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calebxy · 2012-08-11 10:55:04

Can you please review this: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/calebxy/2692066

Willpower · 2012-08-13 13:09:15

MeowScratchCat with I
Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 6/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 6/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 8/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 6/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 8/10

TOTAL: 67/100

OK OS!!

Im not a great fan of OS's but this was alright, I particularly liked the idea of other people adding their own apps and the login section. It got a 6 for glitches because once you went on the calculator you could not get out of it. It got a 0 for sound because as far as i could tell there was not any. I may have missed something on those two things above-just tell me if i have. Well Done smile

Borrego6165 · 2012-08-13 13:12:06

Willpower wrote:
Borrego6165 with Rayman 4- New Score System
Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 10/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

TOTAL: 92/100

AlMOST PERFECT!! (Again)

It is as good as last time- I would give you 11/10 on instructions if I could, the walkthrough is a brilliant idea. I remembered what the controls were this time, the only problem I had was working out whether a plant on Level 1 was an enemy or not! I have already loved it and favourited it fom last time Well Done

you confused a plant with an enemy? oh my!

Willpower · 2012-08-13 13:15:40

Scratcher5000 with Pilot Ace 3D

Scripts (Programming) 9/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 7/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 9/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

TOTAL: 87/100

GREAT GAME!!

What a game and it was all going so well and it looked likecthis game might rate in the 90's until i could not pass level 2 because of a glitch. You keep on moving but your not going anywhere if you know what I mean. On the bits that I could play I loved it.Well Done smile

Willpower · 2012-08-13 13:16:48

Borrego6165 wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Borrego6165 with Rayman 4- New Score System
Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 10/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

TOTAL: 92/100

AlMOST PERFECT!! (Again)

It is as good as last time- I would give you 11/10 on instructions if I could, the walkthrough is a brilliant idea. I remembered what the controls were this time, the only problem I had was working out whether a plant on Level 1 was an enemy or not! I have already loved it and favourited it fom last time Well Done
you confused a plant with an enemy? oh my!

I play too much Super Mario lol

Willpower · 2012-08-13 13:24:20

The Briculator with Yahtzee
Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 8/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 88/100

GREAT GAME!!

So close to the 90's it's painful! I love Yahtzee and I play it on the ds. This game was almost as good as the ds game. As you can see by the scoring I found no real problems overall. My score was 169 and better yet I got a Yahtzee! Well Done smile

UltraAdam · 2012-08-13 13:43:45

Can you re-view AROBALL 4? Link in sig!

Borrego6165 · 2012-08-13 14:17:02

Willpower wrote:
Borrego6165 wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Borrego6165 with Rayman 4- New Score System
Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 8/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 10/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 9/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 9/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 10/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 9/10

TOTAL: 92/100

AlMOST PERFECT!! (Again)

It is as good as last time- I would give you 11/10 on instructions if I could, the walkthrough is a brilliant idea. I remembered what the controls were this time, the only problem I had was working out whether a plant on Level 1 was an enemy or not! I have already loved it and favourited it fom last time Well Done
you confused a plant with an enemy? oh my!
I play too much Super Mario

did I lose any points for that and which category?

beyblade4 · 2012-08-13 14:23:37

Can you review the game in mysig?

thebriculator · 2012-08-13 16:39:03

Thanks for reviewing! great score!

bananaman114 · 2012-08-13 18:51:01

I was wondering if you can review my newest project? I worked really hard on it.
Here it is!

beyblade4 · 2012-08-13 18:52:21

Can you review the game in my sig?

Willpower · 2012-08-14 05:10:26

Borrego6165 wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Borrego6165 wrote:

you confused a plant with an enemy? oh my!
I play too much Super Mario
did I lose any points for that and which category?

I don't think you lost any points for that because it is probably just me who would make that mistake

Willpower · 2012-08-14 05:17:28

Benjamin2 and Angelica101, I had a quick look at your projects yesterday and

Benjamin 2- I pushed play on the menu screen with no problem and then on the next screen "play" was hidden by the advert at the bottom. So I could not review it

Angelica101- Erm...nice project but I don't see how I am supposed to review it

7 Reviews Left- I will see if I can get on the computer today

Last edited by Willpower (2012-08-14 05:20:51)

ExtremelyGamer · 2012-08-14 12:35:27

Willpower wrote:
Benjamin2 and Angelica101, I had a quick look at your projects yesterday and

Benjamin 2- I pushed play on the menu screen with no problem and then on the next screen "play" was hidden by the advert at the bottom. So I could not review it

Angelica101- Erm...nice project but I don't see how I am supposed to review it

7 Reviews Left- I will see if I can get on the computer today

benjamin's game doesn't really work online.

Borrego6165 · 2012-08-14 12:38:04

Can somebody review my game please?

Generation- 4000

Thank-you!

Last edited by Borrego6165 (2012-08-14 12:38:21)

Willpower · 2012-08-14 16:21:50

ExtremelyGamer wrote:
Willpower wrote:
Benjamin2 and Angelica101, I had a quick look at your projects yesterday and

Benjamin 2- I pushed play on the menu screen with no problem and then on the next screen "play" was hidden by the advert at the bottom. So I could not review it

Angelica101- Erm...nice project but I don't see how I am supposed to review it

7 Reviews Left- I will see if I can get on the computer today
benjamin's game doesn't really work online.

I tried it offline as well and it slowed down my computer masses

WarioX · 2012-08-14 16:41:04

Please review this:
Blob Nation: Welcome To The World (Part 1)

Last edited by WarioX (2012-08-15 16:56:51)

Zparx · 2012-08-14 16:50:38

I love when people decide to review games. I just hope you commit to it, as it can be lots of work. Would you mind reviewing my project? It's a tower defense game in which you have to be very strategic with what you buy and where you place your defenses. It's received a lot of good feedback as depicted from my signature. Anyway, here is the link!

http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Zparx/2635873

mwiedmann · 2012-08-14 21:50:28

Great reviews! Thanks for doing this.

If you have a chance, take a look at my game...

Adventure for the Ring

It's a bit of a throwback to the old Atari 2600 game "Adventure" but I've got my own spin on it. It doesn't run well in the Java player but does quite well with the Flash player. Download is still best of course.

Curious to get your feedback.

Thanks!

Willpower · 2012-08-15 03:12:04

Wolfdude999 with Super Cube

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 10/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 9/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 8/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 93/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

I am allergic to giving 10s and I rarely give more than 2 or 3 but I had to make an exeption. It is an amazing game, the game is easy to understand and it is challenging. But whats more- It only has 1 sprite and 1 script. How could I not give 10s to a game lime this which is 1s1s. My New Favourite Game (Sorry Borrego!) Well Done smile

Ps. I did this review yesterday and i can't remember if it had sound or not- I will give you the benefit of the doubt!

Last edited by Willpower (2012-08-15 03:16:37)

Willpower · 2012-08-15 03:33:25

Agent Roop with Legacy

Scripts (Programming) 10/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 10/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 7/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 9/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 9/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 8/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 92/100

ALMOST PERFECT GAME!!

What is this?! Two Almost Perfect Games in a row *swoon*

This is defintely the most colourful games ive played. It also is one of the best because of the fact it has no bugs or glitches and works smoothly. I habe tried to put a shop in some of my games before and the closest i managed to get is a panel, your is amazing (I bought the smiley skin!) Well Done smile

Ps. I did this review yesterday and i can't remember if it had sound or not- I will give you the benefit of the doubt!

Willpower · 2012-08-15 03:44:37

Jontmy00 with Cloudy Days (BETA)

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 77/100

GREAT BETA!!

I love reviewing Beta's, it gives you an excuse to just search anywhere for the tiniest glitch, and i found one. At the start of level 2 you immediately lose a life and it does not seem to happen on any other level. I think this is because you have it if you touch edge you lose a life and you have just placed it wrong on that level

Other than that it is an amazing Beta and I think it has the highest score ever for a Beta. I really like the cloud ideas. Well Done smile

Willpower · 2012-08-15 03:56:58

I am now on holiday- see first post

jontmy00 · 2012-08-15 04:44:29

Willpower wrote:
Jontmy00 with Cloudy Days (BETA)

Scripts (Programming) 8/10
Bugs & Glitches (Errors With Game?) 8/10
Sounds (Sound Effects, Music) 0/10
Graphics (Sprite Design, Stage) 8/10
Entertaining (Fun, Addictive) 7/10
Original (Remix?) 10/10
Effort (Lots, Little) 10/10
Surprises (Keep You Playing, New/ Plot Twists) 7/10
Complexity (Easy, Hard) 9/10
Controls (Effective, Easy, Instructions) 10/10

TOTAL: 77/100

GREAT BETA!!

I love reviewing Beta's, it gives you an excuse to just search anywhere for the tiniest glitch, and i found one. At the start of level 2 you immediately lose a life and it does not seem to happen on any other level. I think this is because you have it if you touch edge you lose a life and you have just placed it wrong on that level

Other than that it is an amazing Beta and I think it has the highest score ever for a Beta. I really like the cloud ideas. Well Done

Thank you! I'm improving it. smile

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