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how about hungergames does abit of vocalizes during the instromental?

thehungergamesxxx wrote:

That would be good, nearly finished song..will post soon..

great! 

They drag you down
They mess with your heart
They think you dont matter
They whisper and talk, wrecking your selfconfidence
But who are they?
Who are they to question, your rank, your popularity, your meaning?
Who are they to decide?

CHORUS
Find your goal, your passion your dream
Just look inside of you
Who cares what they say?
You'll be the one laughing if you achieve and follow your path
Find your goal, your passion your dream
And maybe, maybe 1 day
You'll Suceed

I picked you up
I picked up the pieces
I think you matter
I know you care
I built up your self confidence
But who am i?
Who am i to try to get you there single-handedly
Thats up to you....

CHORUS

No matter what they say
No matter what they do
They cant deny whats inside of you
No matter what they say
No matter what they do
They cant stop you from dreaming
And maybe, maybe 1 day
You'll suceed



That it its ok if you dont like it...only took me 5-10 minutes to write it  , 

By the way to no matter bit isnt to chorus its after i just didnt want to write the chorus out again

K can i just ask what country you from because we might be different?? Random i know! 

My song does sound rather Plain White T's-ish now that you bring it up, and I guess it could work in a "Hey There Delilah" manner. Due to my large music platter, however, I'm always open to experimenting with any genre under the sun. I just love experimenting and doing what nobody else would do.

So I'll try to create my melody for the song and CatPerson yours; we'll decide which one is best, and then we'll see what genre could fit in that melody. 

Also, hungergames, that's a pretty cool song, I must admit. It could be sung by either me or you, since, unlike my song, it doesn't seem to be directed to a specific gender. You would probably want to sing it, though, since you wrote it. I can try coming up with a melody for that today, too. 

CatPerson wrote:

thehungergamesxxx wrote:

K can i just ask what country you from because we might be different?? Random i know! 

US

Oh im from Great Britain...
And thanks All4one i can see a way where we can both sing it and i think ive got the melody but if yours is better then we can choose yours !! And its weired because if your both in U.S you must be behind cos is quarter to eleven at night here !!

XP I sound better in real life, try not to mind the loud noise. my mic really sucks... X(

thehungergamesxxx wrote:

In the eveninng???

yep.

Im on my phone currently and cant access it so ill look tomoz bet ur good ...but now i have to wait 

I've listened to your take on "In My Dreams", CatPerson, and I must say it sounds pretty close to what I envisioned. I'll record my take on the melody in the future, either on the piano or with my vocals. 

its quite short.... but i like the voice! unfortunately, i could not hear the lyrics. Try every mic you have, to find the most effective one!

I have a suggestion:
For every song we make, we just record the vocals. Afterwards, we will be innovative and add  our instrument parts to fit the 'feeling' of the song. That way, the song might be completed faster and the quality of the mixing is better, cos' thr are more people. Two heads are better than one, multiple heads are even better!

chongyian wrote:

its quite short.... but i like the voice! unfortunately, i could not hear the lyrics. Try every mic you have, to find the most effective one!

I have a suggestion:
For every song we make, we just record the vocals. Afterwards, we will be innovative and add  our instrument parts to fit the 'feeling' of the song. That way, the song might be completed faster and the quality of the mixing is better, cos' thr are more people. Two heads are better than one, multiple heads are even better!

I think thats a good idea because i think its better when the music is fit around the lyrics!
I couldnt really hear the lyrics either...but could hear tune....sort of lol