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can you edit your review and put it in order? it'll take like 5 seconds, in fact it was probably longer to put down the error message instead of keeping it in order.

To-Do list updated:

Me:
Bug Game
Bug Craft
Blimp Wars
Estas Muerto (still doesn't work)
Pixel 2
First Person Minecraft
Blue: Pong

ExtremelyGamer: (copied it all from front page, quote this and delete as necessary, including the category titles)
Blue: Pong
Pixel 2
Bug Craft
Spectrum- Wes64
Blob Nation: Part One- WarioX
Crypt- pipercubjl
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Circles Vs Stick- Coolhogs
E1 S1 Trapped in jail- StickFlix
   Stories/Animations
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   Arcade
Geometry Field- Tecklop
Pong vs An Amazing AI.- Skippito
Tag- ZaRiTo
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HumHums!- humhumgames
Recent Art- humhumgames
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   Platformers
Rayman 4- Borrego6165
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The Impossible Quiz!- fulldroid
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Last edited by Borrego6165 (2012-07-11 03:28:13)

Fireworks Game Alpha
by Splodgey
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Borrego6165

Addictiveness: 3/10 It looked so promising, but the game was too confusing to be fun. The game would have been very addicting, but you will not know why it scored so low until you see the next points.

Programming: 5/10 To program this would have been simple, but the game is glitchy. You place a firework, and it never goes off but when you pass it you catch fire and any fireworks are still on the ground. I kept getting game over for passing a set firework.

Graphics: 6/10 Whilst the shop did not look too bad, everything else seemed to be rushed in the paint editor. The moving sun was a nice idea though, except it's movement across the sky seemed a little strange.

Originality: 5/5 At least it was original!

Ease of use: 1/5 I was so confused, and the instructions did not help much. I really don't see the point of your bug (which looks like wings on a grey sheep) running around between places (well, there's only the fireworks shop to go to) when they could have been a nice, neat interface linking to a different menu showing you the different places. I would understand if there were lots of things to do in the day, but all you seem to do is go back and fourth between the shop. Also, if you have more than one of the same firework, only one will seem to be placed and you will have non left. This relates back to the low programming score.

Difficulty: 2/5 The issue is, when you first get on it's too hard to work out. Once it has been de-coded, then it becomes too easy as you simply go between the shop in a repetitive cycle.

Sound: 0/5 There didn't seem to be any.

Overall Experience: 15/50 It was an original game I will admit, and the idea of running a firework show could have worked. By changing it into an RPG with a bug running around between the show and the shop spoilt it. Another issue was with the controls, which I could have included in the Ease of Use category. A player will not want to keep switching between the mouse and the keyboard so often, especially when they do not know what to click or press. There's constant movement between the mouse and the keyboard, and it can be frustrating having to work out where to send your hands.

TOTAL 37/100

ExtremelyGamer

Addictiveness: 8/10 It's not that addictive, but I  definitely want to see what will happen! I was bored waiting for the sunset. Maybe you could add a fast forward button?

Programming: 8/10 The programming is complex, but I found a couple bugs, sometimes the spectator or any other bug son't come on. You can't place more that 2 fireworks ad then you can only place 1 at a time.

Graphics: 9/10 The graphics the fireworks are good, but the graphics of the spectator are a bit unclear and the shop could add some improvement.

Originality: 5/5 The game is very original with bugs and fireworks! Nothing else to say here!

Ease of use: 4/5 The movement is simple, but there are a few glitches and bugs. For the currency, I do't have a euro or pound sign, so maybe you could have buttons instead.

Difficulty: 3/5  I didn't get what I had to do at first and the project notes helped, but to fully. When I learnt how to do it, I had some problems releasing the fireworks and I went on fire a couple of times. I didn't get how to get money!

Sound: 4/5 The game's sounds are okay, but it could need some ambience or music!

Overall Experience: 34/50 the game ends up being slightly boring, so the game needs LOTS of additions and tweaks!

TOTAL 75/100



COMBINED 56/100

Last edited by Borrego6165 (2012-07-11 03:40:54)

Has any 1 herd of jwd123

Scripts wrote:

Why wasn't my project reviewed?

i'll update the to-do list

Bugcraft:

Addictiveness: 9/10
The game's pretty addicting, to build a house, to dig deeper for ores, but otherwise you end up saying what else is there to do and stop playing.

Programming: 8/10
The game's programming is great, but there's a few glitches, the glitches that I found you already found.

Graphics: 10/10
The graphics are great, the generator works perfectly and I didn't find anything disturbing.

Originality: 2/5
Apart from Steve being a bug and also mobs, the game has the elements of the game called Minecraft and the title is also similar to that one.

Ease of use: 4/5
It's not that comfortable to move a and d and change the toolbar with w and s, you should change that to using 12345678 like i Minecraft and change space to w.

Difficulty: 5/5
I didn't find it difficult at all to play this game! Maybe for the controls, but that's for ease of use part!

Sound: 0/5
I don't think I encountered any sounds, I understand the you had limited space, but you can compress it more or decrease the space somehow.

overall experience: 46/50
The game's very fun to play, a bit like Minecraft and controls are a bit edgy, but still the best minecraft remix I found on Scratch!


OVERALL: 84/100

Thank-you for taking part in the Scratch Cat's Hideout 2 BETA testing. I have seen enough of how the system will work and I am confident that when the real advert thread 2 comes out it will be great! Your projects will still remain stored here so that they do not lose out on views, but we will no longer be accepting any more.

Thank-you.

Bit OS 1.0 in my signiture.

Closed by request of the topic owner.