... your turn