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Animeboy975 wrote:

Another shweet idea for a anime:

Meet Seth Johnson, a normal 5th grader who lives in Death Bells, Michigan. This town is known for supernatrual activity, and one day in 5th grade at his middle school, he is taken to under the whole town, where he finds a orginazation that stops the loads of demons living in the town. Seth has to defend himself, and slay the demons while keeping townsfolk safe in the dangerous little town, near Lake Huron.

What do you think? It's called Seth Johnson: Demon Hunter.

Genre: Action/Magical Boy/Mystery

I think it sounds pretty good, the idea of going under the town is very interesting, but the the plot seems a little stereotypical and predictable. 

Animeboy975 wrote:

HoneyHorse11 wrote:

Animeboy975 wrote:

Another shweet idea for a anime:

Meet Seth Johnson, a normal 5th grader who lives in Death Bells, Michigan. This town is known for supernatrual activity, and one day in 5th grade at his middle school, he is taken to under the whole town, where he finds a orginazation that stops the loads of demons living in the town. Seth has to defend himself, and slay the demons while keeping townsfolk safe in the dangerous little town, near Lake Huron.

What do you think? It's called Seth Johnson: Demon Hunter.

Genre: Action/Magical Boy/Mystery

I think it sounds pretty good, the idea of going under the town is very interesting, but the the plot seems a little stereotypical and predictable. 

It has plot twists.
How is it stereotypical? No characters are stereotypical.

The name is pretty stereotypical, if I were you I'd definitely change it.  The name is your first hook and people will decide if they want to open the manga by looking at the back, cover, side, etc.  The title counts in that.  A good title will make someone want to read it more.  If I was talking about your manga to some else, they'd have an easier time remembering it if it were more creative.  The title also reflects the manga.  If you were to name a manga something that sounds like a lot of other names, people would assume that it's a lot like most manga.  And demons are in a whole lot of shonen manga.  A lot.  I'm sure it does have plot twists, but unless they are quite brilliant, you can kind of assume from that description that he's going to live and save the town.  And I might be wrong, but that's the idea I get from this.  So if I was in a bookstore and read the back of this, I probably would put it back down, unless the art was very much to my taste.  However since your on Scratch, if you were to notify me of you posting a manga I would probably at least read some of it considering not too many people post actual manga stories on Scratch.

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Animeboy975 wrote:

HoneyHorse11 wrote:

Does anyone know 'Nakaimo- My Little Sister is Among Them'?  I think it's weird and gross and pit me in a bad mood... well I guess I should expect that from the ecchi genre. XD  Sorry if that's random, I just kinda wanted to put that out there as a warning.  ^^;

Isn't that one about a girl who likes her brother
My sister watched a few episodes and said it was weird. But that isn't the wierdest anime out there

There's a anime about underwear according to my sister
Silly Japan

That's just plain weird...

ToxicQuillz wrote:

Has anyone seen Spirited Away? It's an excellent anime movie. Weird, but amazing.

Oh my God, I love it so much, that is one of Ghibli's best.

Here is another manga idea I have. It is fantasy and is about a boy named Reyoku who lives in a forest village. His family is poor, so he cleans a man's stables for a living. The forest village, Ianara, resembles the Celts, but it was not intentional. Reyoku's father is murdered, so Reyoku embarks on a quest to bring the killer to justice. He receives a magic sword called a RuneSword and he can place a rune in its hilt and the sword gains the powers of the equiped rune. I have not come up with a reason for the antagonist killing Reyoku's dad, yet.

ToxicQuillz wrote:

ToxicQuillz wrote:

First thing: HETALIA 5TH SEASON CONFIRMED YAAAAAAAAAAAY

Second thing: I had an idea for a manga too. It's about a boy who becomes a cyborg and he tries to protect his town. But he fails. And when he fails, he has to try to save his friends. I'm still working on a good plot.

Another idea I have is personifications of time. The main character will be the present and he tries to prevent his brother, the future, to take his spot. I'm still tossing around the plot.

A third idea is the a boy will save another boy from drowing. It turns out that to boy who almost drown is a magical catboy would claims to be the other boy's servent and won't leave him alone. It's a parody of the insane yaoi fandom.

What do you guys think of my ideas?

The first one is too unfinished for me to comment but I think it's a good idea so far.  I think personifications of time is way too complicated, because technically when I'm typing this it's the present but oh look- now it's the past.  What I'm going to type next is the future.  You're reply to this will be the future, but when your typing it it will be the present, and when I'm reading it, typing the reply will be in the past.  See? Technically time doesn't exist, so... "The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once." - Albert Einstein.  As for the yaoi parody, it might be hard to get across that your making a parody/making fun of the insane amount of insane fans.  (I'm friends with one of them, they are quite insane.)  If you can manage to get the point across that your making fun of how overrated it's becoming without making fun of homosexuals, make it actually funny without repeating jokes and annoying the reader, and keep it from accidentally becoming a real yaoi manga and such, I believe that it could be really good.

HoneyHorse11 wrote:

ToxicQuillz wrote:

ToxicQuillz wrote:

First thing: HETALIA 5TH SEASON CONFIRMED YAAAAAAAAAAAY

Second thing: I had an idea for a manga too. It's about a boy who becomes a cyborg and he tries to protect his town. But he fails. And when he fails, he has to try to save his friends. I'm still working on a good plot.

Another idea I have is personifications of time. The main character will be the present and he tries to prevent his brother, the future, to take his spot. I'm still tossing around the plot.

A third idea is the a boy will save another boy from drowing. It turns out that to boy who almost drown is a magical catboy would claims to be the other boy's servent and won't leave him alone. It's a parody of the insane yaoi fandom.

What do you guys think of my ideas?

The first one is too unfinished for me to comment but I think it's a good idea so far.  I think personifications of time is way too complicated, because technically when I'm typing this it's the present but oh look- now it's the past.  What I'm going to type next is the future.  You're reply to this will be the future, but when your typing it it will be the present, and when I'm reading it, typing the reply will be in the past.  See? Technically time doesn't exist, so... "The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once." - Albert Einstein.  As for the yaoi parody, it might be hard to get across that your making a parody/making fun of the insane amount of insane fans.  (I'm friends with one of them, they are quite insane.)  If you can manage to get the point across that your making fun of how overrated it's becoming without making fun of homosexuals, make it actually funny without repeating jokes and annoying the reader, and keep it from accidentally becoming a real yaoi manga and such, I believe that it could be really good.

Thanks~ I was thinking about scrapping the time thing anyways.

ToxicQuillz wrote:

HoneyHorse11 wrote:

ToxicQuillz wrote:

What do you guys think of my ideas?

The first one is too unfinished for me to comment but I think it's a good idea so far.  I think personifications of time is way too complicated, because technically when I'm typing this it's the present but oh look- now it's the past.  What I'm going to type next is the future.  You're reply to this will be the future, but when your typing it it will be the present, and when I'm reading it, typing the reply will be in the past.  See? Technically time doesn't exist, so... "The only reason for time is so that everything doesn't happen at once." - Albert Einstein.  As for the yaoi parody, it might be hard to get across that your making a parody/making fun of the insane amount of insane fans.  (I'm friends with one of them, they are quite insane.)  If you can manage to get the point across that your making fun of how overrated it's becoming without making fun of homosexuals, make it actually funny without repeating jokes and annoying the reader, and keep it from accidentally becoming a real yaoi manga and such, I believe that it could be really good.

Thanks~ I was thinking about scrapping the time thing anyways.

You're welcome :3

I'm a pretty big Detective Conan fan.

What's a good anime for kids? Is Sgt Frog ok?

Last edited by Luigitailsdoll45 (2012-08-25 15:18:27)

Animeboy975 wrote:

Luigitailsdoll45 wrote:

What's a good anime for kids? Is Sgt Frog ok?

How old are you?

Let's start at that question.

9

henley wrote:

Luigitailsdoll45 wrote:

Animeboy975 wrote:

How old are you?

Let's start at that question.

9

I've never watched it, but from what I can tell, it seems okay. There might be some science-y jokes you don't get, but I'm sure you'll enjoy it.

HoneyHorse11 wrote:

Luigitailsdoll45 wrote:

Animeboy975 wrote:

How old are you?

Let's start at that question.

9

My sister is around that age, so if your a girl I recommend 'Sailor Moon'.  'Yotsuba&!' seems like a good manga for all ages and genders, I think it has an anime adaption.  'Folktales From Japan' is probably a good one from what I've seen.  I've read 'Animal Academy', but only the first volume which is great for all ages from what I remember. I'll let you know if I can think of any more.   

Yotsuba cusses quite a bit.