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#1 2012-08-27 18:04:57

shamrocker
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Stories and Art of Furries

Hallo! It is I. I have a new fan thing... Furries! Yay! Anyway I've written a story and I have a huuuuge net of my furry's universe in my head DX but yeah. Here is the story I made, it's called Moongazing and is the first in the many stories I will write. It's a bit short but it fit onto notebook paper.



Let's begin!
   Moon Gazer was restless, tossing and turning all night long. Deciding to take a walk, she rolled out of bed and stood. She flicked her ear and shook the dizziness from her head. Stumbling out of her bedroom, she made her way to the back door.

   Moon sat down under a tree. Loneliness overtook her. She stared at the sky and curled her tail around her feet. The stars twinkled, winking at her, it seemed. She sighed. Some nights it felt like the moon and her sisters the stars were her only companions. They seemed to tell stories to her.

  One section seemed icy, and cold. Distant, sort of. Another seemed warm and inviting. She leaned against the tree and read the stories of the stars.

   A glow woke her. Fireflies twinkled and shone like the stars themselves. She glanced at the sky. Judging by the position of the moon, it was around three AM. Getting up, she stumbled into her house, into her room and collapsed on her bed. She fell asleep again with a smile upon her lips.


Any thoughts? I know it's short. Anyway if any of my OPs of The Keep see this, would you mind whitelisting a guy named drake? All lowercase.


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#2 2012-08-27 19:39:23

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Re: Stories and Art of Furries

It's somewhat hard to pull off a furry character without a mary-sue/emo angst type character, but so far it seems like your character is pretty good. Concentrate on giving her some more personality.  smile  That's my advice.

OFF-TOPIC: I haven't seen The Keep server online lately. Is it down for good?  sad

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#3 2012-08-28 08:14:11

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Re: Stories and Art of Furries

spongebob123 wrote:

It's somewhat hard to pull off a furry character without a mary-sue/emo angst type character, but so far it seems like your character is pretty good. Concentrate on giving her some more personality.  smile  That's my advice.

OFF-TOPIC: I haven't seen The Keep server online lately. Is it down for good?  sad

Kay. And Furries aren't like that. It's... Complicated, but they have the same range of personality that we do.

Oh yeah, and the keep will soon be up again. We're also currently white listed.

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#4 2012-08-28 15:30:54

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Re: Stories and Art of Furries

shamrocker wrote:

spongebob123 wrote:

It's somewhat hard to pull off a furry character without a mary-sue/emo angst type character, but so far it seems like your character is pretty good. Concentrate on giving her some more personality.  smile  That's my advice.

OFF-TOPIC: I haven't seen The Keep server online lately. Is it down for good?  sad

Kay. And Furries aren't like that. It's... Complicated, but they have the same range of personality that we do.

Oh yeah, and the keep will soon be up again. We're also currently white listed.

I know most Furries are like that  smile  They're pretty cool usually! I don't mean to bash them, just pointing out what (obviously) not to do lol.  smile  Thank goodness the keep will be up soon!

GL with your story  smile

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#5 2012-08-29 08:33:15

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Re: Stories and Art of Furries

spongebob123 wrote:

shamrocker wrote:

spongebob123 wrote:

It's somewhat hard to pull off a furry character without a mary-sue/emo angst type character, but so far it seems like your character is pretty good. Concentrate on giving her some more personality.  smile  That's my advice.

OFF-TOPIC: I haven't seen The Keep server online lately. Is it down for good?  sad

Kay. And Furries aren't like that. It's... Complicated, but they have the same range of personality that we do.

Oh yeah, and the keep will soon be up again. We're also currently white listed.

I know most Furries are like that  smile  They're pretty cool usually! I don't mean to bash them, just pointing out what (obviously) not to do lol.  smile  Thank goodness the keep will be up soon!

GL with your story  smile

Oh okay, and thanks :3


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