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*Sighs*posts in topics in which humhum is very active in much too often and hopes it won't effect the little sanity he has left *sighs*

Basically, my trilogy is set in the future when the whole universe is enslaved by a mysterious force called the Gavlach (Gav-lah-kch). 50 years or so ago, the whole universe was at peace because of the humans (Hyoo- mAns). Now the humans are almost extinct, but there is proof that they have survived the slavers and they are hanging on. 512 characters- new post.

Vagrayen is the hero, Gethsafie is the heroine, they have both been summoned my the mysterious "intelligence division" to partake a highly important mission, whatever that may be. Both are casttravien heptoids. Cattravien heptoids have:
7 legs
A shell
2-3 brains
7 eyes
1 eye socket
2 arm/wing hybrid thingys
They are crustaceous
Gethsafie is black, Vagrayen is blue. Please don't use my ideas, that's just the synospis, i haven't told you a lot in case someone browsing this forum decides to copy.

Oh yeah! It was on the second page of my profile and the Collaborations section, so... yeah.

Great story idea!! It's a trilogy, right? Which book are you on?

In, of course. 

No, when I first read it, I thought, but I couldn't think of any.

He just posted the synopsis of it.

I have a story, or intro/ epilogue anyway

                                               The Tme Keepers

People say things such as " I can remember it like yesterday! and" Where did the day go?", they are far more insightful than they believe. " Where did the day go?" It went here...

Rows and rows, racks upon racks of bottles. Some are tall and slim, others short and wider then they are high.  They are made of plastic, glass, wood, metal, leather, anything! And inside, well... If i said it contained joy and sadness ,summers and rains, the scent of a rose, the taste of burnt toast, shades upon shades of blue and red and yellow, smiles, tears, - I wouldn't even be close.

This is where the memories go, this is where time goes, this is where the day you left the oven on and completely burnt the bread goes. This is where history goes.
And who observes it, who bottles and stoppers it, who keeps it? We do. Who are we? We are the Time keepers...


I probably won't post any more though cause i'm planning on developing it and i'm scared of plagerism and what-not. But yeah, its a work in progress.

Last edited by Whisperfur (2012-08-16 13:43:43)

Why would you like to join Bookworm Studios?: Bookworm Studios seemed like a nice place to write stories and edit others' stories. 
What role(s) would you like to do (Write, Review, Edit, Illustrate)?: Write, Edit.
If you write, give me a good writing sentence. "Sometimes when I'm a bit bored, I'll peruse the Scratch forums to find random threads to read. Occassionally I will find something that really piques my interest, and I try to get a bit more involved." 
If you edit, give me a sentence and make it better. "If you want to be an editor, please write a sentence and its improved version below." :3
What is your favorite book?: Ender's Game, by Orson Scott Card
Will you contribute to this collaboration, and stay active, and are you aware that you will be kicked out if you don't?: Yup. ^^

As a side note, it's important to note that I am currently without access to a computer and thus cannot use a Scratch project.

Random story beginning:
People used to say that the world was green, blue, gold, white and grey. Now it's anything you want it to be. Just think- the world changes around you. No need to lift a finger, everything's what you want in a matter of seconds, or minutes, or some made up unit that you have decided that the rest of the world uses. So it is with the game. Everyone thinks they rule the 'world' as it were. They virtual reality game of life. New post!

humhumgames wrote:

You don't need to view projects. Here we just share ideas, write on the forums, and share in the library. :) No need for projects at all, unless you want to.

Great. ^^
Anything I should be editting or should I try to post a story?

Maybe you can edit Whisperfur's story (so I could put the intro in the library) or write a small excerpt of your own.

OverPowered wrote:

Whispurfur wrote:

The Ghostly Child

[poem]

Yup. ^^
Since it's a poem, I didn't want to edit any of the structure.
It's really good. ^^
Just work on capitalizing the I's.    :] 

@HumHum, is this what I was supposed to edit?

We already edited that.