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samid11 wrote:

Animeboy975 wrote:

Can somebody write a Annoying Orange pasta? That thing is CREEPY.

There is one called "Wrath Of The Grape". Dumbest crud I ever read.

that was user-made, somebody can get real offended by your remark :L

samid11 wrote:

777w wrote:

samid11 wrote:

There is one called "Wrath Of The Grape". [I changed this].

that was user-made, somebody can get real offended by your remark :L

It was? I remember seeing it on another website.

really? i thought it was by animeboy or somebody

nama wrote:

777w wrote:

samid11 wrote:

It was? I remember seeing it on another website.

really? i thought it was by animeboy or somebody

Here.

ok thanks
not animeboy but still

^I'm going to write part 2 later,^ ^it's not to the creepy part yet.^

I wrote this one a while ago. I thought it was so creepy, IT GAVE ME NIGHTMARES 

Play With Me by Animeboy975

When i was growing up as a young man, One of the toys i had was a bear named Teddy Ruxpin. Some people might know what i'm talking about.

It was my 4th birthday. I was excited. My parents gave me a box. I opened it to find a Teddy Ruxpin. I didn't know it was love from that sight.

We did everything together for a while. Watched movies. Hanged out. After about 2 years with the bear, it got strange. In 1st grade i stopped playing with him and my mom put it in storage.

I didn't know it was wrong from then on.

I was in 7th grade when i saw him next. I had just finished Health class, to go to Math. I opened my locker and there it was.

Teddy Ruxpin.

I was beyond freaked out. He said in a electronic voice, and red eyes "PLAY WITH ME"

I grabbed my math book and threw the blush to the ground. Everything would change.

Days upon Days, he stalked me in a different way every single time. The chaos went on for 3 weeks.

I was done with it, so i grabbed my friend Miles and set the evil thing on fire. Things didn't get better even though it was funny watching it burn.

Things got worse.

A lot worse.

He didn't bug me through high school or collage. I was an adult, and got married and had a boy named Daniel. We also moved across the country.

Daniel is currently 5. He just entered kindergarden, and he's been doing good.

I was in public by myself. I heard the same "PLAY WITH ME" to see Teddy on my BACK.

This has got to end. But, wait a minute, how does he

1] Burn And not dissapear from the world.

2] Get across the united states

Than he said "Nolan, PLAY WITH ME."

I jumped in my car, and ran for my life. I came home.

My wife asked me about it and why i'm panting. I explained everything, and Teddy jumped on my head, and knocked my face on the concrete.

The next day, every where i looked, he was there.

This went on for a year.

I went to the PTA thrift shop and put him up. He was angry and he bit my arm.

It felt like fangs. I did give him away, and live a happy life.

A kid bought him, and he had a best friend.

But every Saturday night, i can still hear that faint sound "Play with me......"

What did you think, Sami?

777w wrote:

soniku3 wrote:

CakePopAnimation wrote:

It could've been good, but the plot was very confusing and there were a lot of grammar issues. Sorry 

I know. I'm Dutch.

being dutch doesnt automatically make you a bad storywriter 

English is not his first language.

BirdByte wrote:

It's not mine either. My first language is a variation of Dutch.

But still, he may have learned English only a few months ago -- English takes time to master. 

Yeah, they say English is one of the hardest languages to learn.

Back on topic, I am working on a pasta about pants still. o_0

Last edited by hungergamesfanatic (2012-08-09 13:07:53)

BirdByte wrote:

hungergamesfanatic wrote:

777w wrote:

being dutch doesnt automatically make you a bad storywriter 

English is not his first language.

It's not mine either. My first language is a variation of Dutch.

But still, he may have learned English only a few months ago -- English takes time to master. 

like i said earlier, the story still wouldnt of been very good if his first language was english. itd be grammatically correct, sure, but just that alone doesnt make the story what it is

Last edited by 777w (2012-08-09 13:17:37)

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OK.

I'm sorry my SC pasta was kinda bloody. Rest of mine aren't.

SC? Witch one was that?

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SiLeNtScRaTcH wrote:

The Story of Vincent Paulson, Part 1 (Earlier Post)

PART 2

I grabbed my Father's old Battle Knife, and realized I hadn't seen or heard anything from my parents this whole time. I pondered that thought for a while, and then the same creature appered before me. It said "Your parents were captured last night by them." "Who or what are the things that are invading my village?" I asked.
"Those diabolical creatures are Soul Eaters. They are the most adaptable creatures in the universe, the reason being that they are nothing more than hundreds or thousands of tormented souls, all absorbed by one more powerful soul, and supercharged with negative energy. The once bright souls become tainted, and turn dark. They are invading your village in search of one thing, and that thing is you. Every billion years, a creature is born unto the universe that is of a particular sort. That particular sort includes those who possess the strength, wits, intelligence, and courage to become a God. You are of that sort, you are capable of becoming a God! The Soul Eaters want you because they could use your soul to resurrect their God, Cypherisuss, God of War and Destruction. Cypherisuss' soul was extracted and his body sealed away several trillion years ago, but the Soul Eaters found it, and have brought it here to resurrect with your soul. You cannot let them do that! You would wind up responsible for ending the entire world, and perhaps the whole universe, if no one could stop you. Good luck, and stay strong!"

I slowly walked out of my house, and proceeded to a nearby field, all the while knowing that the fate of the universe rested on me. I came to the top of a hill and looked down into the village. I then saw the Soul Eaters for the first time, and with them were the villagers. I watched as one by one, the souls were sucked from the faces of the villagers, and their bodies fell to the ground in a heap. I looked out in the direction I was travelling, and I saw them. A swarm of Soul Eaters, patroling the area. They had the whole village held down, and were searching for any remaining villagers. I slid silently down the hill, towards the village. I looked around, and proceeded with caution, as there were no Soul Eaters in sight. I turned left, and headed towards the outskirts of the village. "Almost there..." I thought to myself as I tiptoed through an alley. Suddenly, I heard a horrific, ear splitting shreak, and felt the chill of a Soul Eater gripping my shoulder. I broke free, and ran for my life, with the Soul Eater shreaking and pursuing me. I ran out into the plains, and looked back. Millions of Soul Eaters were now chasing me, coming from behind and on the left and right sides. I continued to run, for five long minutes I sprinted until I reached the banks of a lake. There, at the bottom of the lake, I could see a form like none other. The Soul Eaters caught up with me, and cornered me. I was suddenly tackled by them all, and we plunged into the lake. The Soul Eaters quickly adapted to the lake, by growing tail fins to help propel them through the water. I could feel the life being sucked out of me, and I knew all hope was lost. My soul was extracted, and my body was left to float lifelessly to the surface. I was then injected into the huge dark form, and I felt life again. This time, with more power and anger than I had ever felt. I took form as a giant sea monster, with many rows of sharp, jagged teeth, hundreds of tentacles, and control over water itself. I blasted the village to bits with my powers, and changed form to a fast flying dragon of the sky. I shot off, leaving chaos and destruction in my wake. I went on a terrible rampage all throughout the universe, and nearly destroyed it all, when, the tall alien creature that tried to help me appeared. He said "I'm sorry, Vincent Paulson, I wasn't able to save you from this fate."
I started feeling an immense pain, and felt my soul getting destroyed inside of me, and my body was sealed away. But the seal weakens today, and I swear my revenge! I crave destruction! I will get it soon enough!

The End, for now...

I tried to make my stories as less-gory as possible.