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Sunshine Kid

Great!

soniku3 wrote:

NeilWest wrote:

Odd, Sunshine Kid gets 2 replies.

The Mario (failure) pasta gets way more.

DA HECK?

''DA HECK?'' thank you for being so positive!

Sorry, I didn't realize that Dutch was your first language, not English.

zbugni wrote:

777w wrote:

zbugni wrote:

Cause english wasn't the first language of that person, is what I gather.

the story wouldnt have been particularly good either way, its mario tuning into a monster and insulting other video game characters before stealing their limbs :L

I know, why not make an original monster?
Pastas about video games (especially ds games) tend to make you sound noobly :Y

the word "noobly" makes you sound silly :B

zbugni wrote:

777w wrote:

zbugni wrote:

I know, why not make an original monster?
Pastas about video games (especially ds games) tend to make you sound noobly :Y

the word "noobly" makes you sound silly :B

I know 
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Me and my cousin cyle once went on a trip to the forest with my parents. It was supposed to be fun. We had rented out A small cabin in the middle of the woods. Little did we know that our experience in this woods would be the scariest experience of our lives. A thing you should know about my brother, he losses everything. We had to wait for him for 30 minuets before we could leave for the woods because we had to wait for him to find his shoes. You'll know what I mean when I start telling the story.

    "There it is!" my mother said. We had gust pulled up to a large looking, log cabin. I groaned. I would have Ben twice as happy to gust, stay at home! Everyone piled out of the car, and went in. I asked my mom why she wanted to come hear anyway. But she gust said that we needed a good vacation, and some fresh air.But I knew the truth. My dad needed to do some stupid research on birds for his job, and my cousin lived in they area. They probably gust didn't want to pay for a baby sitter.

     After we got out of the car, my dad told me and my cousin to help take the food and water into the house. After we got in, my mom asked my cousin where the half of ou're food was that he had carried in (we were only staying for one weekend). He gust shrugged, and grinned. After a harsh yelling at by my mom, she told me and my cousin to go up to ou're room. I was half way up the stair case when i realized what she had gust said. "You mean I'm not getting my own room?!?" I said. "Well, the house is pretty small, and it cost quite a lot of money...." she said.

     I let out an exasperated sign and went up to 'you're' room. Inside, there was a table, a drawer, a mirror on the drawer, and a bunk bed. From my first and ONLY visit to creepy pasta wiki, I knew that you always check under the bed. The experience still haunts me today (I mean the trip to the wiki, not looking under the bed, gust for clarification). So, I looked under the bed. That's when the first strange thing happens. There was a peace of paper, and that was it. So, I grabbed it. It was A civil complaint sheet, and it read "I saw him in the woods today, wonder what he wants." and then in more bold and larger print all over the page, there was stuff like "WHAT DOES HE WANT?", "HELP HELP HELP", "DON'T GO OUTSIDE", "LEAVE ME ALONE", etc. At the top in ever larger print was the same words written over and over, SLENDER MAN SLENDER MAN SLENDER MAN SLENDER MAN SLENDERM and then there was blood splashed all over the top of the page. I looked it over a couple times, and then someone snatched it out of my hands. It was my stupid cousin. He looked it over, and then looked at me with a wild grin, and said OOH SCARY the laughing, he ran out of the room. I chased after him, and yelled for him to give it back, but he wouldn't listen. After about half an hour he got bored and told me that I had won. But when I asked him if he would give it back, he said he didn't know where it was.

     The next day, my mom and dad made us come on a walk. I was on the lookout for this "Slender man" guy, and was pretty reluctant to leave the house, but sense I didn't have the picture to show them, she made us go anyway, thinking I was pranking them or some shiz. Nothing too eventful happened, except when we got back, my cousin had lost his jacket.

     That evening, my parents went to to get some food from the supermarket, and said that they were going to be gone for an hour or two. I told them to hurry back. Four hours later, they were not back, and I was panicking. "Dude, there probably gust late or something." Said cyle, obviously not concerned. "No, I swear, he's out there, or ITS out there, I know it! It's evil, it's hungry..." I paused, and then thought of the jacket that cyle lost. I groaned. "And now he knows our sent!" "Whatever, dude, you're gust overeat-" and then he screamed. I looked over, and there was A tall man, easily 10 feet. He was waring a suit, and had several black tentacles coming out of his back. But the most stunning feature was that he had no face. It was completely blank, white, like the rest of his body except for his black suit and dress pants. I ran half-way up the stairs when I noticed my cousin was not running. He was transfixed, in shock, looking strait at the thing (slender man for sure, i thought). I watched, helplessly, as the thing began to entangle my cousin with one arm, witch was stretching, like a vine. It slowly began to open it's hidden mouth, parting the skin on it's face, reveling A hole in it's face big enough to fit in a tree. It lowered it in, and pulled out something. It dropped my cousin, and then the thing, witch i relies is a blue jacket, on the ground. "You forgot you're jacket, idiot." it said, in a deep broken accent, and waked out of the room.

     My cousin never forgot anything, ever again, they end.

Has anyone besides zbugni read my Ants pasta? If not, it's on the 28th page, near the bottom. Trust me you will be creeped out.

CakePopAnimation wrote:

Just read it...
It's okay, I didn't want to sleep tonight anyway XD
It was disturbing, but in a very good way :3
Great job!

Thank you! I want to write part two either tonight or tomarrow sometime. When I thought of the idea, I knew it was disturbing, but I decided to write it out anyway. I hope it doesn't change the way people think about ants XD

weegeeissparta wrote:

Nope. Towards the ending I was like- "What the heck." For several reasons.

Was it? How? I'm not mad or anything, I just want your opinion. It would help me improve my writing.

weegeeissparta wrote:

hundreds of tiny ants ate through her clothes

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Oh...I didn't mean it like that...Sorry! At the time I was thinking the ants would eat everything, including the victim's cloths. Thank you for your opinion, I will make sure to correct this error in part two.

Wickimen wrote:

First person to come up with something that scares me gets a dollar

death is real
nah thats not scary thats just true

updated the rules a bit

Wickimen wrote:

Ninety-eight cents to the first person to come up with something that scares me!
And the amount is ever decreasing so hurry up

Can it be something I already wrote?