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Space Academy. I've at long last finished chapter 7! That action scene took me months to write, and I can now get on with the actual plot! I'm very happy about that. So anyway, here's a bit of what I've written so far of the next chapter. Please tell me what you think of it. 


Craig, along with three other men and two women, stood around a table. On the table, there was the robot. It was mostly intact, though its right arm was missing and there was an enormous dent in its chest.

They were in an average sized room, with spotless white walls and glass tables. Though the glass wasn’t very visible, since there was equipment everywhere, all over the tables. The tables themselves were even part of the equipment, able to perform all different types of scans.

“Tell me everything,” Craig said to one of the scientists in the room.
“As might have guessed,” she began, “it’s alien. The materials aren’t terrestrial, and the layout, design, and everything else about it are completely different to technology we’re familiar with. But we can still understand it. It has high powered lasers and the explosive charges in its biggest missiles could easily penetrate the hull of this station. We also found an amazing nanobot regeneration pack deep inside, which means that in theory, as long as you didn’t destroy the regeneration pack, it could recover from even the worst damage.”
“You haven’t left it in there, have you?” Craig asked.
“No no, of course not. It’s been removed and is currently undergoing separate analysis.”
“Good.”
“There’s one more thing, though. Something very, very odd about the robot.”

Last edited by calebxy (2012-08-26 12:21:51)