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Doctor Who - Day of the Moon - boss battle by calebxy

Programming/Complexity 10/20
I would say that you have to be at least an average scratcher to make this.

Graphics 11/20
The grphics are simple, and nothing too complex.

Gameplay 8/20
Its so hard and a bit unfair, since your just one person battling 3 Enemies.
Not only that, but you can only fire 1 "bullet" at a time while 3 enemies are shooting at you at the same time.
I swear, my life was drained to 26 after i killed the first Silent.

Sound 10/20
Theres no sound effects    and the music keeps going on even after you lose!
I'm giving this 10/20 JUST because thats one of my favorite songs 

Originality 8/20
Games like this have appeared before, so its not VERY original, but there isn't any
other game like this thats about Doctor Who, so i give this a 8/10

Overall:

47/100 - Good

Its good, but i don't think you should take my review too seriously since i'm still not an official reviewer 

EDIT: Yay! Second Page!!

Last edited by Ludburghmdm (2012-07-17 09:31:57)

Could you please review this? http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/exp2012/2680180
I'm new so I know it's not that good but could you review it anyway? Thanks 

Ludburghmdm wrote:

Doctor Who - Day of the Moon - boss battle by calebxy

Programming/Complexity 10/20
I would say that you have to be at least an average scratcher to make this.

Graphics 11/20
The grphics are simple, and nothing too complex.

Gameplay 8/20
Its so hard and a bit unfair, since your just one person battling 3 Enemies.
Not only that, but you can only fire 1 "bullet" at a time while 3 enemies are shooting at you at the same time.
I swear, my life was drained to 26 after i killed the first Silent.

Sound 10/20
Theres no sound effects    and the music keeps going on even after you lose!
I'm giving this 10/20 JUST because thats one of my favorite songs 

Originality 8/20
Games like this have appeared before, so its not VERY original, but there isn't any
other game like this thats about Doctor Who, so i give this a 8/10

Overall:

47/100 - Good

Its good, but i don't think you should take my review too seriously since i'm still not an official reviewer 

EDIT: Yay! Second Page!!

Thanks for the quick review.    Could you review this as well please: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/calebxy/1084708

Ludburghmdm wrote:

Wow, I'm not sure if I'm even allowed to. I'm still not an official reviewer yet, and for some reason, ftf841 isn't adding me.

I think you are

You don't review animations and OS's, do you?
If yes, please review these projects:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2654080 ArtLet OS
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2654080 Cubeys - Preparation
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2572181 Underestimated Food - The Meeting
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2515380 Cube World Beta
[urlhttp://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2253521][/url] Egg Run 2

If not, please review this projects:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2253521 Egg Run 2
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2515380 Cube World Beta

If I'm not allowed to post this many projects to be reviewed then:
review ArtLet OS and Cubeys - Preparation if animations and OS's are allowed
review Egg Run 2 and Cube World Beta if animations and OS's are not allowed

Last edited by Thescratch3 (2012-07-17 19:35:42)

ftf841 wrote:

Thescratch3 wrote:

You don't review animations and OS's, do you?
If yes, please review these projects:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2654080 ArtLet OS
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2654080 Cubeys - Preparation
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2572181 Underestimated Food - The Meeting
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2515380 Cube World Beta
[urlhttp://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2253521][/url] Egg Run 2

If not, please review this projects:
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2253521 Egg Run 2
http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/Thescratch3/2515380 Cube World Beta

If I'm not allowed to post this many projects to be reviewed then:
review ArtLet OS and Cubeys - Preparation if animations and OS's are allowed
review Egg Run 2 and Cube World Beta if animations and OS's are not allowed

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^ Yeah, What he said 

BTW, I'm using my own format, is it okay?

Name by Username

Programming/Complexity: #/20


Graphics: #/20


Gameplay: #/20


Sound: #/20


Originality: #/20


Overall:

#/100 - Score Rating

Score Ratings:
0-10   - Awfully, Horrifically, Bad
10-20  - Very Poor
20-30  - Below Average
30-40  - Okay / Average
40-50  - Good
50-60  - Very Good
60-70  - Excellent
70-80  - Cool!
80-90  - Awesome!
90-100 - Perfectly Epically Awesome!

So is it okay?

EDIT: OMG THE USERNAME "username" IS REAL!!! xD

Last edited by Ludburghmdm (2012-07-17 20:29:03)

Again, I'm a newbie reviewer, so the results may not be accurate.

portal race (tributo a portal) by katzisc

Programming/Complexity: 13/20
Its nothing too hard to program, but it is hard if your a New Scratcher.

Graphics: 12/20
The graphics are good, pretty basic, and i like how the heart beats, get it?

Gameplay: 13/20
Nothing too hard, nothing too complicated, and the game just goes on, and on, and on, and on...

Sound: 10/20
I'm giving it a 10 because i like the Portal soundtrack    but i would like it better if there were sound FX.

Originality: 8/20
It's a racing game, nothing too original, nothing too special. I could easily make this using C#

Overall:

46/100 - Good

*Opens 4 tabs to review Thescratch3's projects*...*Computer lags*..."C'mon! Stupid computer!"...*Computer lags more*...*CTRL+ALT+DEL*...*Task Manager*...*FlashPlayerPlugin_11_3_3... -NAMECLOCKED- 03 119,942K Adobe Flash Player 11.3 r300*..."OMG!! 199MB!?"...*End Process*...*BSOD*..."FUUUUUUUUUUUuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!"

^ True story, i just restarted my computer. Now i'm going to review them ONE BY ONE > 

@Above 
Anyway,
I already reviewed the first two, now for the second half.

ArtLet by Thescratch3

Programming/Complexity: 12/20
Very hard for a new scratcher, but not too hard for your avaerage scratcher.

Graphics: 9/20
Nice graphics, very basic, but i don't like the windows overlapping the buttons when you drag them.

Gameplay: 3/20
Again, it's not a game, but the games in the "games" section has games so, 3/10, because i don't see how to play any of those games, all i do is just move.

Sound: 12/20
Only a startup sound? Nothing else but music on the music player? Well, The songs in the music player are awesome, but not much sound effects 

Originality: 9/20
It's an OS, the concept isn't original, but the name and other stuff are sort of original, so 9/10

Overall:

45/100 - Good

Underestimated Food - The Meeting by Thescratch3

Programming/Complexity: 9/20
...This is really hrd to program if your a ew scratcher, but nothing too complex.

Graphics: 10/20
Basic Graphics

Gameplay: 0/20
It's not a game!! o.O

Sound: 10/20
Yay, finally! Sound FX!!

Originality: 9/20
It's a movie, of course its original, but its still a movie 

Overall:

30/100 - Okay / Average

Yay I bombed each one! Srry if I caused any of you any trouble    I didn't mean to.

Ftf41, do you have anyway to make the graphics better?

Last edited by Thescratch3 (2012-07-17 23:44:47)

Umm...Who are you? I searched the entire topic and i couldn't find your name anywhere 

Ludburghmdm wrote:

Doctor Who: Victory of the Daleks by calebxy

Programming/Complexity: 8/20
Nothing too hard. Probably a newbie who has learned Scratch for a few weeks can make it.

Graphics: 7/20
The UFO thing looks kinda rushed, The plane looks okay, and space is just...white dots on a black background.

Gameplay: 8/20
Again, it's hard to win, because the Daleks have 100 health, while you only have 13.

Sound: 0/20
Aww, no sounds? Really? The file is just 77.7KB! It wouldn't hurt to at least add a bit of sound FX, right?

Originality: 7/20
Nothing too special, i've seen games like this before.

Overall:

30/100 - Okay / Average

Oh, you're tough.    Well then, how about this one: http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/calebxy/1224903

Ludburghmdm wrote:

OH. MY. FREAKING. GLOB. I am NOT touching ANY game named after SONIC R! EVER!!

What?    Why?