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#1 2012-08-05 17:31:35
- berberberber
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Berberberber's Reviews
The reviews won't be done for a while.
Eh, what the heck. It's never too late!
I review mostly games.
Grading
Programming:
10- Wow! It absolutely blew me away!
9-8- Great! You could use the clean up funtion a bit, though.
7-6- Good, but it's a little overcomplicated.
5 - Okay, but kind of messy.
4-3- Come on! You can do better!
2-1- Did you even try?
0- No scripts.
Notes:
Graphics:
10- Wow! It absolutely blew me away!
9-8- Great! There were some errors, though.
7-6- Good, but simple.
5 - Okay, but kind of messy.
4-3- Come on! You can do better!
2-1- Did you even try?
0- It hurts to look.
Notes:
Sound:
10- Wow! It goes with the style perfectly!
9-8- Great! It fit nicely.
7-6- Good, but at times, it seemed out of place.
5 - Okay, but kind of unfitting.
4-3- It didn't go with the style at all!
2-1- They canceled each other out.
0- No sounds.
Notes:
Smoothness:
10- No glitches at all!
9-8- Great! Barely any bugs!
7-6- Good, but some bugs.
5 - There was a lot of errors.
4-3- Come on! You can do better!
2-1- There was a fatal error in your scripting.
0- It didn't work.
Notes:
Idea:
10- Comepletely Original!
9-8- I might have seen it before somewhere...
7-6- I saw a few things like this before.
5 - It's pretty common.
4-3- Very similar to another project, but not a remix.
2-1- You didn't change many things in your remix.
0- A direct copy.
Notes:
Total:
Other:
Highest rating yet:
TheCreator by Borrego6165, with 43/50!
Last edited by berberberber (2012-08-14 13:10:26)
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#3 2012-08-06 05:36:19
- Borrego6165
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Re: Berberberber's Reviews
This please! Although it's 95% done, you can still use things like the save mode and such. (Ignore the project notes). The game itself is 100% completed, but it's the extra features which need adding that's all to make it proper-finished if you get what I mean. All I suggest is that you do not add any buildings from the tourism section or the Mall.
Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!
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#4 2012-08-06 12:25:01
- berberberber
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Re: Berberberber's Reviews
TheCreator by Borrego6165
Programming:
8
Notes:
It seems this is a very big game, and I gave back some points for that. However, I didn't really see why you needed so many sprites.
Graphics:
7
Notes:
I think the graphics can use a little touching up, but they go with the style well.
Sound:
10
Notes:
The music was beautiful! It emphasized the game wonderfully! I could listen to it all day!
Smoothness:
9
Notes:
The gameplay is very fun and addicting!
Idea:
9
Notes:
Total:
43/50! Great job!
Other:
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#5 2012-08-06 12:45:58
- ErnieParke
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Re: Berberberber's Reviews
I already got a review of the game, but I would like a second so that I can compare the two views. Anyway, can you review my project called Chalkboard Pac-Man? I would really like it.
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#6 2012-08-06 13:28:07
- Borrego6165
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Re: Berberberber's Reviews
berberberber wrote:
TheCreator by Borrego6165
Programming:
8
Notes:
It seems this is a very big game, and I gave back some points for that. However, I didn't really see why you needed so many sprites.
Graphics:
7
Notes:
I think the graphics can use a little touching up, but they go with the style well.
Sound:
10
Notes:
The music was beautiful! It emphasized the game wonderfully! I could listen to it all day!
Smoothness:
9
Notes:
The gameplay is very fun and addicting!
Idea:
9
Notes:
Total:
43/50! Great job!
Other:
thanks! except i don't know how the number of sprites can bring the score down? the reason for so many is for more speed purposes. on the map screen for example, it needs to stamp 11025 times. if 1 sprite did this, it would take forever so I used 15 separate sprites instead, and it still takes about 30+ seconds. also, if you were to look at the scripts (don't worry i'm not expecting you to, i'm sure you are busy) you would find that they are very compressed considering the number of jobs everything does.
in terms of the review itself, i think you need to make the numbers visible to whoever reads it (and here's a hint: don't bother memorising the number of the colour, just insert the name of it! there's a site with all the names on it for BBCode) and also perhaps less blank lines between each one to make it look neater. great start though!
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#8 2012-08-11 19:33:45
- ErnieParke
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Re: Berberberber's Reviews
Could you look at my new project?
The Brick Destroyer II
Thanks!
Last edited by ErnieParke (2012-08-11 19:40:55)
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#9 2012-08-11 19:49:24
Re: Berberberber's Reviews
Are you willing to review animations? There isn't much programming in it, but... what the heck, why not? XP
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#10 2012-08-14 13:03:15
- berberberber
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Re: Berberberber's Reviews
Chalkboard Pac-Man by ErnieParke
Grading
Programming:
9
Notes:
It didn't look like you used the actual tracking style of the ghosts, but the programming is still very advanced.
Graphics:
7
Notes:
It didn't really look like a chalkboard, if you know what I mean.
Sound:
10
Notes:
Great sounds!
Smoothness:
9
Notes:
Idea:
5
Notes:
Total: 40! Great joob!
Other: There are a lot of pacman projects, so you didn't get many points in the originally department.
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#11 2012-08-14 13:23:01
- ErnieParke
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Re: Berberberber's Reviews
berberberber wrote:
Chalkboard Pac-Man by ErnieParke
Grading
Programming:
9
Notes:
It didn't look like you used the actual tracking style of the ghosts, but the programming is still very advanced.
Graphics:
7
Notes:
It didn't really look like a chalkboard, if you know what I mean.
Sound:
10
Notes:
Great sounds!
Smoothness:
9
Notes:
Idea:
5
Notes:
Total: 40! Great joob!
Other: There are a lot of pacman projects, so you didn't get many points in the originally department.
I'm not that good at creating AI's.
Anyway, thanks for the review!
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#14 2012-09-05 15:09:37
- Borrego6165
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Re: Berberberber's Reviews
Generation:4001 Build a beautiful city, with over 50 objects and over 10000 tiles per city! This simulates traffic, pollution, tourism, crime and more!
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#15 2012-09-05 15:12:10
- northmeister
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Re: Berberberber's Reviews
I don't think he's looking at his anymore, the last time he posted something was half a month ago.
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#16 2012-09-06 11:18:13
Re: Berberberber's Reviews
Can you review this please? http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/epninja/2756104 Thanks if you do.
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